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Yora wants his life simple—do his job well, keep himself and his magic unnoticed in the desert city that's tolerated him for the past ten years, and pretend that the war he abandoned in another world no longer matters. Even if his job involves assassinating bureaucratic members of one of the empire's most powerful citadels, and hints of that distant world seem to be getting more noticeable, none of it concerns him. Until it does. Now nothing is simple, and to keep himself alive he may need the help of an enemy he fled from a lifetime ago.

Chapter One

Citadel map

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

Chapter Five

Chapter Six

Chapter Seven

Yal Temen map

Chapter Eight

Chapter Nine

Chapter Ten

Chapter Eleven

Yal Temen map (updated)

Welcome to the first chapter and a second landing page for Mirage; the first book of a trilogy, or maybe part one of a really large 3-part book. Unfortunately I can't pin this one to the top of my page as Incidence is currently taking the one-pin-allowed spot, but since this one will be updated more sporadically that's probably okay. Every chapter will get a separate post, but all centrally linked here. Chapters of this will go up when I fail to finish an Incidence chapter, so there will basically always be something once a month.

As mentioned before, this is a tangentially L&S related story with some overlapping characters (mostly much later) and one specific incident that ties them together - but otherwise this is going to read extremely differently right from the start, and is intended to be understandable without having read L&S (just you might get a little more from it if you have). It's also more mystery/thriller/action/espionage oriented of a story, although there are certainly very important central relationships as well, because that's what I like to write! I will say it does frontload a lot of information, but intentionally.

I'll also have other supplementary fun stuff, like a translations document (because welcome to a brand new place with some additional new fake languages everybody) and maps, things of that sort as they become relevant!

And disclaimer in case you're new here: I do not and will never use generative AI in any format or function to do anything at all, but especially anything with writing. I like an em-dash and I was here first, so I'm gonna keep using them. I find what we colloquially call "AI" abhorrent and almost immoral to use, and simply won't.

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Atlanas E. Kildarin

Ooooh. I think you mentioned this one a while ago. I’m excited to see it!

Teromain

I did! I actually posted a super rough snippet from this chapter back in 2017 (yikes), so it's been in production for a while lol. Also it's quite a different story. hope you enjoy!

uno

I love how you used Yora’s strategic prying into that lady’s home as a way to reveal the things he himself is anxious about, the scene is big brain just from a plot perspective and that extra layer of exposition is crazy. I’m also curious about how Yoru treats the character he gets into as a whole other person, is this just him getting into the role or is it related to his magic? Speaking of magic, he seems to use his entities differently from the (other?) clar (like with modifying how his voice is perceived in the same language instead of modifying how the language is perceived in his normal voice). Does he have different types of entities or would the clar be capable of doing that too if they knew to try?

Teromain

Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! Yora is a pretty different character from my usual in that...he's really smart (which is sometimes intimidating to write). I'm really glad that strategic prying scene worked for you! That was all definitely a lot of the point of it. His abilities work a little differently than any seen before like in L&S, but it's just a variant of how they can work overall - there will be a lot more about how he uses/thinks of these disguises! He is just a clar like usual, just hasn't been said which one yet~

Atlanas E. Kildarin

Finally read the first chapter! (Again! 😆) I know I have read it the first time you posted it, and I think there were definitely some differences, but I am not 100% certain. Going to read the rest of it!

Teromain

If you mean the first time the chapter was posted in like 2017, there are definitely a lot of differences! It hasn't changed from this actual post here, though. I hope you enjoy it!

Atlanas E. Kildarin

It’s so interesting to read the perspective of a character in this universe who is so much smarter than Alan. 😆 Yora is such an interesting character, (morally grey job but he’s over here doing small good deeds subconsciously like it might make everything balance out) and I keep wondering how he and Alan would react to each other. Compared to Alan’s story line, when does Mirage take place, or is that technically a spoiler?

Teromain

loool poor Alan, but yes Yora is a lot smarter than him! some natural and some learned by necessity (the morally grey aspects are pretty heavy in this whole story). they would probably not get along great, at least at first, since Yora would not want someone coming at him with any sort of emotional intuitiveness and Alan would be real put off by how insincere and abrasive Yora can act. they aren't without some shared personality aspects and attitudes, tho! they could bond, with effort. it's definitely a spoiler (but very much revealed) where their stories are taking place in relation to each other :)