Early Access Release 0.1512 - Nozomi Rewrite Continuation (Patreon)
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Hello, cheesecakes (and people from the future, reading this post when it gets unlocked)!
This is another update where I've been badly disappointed by my own output. Elongating Nozomi's main path and adding more kinky scenes (while still keeping it out of sex game territory), while I still think it's a good idea, setting up the scenes and playing them out in a somewhat realistic way has been more challenging than I thought and I've again struggled to nail the dialogue and narration in a way I'm vaguely happy with. So, with her path only written up to most of day 5 I've simply gone and done what I did before with Sayori's new route and begun to outline how I think the path's going to play out in broader strokes and left it in the game for you to look over if you like. I do appreciate any feedback that comes from this, so don't be shy about sharing it!
On the art front things have also been a bit slow to be honest, although the assets I've been able to add have allowed me to include more CGs along Hiroko's route in the same vein as the other girls. I do encourage you to replay her route and check them out; her bratty looking up at the penlight expression is a personal favourite of mine xD
So yeah, that's it for now. I'm gonna be back in a week with another early access release, which should hopefully include some all-new art and further development of Nozomi's new path (I very much doubt it'll be finished, but we'll see what I can do). Until then!
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What's New
Added more to Nozomi's re-written route, up to day 5, and an outline of day 6
Tweaked a line or two of dialogue in the earlier parts of Nozomi's route
Expanded Hiroko's and Nozomi's basic CG sets, allowing for a greater range of expression
Most of Hiroko's penlight and couch scenes now use the new CG assets
Added a lot of expressions to Kyou's sprite during the earlier-written parts of Sayori's Alter path, which didn't have any
Fixed an oversight that had Hiroko's sprite show over her CG during the start of the Villainous Sleeper Agent path
Made some minor textual and visual tweaks to Nozomi's zombie path
Added three more pieces of music to Penlight's soundtrack (Only two are in use for now, during the new parts of Nozomi's path)
Word count is now over 158,000
Minor typo and grammatical corrections along Nozomi's route
Lots of little tweaks to the dialogue during Hiroko's route and the start of the Villainous route