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Split the epilogue up into 2 pages so it's not too rushed. 1 more page left! Thank you so much for reading!!

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ArtieYote

HE GOES FOR ANOTHER KISS YESSSS

Flux Y.

Is the middle right panel, the 3rd panel, with the mid left being the 4th? It just looks like it should be the order from the heart eyes but I'm unsure

Raw Fish On Rice

I don’t want to come off as rude but this page is quite confusing and feels a bit rushed. I wouldn’t mind if it was in the oven for a bit longer. Still cute tho, would love to see more of them and the final page.

Eppy NWS

I see a lot of other comments complaining about things seeming rushed and confusing... But I feel like the message is so simple it might be getting missed: Dachi is a big himbo, and can be very dommy when he's real into it. Levi is a big sweetie, can take anything Dachi wants to dish out and is into it. So if Dachi wants Levi to just shut the fuck up and kiss him, he is absolutely going to grab Levi by the cheeks and kiss him. And Levi Absolutely loves that shit. Hence, Levi has been short circuited into just laying there and enjoying the afterglow snuggled up to his big hunky friend savoring the warmth of his body and the tang of his spunk. Dachi is just happy his friend seems happy, none of his clothes got ruined, and his nuts are way lighter.

JustEki

Summer's just starting, but "Summer Won't Last" won't last! How tragically beautiful. I love the cute flopped over posing in the last panel :D

TegirVaru

🥵 and 🥰. really good. first time is always a mix of actions and feelings. i like that it wasn't straight buttsex, that would be awkward and unrealistic (like most other comics). i think you hit the scene really well, and i look forward to more of these two. they are just so sweet and you do emotions so well. it doesn't have to be color or complicated, i just love the story and how you tell it (and some spicy scenes mixed in 😅l

Lucidius

Levi really loved this huh cute heart eyes x3 hopefully wont be the last time he gets to help dachi ^^

Gayme Guy

Smoochy kiss! 😘 Also love the small detail that Dachi’s eyes are pink on the last panel -w-

Feng

What a journey! Thank you Bon for guiding us through Dachi and Levi's moment of discovery and this precious moment of theirs. Honestly I am more curious about what happens next--the next page and what you may have for them in the future if you decide to pursue it!

Diego

Man, that kiss was so sweet! Also may I ask what's on Dachi's neck? It's deity of some kind, right? Is Tiger a spiritual man?

Cale_82

Oh fuck! I know those eyes 👀!! Those are the "did we just become boyfriends‽" eyes!! I think Dachi just had his switch flipped

九號球No.⑨

now maybe is levi's turn😍❤️🥵🍆

Jarrod

Whoa one page left? It's actually ending? I'm happy and sad!

Megapuppykun

They're so fucking adorable. I hope this bodes well for them :3

Clarke Deveau

I need more of these 2 I am so sad it's ending

Kaden Wolfe

How's the progress on part 2?