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Rory likes it when Mari tells him what to do and treats him like.. well, a dog. Mari does it, cause he knows Rory likes it, but feels like a dork doing it.

Looking at it now, I think I should have changed the second panel(or added a panel) and tried to focus more on Mari's face to SHOW his embarrassment rather than just 'tell' through the word bubbles.

I also wanted to add more fx/onomatopoeia text to this page but I couldn't settle on what words to use. So for now I'm leaving it mostly blank. I'll probably come back to it later and add it in and maybe add/change the second panel. :)

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Kibeth

The dirty talk embarrassment is so real 😞

JuJuJulien

A moment on when a sub becomes a top and doesn't wanna talk like a top. x3c