Rewrite... (Patreon)

I'm still on a bit of a break but I still want to get some movement on Sibling Rivalry.

I was not feeling good about the story so I rewrote it from here on in.  The new conclusion will soon be revealed but this was the original story (starting from where we left off)...

-Little Lorna angrily rebuff's Shag.  Shag is shocked.

-"Even though you were screaming 'Stop', your body was screaming 'I want to be your loving and obedient wife'"

-Little Lorna says "They were BOTH screaming 'Stop'"

-Shag: "Wow, this is some strong weed!"

-Shag is pissed off and tells Luke that she refused his proposal of marriage.

-Shag pays Luke with a big bag and Luke says its a shame to sell her ass for just weed.

-Shag gets an idea to whore her away to a bunch of Croations that will pay to bang her.

-Shag tells Luke to watch some TV and he will set it up.

-Luke watches TV in another room and muses how badly he's treating Little Lorna.

-After 2 hrs, Luke emerges to find Little Lorna gone.

-Shag says he sold her away to some sex slavers just like they discussed.

-Luke is mortified but Shag says they can get her back.

-They log onto eBabe™ and say that they will just have to buy her back and pick her up in Miami

NEXT COMIC... "FIND IT ON EBABE™"

-Shag flies to Miami with his dad, Shag and Uncle bob on his business trip.

-Little Lorna is being her normal airhead self and her slavers label her as defective.

-Shag and Luke are bidding on Little Lorna who is on a video feed for the bidders to view.

- Since she is defective she is only $75.

-Little Lorna is insulted she is going for so cheap.

-She starts masterbating and the bidding skyrockets.

-Luke gets the winning bid at $25,000 and uses his dad's credit card.

-Luke and Shag pick up Little Lorna and they get a fuck out of her.

-Later, Larry yells at Luke for running up his credit card on eBabe™.

-"What were you buying on a sex for sale site?" Larry Yells.

-Little "Loren" appears and says "He bought me for you!"

-Larry is crying tears of joy while he thanks Luke.

-Little Lorna gives Luke a little wink.

END.

I attached the layout sketches.  That's how I write comics!  Haha.  How ghetto!

I thought this was a sweet way to conclude what is a horrific experience for Little Lorna and get the whole gang out to Miami for his business trip.  It seemed fun but not a lot of dirty scenes as over 75% of the panels were of Luke and Shag.  I don't think it would be much fun for all of you!