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Not entirely happy with how I paced this, but that's how learning goes I suppose. I did also decide to drastically change the trajectory of the story partway through as well 😅

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Roasche Enrock

I personally think you’ve done pretty well. I love this story and dynamic.

Flux Y.

Now have the tiger (i forget the name i think it starts with a D). Just run and jump off the dock, naked again, on top of the wolf.

Timespacetiger

come on Levi!He is waiting for your confession,don’t make him disappointed 。Xp

Alain

Oh Levi buddy, you get an A+ for effort but you probably could have done it more elegantly

Baroncito

I love this! The Determination! ❤️🔥 Pls keep going, I'm so invested!!

Eppy NWS

We do indeed need another aerial bombing by The Great Dachi's taint.

Eppy NWS

The beauty of worked-up courage being popped by eye contact and "are you for real!?"

Memyx

Oh noooo, this is too cute. 🧡

Kuru Chilion

Don't feel too bad about how it's paced, if it means the comic will be finished within the next year or two then most should be all for it 🙂

Jarrod

Out of curiosity, what was the other original trajectory of the story? Loving how it's going!

Cale_82

This just dawned on me, sorry if I'm being pedantic. It was just bugging me. Shouldn't that be a courage status bar, rather than a bravery one? Bravery is observed and measured from the outside. We see someone perform admirably in the face of danger—whether physical, social or relational—and we comment upon their bravery. They managed well despite apparent peril. They were brave. We know nothing of their inner experience. We don't know if they stuffed fear down and forced themselves forward, numbed themselves to fear and operated in a pure cognitive capacity—or if they faced their fear, held it tenderly and decided to move through it. That's courage