Makin true on my word tha double post lol (Patreon)

Wanna tweak it later during the actual edit but heres a preview of a segment during volcano skips introduction. The next draft is gonna introduce more montages like this during peoples wr grinds as i add more narratives to the mix, while im writing more into the second draft im realizing i also have more foreshadowing opportunities and stuff. Got hella notes on the margins for a bunch of additions. Seeing as it currently sits at 20 pages just at the sugar free era im wondering if the next might get closer to 30. Vids def about to be over an hour lmao