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And here we start to see the first differences between this story and the older version :)

Content warning for this chapter: there's a bit of transphobia in here.

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Ma Vie En Rose (rough draft)

Ma Vie En Rose Zoe Storm Rough draft Prologue: Body Language I sat down on the closed toilet, scooting as far back, as close to the wall, as possible, spreading my legs wide; Rose climbed on too, kneeling down on the seat, all but hugging me to avoid slipping off and tumbling down to the floor....

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Steven Patt

“She was cut off Maria slapping her on the shoulder. “Don’t be rude,” Maria said.” needs either a “by” or a comma after “off”.