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Turning Eighteen [complete] (Patreon)

Published:
2026-05-07 18:00:03
Imported:
2026-05

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So depending on how everyone liked this story and the format, I was thinking of moving on to chapter TWO... Little Lorna Loses Her Cherry!

Of course, a young girl has wild dreams about how she is going to first lose her virginity and you have to expect that Little Lorna's fantasy deflowering is extreme and comical!

Let me know what you guys are feeling or which projects needs some more love!

Thanks everyone for sharing this trip through this story with me!

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Tinhy

The format feels...not professional. I prefer comics, or the "Tales format". Also, where is page 5 and 6? Also part 2: why page 9 came before page 7? I have waited for you to finish this and show a completed version, which i do not see. The latest content has felt unfocused. Maybe im having a hard time following it. I prefer comics with panels and speech bubbles. Is that proven format so boring to you? I hope i don't sound harsh, i probably do.

Julia Sinope

I see your point. I actually found I enjoy writing first person POV and more story and images. I really feel rushed telling the story.

Julia Sinope

The entire story is in “Collections -> Tales of…”. This is a Daddy and Lover’s perk.

Aaron S.

My opinion is this hits super hard in the best way. And I always enjoy the writing this allowed for more of that. Adding layers, connecting the character’s backstory, and making it a fun journey.

Aaron S.

Idk constructive criticism is one thing. But also bear in mind a compliment goes a long way.

Aaron S.

I think this format really lends itself to the hi res. Or just takes full “advantage” of that.

Tinhy

I do not patronize. It does a disservice to the artist. Sinope also asked for feedback.

Aaron S.

So… safe to say you DON’T want to see the cherry chapter? All I’m saying is not so intense. But you can take that as intensely as you will.

Aaron S.

patreon-izing 😂

Julia Sinope

I think a mix of a more wordy format like "tales of..." along with large hero pictures may be a good compromise. I like how the "Senior School" story was presented however I hate writing in the third person POV. I want to write from the POV of Little Lorna. Everything seems more funny when I get to write Little Lorna's internal dialogue of perpetually being confused, naive and ignorant of the awful things guys are doing to her. LOL.