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Shadows in the Smoke - Chapter 47 - Interesting Schemas

“The Republic thrives on industry, but industry is not everything in life. The nobleborn used to take huge swathes of land for their own amusement. The best of those have been taken and preserved by the state for the good of the People so that ordinary Citizens can enjoy natural peace away from the hustle and bustle of our cities.”

The Struggle for Freedom by Bjarne Midthun

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Ester’s mind was whirling as she made her way back to her room.

Was Lindholm actually planning something with the Republic’s government? Or did she know something was going to happen? She’d always seemed like she was a true believer in the Republic’s ideals, foolish as they were. So why was she so critical when she spoke to Ester? Her stomach sank as she thought over their conversation again and again.

Was Lindholm what she might turn into if she wasn’t careful? She wanted to be able to fight like her, to be a hero like her, but the woman wasn’t a normal hero. She was disloyal, she drank far too much and she hated the Empire. Or did she? She’d said she wanted peace. Was that just a platitude? Whatever was the case, she seemed to actually like Ester. Great Spirits only knew why. She wasn’t quite sure how to react to the idea of someone in authority actually liking her.

Ester opened the door to her room and absentmindedly began to set up her simple wards.

Did she really care what Lindholm thought of the Republic’s government? The woman wanted to fight and defeat the undead. The Empire wanted that too. Whether or not she hated the Empire almost didn’t matter in those circumstances and for all Ester knew, she might well be better at defeating the undead than the Republic’s current leadership. She had to admit that sitting there hungry in the cold fortress without any reinforcements didn’t make her feel much sympathy towards them.

She finished with the wards and pulled out her dagger. It was time to finish her Schema if she was going to be going on a dangerous mission. It was hard to focus with her mind still whirling though.

Ideas for aligning the runes flickered through her mind as she chewed over what Lindholm had said. Ultimately, the real question was whether she should do anything about it. Assuming she was lucky enough to survive the next few days anyway.

What had Lindholm actually said? Not all that much really and even if she did dislike her government, would she actually do anything beyond drunken grumbling? Ester suspected she might. The way people spoke about her and everything Ester had seen of her suggested she did whatever she felt like. She might win or she might not. She might be worse for the Empire, with the anger in her eyes whenever she mentioned the Undying Queen, but then the rest of the Republic hardly liked the Empire either.

With a small growl of frustration, Ester focused her mind, ready to start to engrave tiny runes onto her dagger.

Who would she even tell anyway? Would she go and tell Sonja that the Republic’s greatest hero might, just might, be plotting a coup? Based off her having a drunken moan while under siege. The idea was ridiculous.

That settled it. Let the Republicans have their own little fights. If, when, she got back to Nilrava, she’d tell Ambassador Hatami and he could decide whether to do anything or not. That was his job and then it wouldn’t be her fault if everything ended up on fire.

“Railati.” The first rune formed, tiny but perfect on the blade.

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The next day, when Ester was sat at breakfast, there was a tension in the air that she hadn’t felt before. Not that the canteen was filled with happy chatter at the best of times, but this was something different. Nervous glances were being exchanged between soldiers and the conversation was no more than quiet intermittent mutters. It felt like they were on the edge of a war, but one with each other.

She tried to chew her watery stew, just to make what little there was in it last longer. But it didn’t do much to distract her from the Republicans’ strange behaviour. Even the officers at her table weren’t talking.

As the mutters and glances stretched on, Ester couldn’t help noticing that there were looks being directed at her too. Not from the officers at her table, but some of the soldiers around the room were definitely watching her out of the corners of their eyes.

She was used to being stared at by this point, even with hostility, but this seemed more focused. It didn’t take long for the pressure to build up until she sighed and turned her attention to Loga. He’d been a bit friendlier to her since she’d saved his life and he was senior enough to know what was going on. Hopefully.

“Arcanist-Captain Loga,” she kept her voice, low matching the rest of the room. “What is going on? Why is everyone so, I do not know, tense?”

Loga grunted and glanced around before answering, just as quietly.

“It’s meant to be a secret, but the way everyone’s acting, news has already spread. Captain Lovas is dead.”

“Oh.” After the man’s rudeness to her, Ester couldn’t quite bring herself to express any regret. “I see.”

But he’d been publically rude to her. Her toes curled as she realised why people were staring more than usual. “It wasn’t—”

Something must have shown on her face because Loga cut her off before she could even finish.

“He fell off the walls. Without any witnesses, but don’t worry you were nowhere near there at the time.”

Relief flooded through Ester, almost as quickly extinguished by a flare of irritation.

“The first thing you did was check whether I had killed the man? I am not a murderer!”

“No, no no.” Loga held up his hands. “No one is accusing you, but we had to check, some people might unfairly judge you.”

Ester didn’t bother to do more than scowl at that.

“I think we’ll have to make an announcement to the troops. We’ll say it was an unfortunate accident and let it be known more discreetly that we’ve checked for foul play.”

“So you don’t think he was murdered then?” Ester’s mind went back to Vegard’s dark statement about Lovas’ cowardice after the battle and Lindholm’s distaste for the man. Had one of them killed him? It wasn’t hard to imagine Vegard doing it, but what about Lindholm? She shivered slightly at the unpleasant thought. She’d wanted to do something unpleasant to the man, but not to kill him.

“Hmm.” Loga stared at her for a few seconds before answering. “I strongly suspect he was. That or suicide. However, neither of those are something that we want to spread among the men. We will be conducting additional checks for possible vampires in the fort, I expect you could help with that, you’re more sensitive than most to magic, and making some quiet investigations. However, beyond that, there’s not much we can do.”

“I would be happy to help.” Ester’s mind raced, what might have happened? She could see why they wouldn’t want people to know if they couldn’t find a culprit. “You said there weren’t any witnesses. Was there anyone else nearby? Surely he didn’t go out onto the walls by himself?”

“Yes, naturally there were other soldiers there.” Loga thought for a second. “A few men from Lovas’ company. Good ones,” he lowered his voice even more, “for garrison troops anyway. Actually, you know one of them, a Cantrist-Sergeant.”

“Vegard.” Ester regretted saying the name almost as soon as it left her lips.

“Yes, that’s right. The one you fought the infiltrators with.”

She watched for any sign of a smirk or anything like that, but if Loga had any ideas about her and Vegard, he didn’t show it.

“Ah, well. He did not see anything?”

“No, he said Captain Lovas was carrying out an inspection and must have fallen, or jumped, while he was between squads.”

“And the rest of the soldiers agreed?” Ester did her best to keep her voice bland.

“Yes, why?”

“I was just curious, the idea that we might have someone or something picking us off from the inside is frightening.”

“Mmm.” Ester’s heart missed a beat as Loga gave her a searching look. “I’m not convinced there’s much that frightens you, Mage Mazar. Still, if there is anything, we’ll find it. I’d better be going.”

He gave Ester a brief smile and stood, leaving her trying to work out how to explain that she was terrified half the time without admitting that she was ever scared of anything.

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That evening, Ester made her way back to Lindholm’s rooms. This time the guard on the door waved her through without any hesitation and once again she found herself in the messy space.

Lindholm was sat at her desk, hunched over something. As Ester opened her mouth to announce her presence, the Arcanist-Colonel held a hand up for her to stay silent.

She muttered something, magic swirling around her as she did and then straightened up and twisted to look at Ester.

“Mazar, thank you for coming. Come here, I have something to show you.”

Was this what Lindholm had been going to teach her? Even if it was just Schemas, Ester couldn’t help a little burst of eager curiosity as he walked over to Lindholm and peered past her shoulder. The Arcanist-colonel had what looked like a thin gold bracelet laid on the desk in front of her, runes carved halfway around it.

“A Schema?”

“Indeed. Wear this and the lesser undead will struggle to see you.” The woman sounded vaguely smug. “Extremely useful for infiltration, but unfortunately limited in its application. It will not work on human eyes and if you make too much of a show of yourself then even a walker will see through it and once the effect is broken it will be useless until you can escape their sight.”

Ester’s eyes widened and she unconsciously leaned forwards slightly. It wouldn’t be much use in a fight, but if you were trying to sneak past the undead… If she could learn how to make that, she could bring the knowledge back to the Empire. Surely that wasn’t a secret the Republic would mind sharing? Especially if it was useless against the living. Assuming the Empire didn’t already know how to make something like that. She wouldn’t even know where to start though.

“Are you going to teach me how to make that?” She just managed not to say please.

A grating chuckle escaped Lindholm’s throat. “I could. I would not even mind, but I do not think this is the best one for you.”

“What? Why?” Was Lindholm just mocking her?

“The complexity of the arrays and precision required is beyond you.”

Ester felt her forehead furrowing. “How do you know? I am better than—”

Lindholm held up a hand. “Yes, Mazar, Ester.” Her tone softened slightly. “You are better than any of the Arcanists here. I do not like that, but it is true. That does not change things though. This is beyond your abilities to do perfectly, especially not with only a few nights’ practice. If you make the slightest mistake with this Schema it will be useless. It is not like, say… that improvised shield Schema you like to carry around where imprecision just weakens it. Failure will be absolute.”

“Oh.” Ester slumped, just a little. After Lindholm’s admittance that she was better than the Arcanists, it was hard to be quite so outraged. “Then why are you showing it to me?”

“Come now, Ester. You are cleverer than that. You will need one of these for the mission, so it makes sense to tell you about it. However, these I will make myself. What I want to enlist you for is somewhat simpler, although still beyond anyone else here I suspect.”

“What do you want me to do then?”

Rather than reply, Lindholm opened a drawer in her desk and pulled out a small handful of odd items and handed one of them to her.

Ester turned it over in her hand as she examined it. A leather strap attached to some kind of metal frame, with glass lenses in the middle of it. She looked up at Lindholm and then back down at the item, her breath quickening. The metal was inlaid with silver, just small bands of it, but that told her a fair bit by itself. Rather than ask Lindholm she looked more closely.

As she’d expected, tiny runes were embedded in the silver bands. They were almost too small to read, but not quite. Small enough that only someone truly skilled could have made them. She turned the goggles over in her hands as she traced the runes down the frame, all leading to the glass. She had an idea of how they came together, but they were incomplete as they were.

Pursing her lips, Ester held the goggles up and willed light into being behind them. A spark of excitement ran through her. It was only possible to see with the light, but runes were very faintly etched into the glass. She wasn’t sure how it was done, but she’d have bet her life they combined with the ones on the frame to finish the Schema.

Without realising her lips were moving, she went through the Schema’s components in her head. She wasn’t sure how long it took before she thought she had it, but when she looked up, Lindholm was sitting there looking steadily at her as if it had only been a few seconds.

“Well?” There was a hint of amusement in Lindholm’s voice.

“I have not seen anything quite like it before, but I think it would allow you to see in the dark.” Ester was about to start explaining her reasoning, as if she was in front of one of the Academy’s professors, but Lindholm waved it away with a casual gesture.

“Exactly. I call it a dark-eye Schema. Come, pull up a chair and sit with me.”

She barely waited for Ester to get settled before she launched straight into an explanation.

“I do not need you to understand every aspect of this, simply to copy, but you will need to see how some of this goes together if you are going to be able to make a useful copy. Now, look here. The frame provides for four arrays which work together to minimise interference and are each focused around a different baseline rune. The key to it is the array on the lens that acts as the centre of it all and unites the separate strands.”

Ester blinked and leaned forward as Lindholm rapidly went through an explanation, pointing out runes almost as fast as Ester could process them, with occasional comments on their positioning relative to each other.

It felt like hours, but was probably no more than thirty minutes before Lindholm stopped talking. Ester’s head was spinning as she tried to take in everything the Arcanist-Colonel had said. It made sense, in a way. She wasn’t sure she fully understood it, but she could probably copy the example in her hands, slowly.

Ester looked up to find Lindholm looking straight at her, an odd look in her eyes.

“Do think you could copy that? It does not need to be perfect, unlike the other Schema. Merely good enough.”

Ester hesitated, was she sure? She didn’t want to embarrass herself in front of Lindholm, but the challenge was calling to her. If she could copy it a few times then she was sure she’d be able to make her own in the future, if she had to.

“Yes, Arcanist-Colonel. I think I can, except for one thing. How do you get the runes onto the glass without ruining it?”

Lindholm huffed, opened another drawer and pulled out a bottle.

“I do not know what they teach youth at your Academy. Glass can be tricky, but I would expect it to be within your abilities.” She launched into a worryingly technical explanation of how to shape the magic that left Ester struggling to keep up.

“I… I think I understand, Arcanist-Colonel.” Ester felt about as confident as she sounded, but she wasn’t going to back down from the challenge.

“Excellent, I expected nothing less.” A subtle tendril of magic pulled the cork from Lindholm’s bottle and she took a swig. “Also, call me Sigrid. You are probably going to die with me, you might as well drop the titles.” She held the bottle out to Ester.

“Ah, no thank you, Arc— Sigrid.” Ester shook her head. There was a strange feeling in her belly. “Are you… are you sure you should be drinking if you are making a harder Schema?” She bit her bottom lip, half expecting an explosion at the gentle criticism.

Instead Lindholm just held the bottle up for a look and then shrugged.

“Probably not. I am still going to though. Now, you had better get to work. We do not have long before the Schemas are needed.”

Ester shifted herself so that she was at the desk too and picked up one of the blank frames. Great Spirits, she was going to die. Relying on a half-baked Schema that she had no real idea how to make and another made by a drunken Republican mad woman. Was this what adventures were really like?

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Comments

Marcus Martin

I bet when she gets back, she is going to ask Master Tabasi to go over both schemes with her in more detail. Loving the impromptu lesson. Siri’s does not seem to favor their chances. Oops, autocorrect, was supposed to be Sigrid…

Noah

“She wasn’t quite sure how to react to the idea of someone in authority actually liking her.” Tabasi, the Secret Inquisitor, her friend’s Grandmother, the Watch Captain…

TF Warden

Oh absolutely they mostly do, but that doesn't mean Ester thinks of it that way. Tabasi spends a good chunk of his time pretending he doesn't like her even though he does. Sir Vitaly teases her too much and is scary. Velxe's grandmother doesn't actually have any authority over Ester. As for Commander Savate, even he isn't sure whether he likes Ester or not.

TF Warden

Hey Siri, how do you rate me against the undead? :D

Marcus Martin

Oh, iPhone, thy autocorrect causes me stress.

Antony Claughton

Agreed, that occurred to me as well. Maybe it needs a “Republican” added before “in authority”. Although she is still clearly scarred from the academy.

Judson Parker

Poor Ester, her life revolves around making Schemas and now Sigrid has to go and bash her IMPRECISE improvised shield schema

Judson Parker

Wait until Savate has a war veteran on his hands, then he'll REALLY like her (sarcasm implied)

TF Warden

Lindholm just says things as she sees them :)

Thomas Heaton

So I'm pretty new to the this and have not read the comments thus far, but has it been confirmed or at least proposed that Lindholm is the unnamed woman from the prologue? Makes me wonder how long her grudge has been stewing ... from maybe the war 30 years ago? Or maybe from back in the time of the Sorcerer Kings (since her perception of time was off)

Fahnir

Will there be a 4th book, or does the series end at book 3?

Cameron Griffin

I wish there was an explanation of what exactly determines a persons strength level in this story. I know of the different levels and a vague sense of the requirements but it has never really been explained how people get to that point. Is someone’s level with the talent fixed from when it manifests? Does Ester have the same level of magic power but is just better at using it and more knowledgeable compared to the beginning of the series? I feel like I have no frame of reference for how much stronger Lindholm is than Ester , other than that Lindholm can strengthen her body and make more complicated schemas. It just seems like we’ve got a more complete sense of how Liches grow in power than how arcanists grow in power which seems backwards

TF Warden

It's been speculated in the discord (along with various other theories), can't remember if it's been speculated elsewhere. Nothing has been confirmed.

TF Warden

I've been pretty deliberate in not giving that in story. The Empire doesn't measure that sort of thing precisely so it's more just vibes for Ester. The Republic tries and so has a better idea, but even they will admit their tests are approximations and mostly used for military purposes. I do, of course, have a table in my notes with actual power levels, but no one's getting that unless they hack me. Everyone has a cap to their Talent when they're born, but will only hit their cap with training and continued use of magic. If I remember correctly, Jakob mentions plateauing and that he hasn't yet when he's explaining how the Republicans measure it. It's possible to test vaguely for potential, but very imprecisely e.g. "you've got the potential to be a Mage, but we couldn't say whether that'll be scraping it or the most powerful of your generation". Different people have different levels of raw power. Skill and willpower are also factors. Duke Marcni had more raw strength than Ester, but she was more skilled and had more willpower. Ester has more raw power than at the beginning of the series. I'd thought it was fairly clear by now that Lindholm outmatches Ester in both power and skill. Ester estimates her as considerably better than she is, but comfortable below Master Tabasi, based on what she's seen. But as I've said, has no precise way to measure.

TF Warden

I haven't decided. I'm (internally) committed to three books and have a satisfying conclusion to book 3 that would allow things to wrap up - I put a lot of value on finishing projects well. Equally, I have ideas for more and could continue. It depends on how they're doing with audiences and more importantly how I feel about them. If I'm still enjoying myself I'll likely keep going, if I'm getting a bit bored or fed up then I'll end it there.

Thomas Heaton

Neat! Tho I guess I didn't expect an actual confirmation, haha. More like curious what people were thinking, and I have my own pet theories and wanted to share. Thanks!

TF Warden

Go for it, I enjoy speculation and so do other readers. The discord probably has the most active discussion, although it then often drifts into inventing canon. Apparently liches are now all angsty poets.

Thomas Heaton

Angsty poets track. Also, if asserting your will is how a Mage does their thing, then if Master Tabasi is a full of themself, I can only imagine how the Archmages view themselves (ie: farting rainbows)

Fahnir

Shouldn't Ester also be asking for advice on improving her personal shield schema's???

Lecture Filler

Ester now learned make goggles that enhance your visual capabilities. Basically eyes. Eyes are part of the body. So she basically started learning body enhancment.

TF Warden

Well, kind of, but not really. They're just night vision goggles effectively rather than directly affecting the eyes themselves.

TF Warden

Probably, but there's a question of time and also of embarrassment. The socially awkward not desperately wanting to show your slightly shoddy work to someone scary that you look up to.

Fahnir

Your bending over backwards and doing back flips to not allow Ester to learn Body Enhancement...given she's intelligent, skilled in magic, and around lots of people using it doesn't really work... And yes, it's your story, but it no longer makes much sense...

TF Warden

Well no, I just have an internally consistent system and people. It's not something you can just pick up in a day or two. I've made that clear and night vision goggles are a completely different thing to internal enhancement.

Brendan

Feels like people are being weird about Ester not learning body enhancement yet. It’s not something you can just pick up in an afternoon. So there really isn’t a reason for Lindholm to teach Ester how to do it, there’s no benefit for her, even if she had a guarantee Ester would never fight the Republic in the future.

TF Warden

To be fair, it's something that's been teased quite a lot, but that's really meant to reflect Ester's own obsession with it which isn't entirely rational. To her it symbolises everything wrong with what she's allowed to learn, while the reality is she's happily becoming more dangerous by the day without really realising it.

Cameron Griffin

I agree that as a reader I can assume that Lindholm is more powerful and skilled. But that’s more because we’ve been told that rather than shown, Ester has been shown to struggle when fighting anyone who has body enhancement even if she is the better mage in other areas and we’ve really only seen Lindholm fighting away from view or using skilled but subtle magic, like Ester blasts enemies with lightning which seems very powerful but Lindholm fights a powerful enemy off screen so we don’t really know her tactics or how long she can utilize her magic. It’s just a bit frustrating at times because I’ve followed this story since reading a new player in the game on space battles when there were only like 10 chapters out, and this is a really good world and I like the writing and Ester but when I think about what has happened since the start of the story, Ester has become more combat capable and sure of herself to an extent but the main focus has always been on expanding the view of the empire and the republic rather than the very interesting power system if that makes sense. Still love the work and your writing

TF Warden

I get that that can be frustrating. Partly it's a very deliberate choice to keep the magic system a bit vague. I definitely lean away from the true hard magic type systems. For someone like Lindholm, it's also a deliberate effort to tease things out a bit. I want people wondering, how good is Lindholm, what does Ester's assessment of her actually mean in practice. She did demonstrate a bit during the siege and I promise you will see more of her abilities in the coming chapters.