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Hiiii, cakes!

Well, I finally did it. I crafted an ending for the Reversal story path! I should warn that it's extremely first drafty, especially during the final parts of dialogue, so there's still work to be done but at long last we have something to close out this thing! I hope it brings people some measure of satisfaction and that's it's been somewhat worth the wait ^^;

Next month, I'll be adding some much-needed polish to Reversal and then getting on with another, probably Hiroko-focused story path, so I hope to see you again with news of that real soon. In the meantime, please enjoy the new release!

UPDATE: New version 0.1578.2 adds Spanish translation to the latest script. No other changes.

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What's New

WRITING: Added a tentative epilogue for Nozomi's Reversal storyline

ART: One new CG for Sayori's Doll storyline

ART: Two new CG for Nozomi's Reversal storyline

GUI: Slightly reduced the black outline on the in-game text

Word count is now around 356,000

LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script

Minor typo corrections

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Andrew

Aw, that was really sweet! I do think I like the fluffier paths better than the darker ones, but I suppose that's just the sort of thing I look for with this stuff. Looking forward to seeing how improve it! If you were looking to beef it up a little...well, maybe you could have Nozomi practicing a much safer variant of hypnosis not just on Kyou, but her other friends as well? That's probably just my desire to see more of the girls hypnotized, but I understand if you don't think there's space for that sort of thing. Out of curiosity, what Hiroko route do you think you'll focus on next?

angelademille

I just think the dialogue is really rough in places so I'd want to improve it if I can, and there's an idea or two that might be added to that final scene but nothing too drastic~ As for Hiroko, I think I know what path I'll do but not 100%. I'll say more when I actually commit to something ^^;

Andrew

Understood! Looking forward to whatever's next!