Ghost Train pages 48 to 51 (Patreon)

Clayton is fucking pissed!!!

These were pages I was initially really shaky with, but I ended up really liking them <:)

As always, the big thing was figuring out the pacing. I feel like that's the the thing I spend the most time on in these. If something feels too fast it feels like it doesn't punch hard enough, while if it's too slow the scene starts to overstay it's welcome. I feel like I prefer something faster paced so I it's faster to read, but I slowed myself down a lot for this. In the original script, this scene was told in 2 pages. I ended giving it another two pages, and I think it works a lot better.

Don't know if anyone finds this part of the comic process interesting, but this patreon is kind of a development diary at this point so...