Second Audio Test: Better or Worse? (Patreon)

Retakes are going well, so the whole video should be WAY less awkward & harsh on the ears. Here's a second (final?) test to see if the audio is good. You should actually be able to hear the clarity difference between the two. If there's any issues at all let me know. I'd like to record this today with the same cadence & speed. Overall it should be better but since it's my voice it's hard to tell.