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The first four pages of my new comic. I want to produce more pages faster, because there's a lot of story I want to tell. Because of this, I'm trying out a more pared-down style that is easier to produce regular work with. I hope you guys don't mind that I want to explore this side of myself as a creator.

I think things will definitely change as pieces fall into place. Maybe certain aspects of the art will tighten or slacken as they need to. I feel like maybe I'm trying too hard with certain backgrounds, haha. That's why I consider this first chapter to be something of a trial run.

Another thing I need to be on the lookout for are good neutral fonts for things like chapter titles. I'll definitely be doing some minor edits on this chapter once the overall style of the comic solidifies.

I know it's super lazy of me, but the first page is a homage to the Evangelion manga's opening. I feel like it's an efficient, if expository way to springboard Levi's character, and that manga as a whole influenced my art deeply when I was small. 😅

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Howl . ⋆✦

Aaah can’t wait to read more!!

Gayme Guy

So Levi is Shinji and Dachi is Toji? 😆

megafaunal

I really like this simpler style you're trying out! Excited to see more

Milatora

I love these new comic pages!!The line is clean and rhythmical,Levi's expressions and movements are vivid,I'm really looking forward to seeing the subsequent story!

TegirVaru

this is awesome, and if it's more productive for you then that's great too. i find color doesn't make much difference for me. the writing and that is being brought forth is my fav part. the characters are just as vibrant and alive that way. i look forward to more 🥰

Lewd Liege

Ohhhhhh I'm so invested already

Lucidius

More levi dachi yay

GiygasSadness

Hey ! I hope you're doing well, I just wanted to tell you that the first reason I decided to follow you on patreon was because I was impressed by the quality of the story and the emotional connection we can have with both Dachi and Levi. Your writing style is so good and makes you character so realisitic and alive ! So let's just say that I'm really hype for this project ! Also, take all the time you need to figure out life and dealing with the anxiety of living. I understand pretty much what it feels like to feel the crushing pressure of existence. But know that you are doing great. Even if you are just surviving, you are doing great and should be proud of yourself. Even if you think you're barely making it. You continue to do art, take the time to explain your situation with us, decide to change to a new style of comic in the hope of expressing your feeling through your creativity and art... that's something you should be proud of ! Continue doing art and comics for yourself, I'm sure most if not all of your follower will be so happy and invested with it because you'll write it with all your guts, feelings and emotional maturity that is the first reason I joined on the spot ! Take care of yourself. And sorry for the novel 🩶

Brigantine Westmoor Productions

I can't wait to read more of this! Just because it isn't spicy doesn't mean there isn't a good story to be had here.

Cale_82

This is so great, and tbh, I dig the monotone look. It's fitting as Levi never felt joy, happiness, etc and that can make it feel like the joy and as a result the color has been sucked out of life. After he met and befriended that big, goofy, and amazingly handsome tiger 🐅 suddenly the world was now colorful and full of life. Make sense?

Wesley Woodson

Bumped my sub just to see more of these boys 🥹

Feng

Decided to go with a prequel, I see! I think this is a great opportunity to explore these characters and what made them click together. Also I can hardly tell this is a 'pared down' style--not to say the style in the comic wasn't as detailed, but your style is recognizable and still great! And if this allows you to tell more stories at a better workflow, ultimately that's what matters. I can't wait to see how this unfolds!

DrPepperFiend

A) I had to learn how honest to be with the high school counselor, then I had to age out of my awful home environment and triumph out in the world away from all that. I AM the vibe here, and it's interesting to see it captured here. B) What you've drawn here feels very complete/polished/done. I know you gave us very detailed full-color pages before, and I love that, but in terms of "what can I take away for the sake of speed and still make great stuff" you seem to have arrived at a very strong VALUE for us. The pages look great. I hope the speed savings are helping you. This seems typical for literally all of comics for all time (level of detail vs full color cover, for instance).

Bonfire Demon

Thank you!! Yeah, as much as I really want to get into the more intense present-day stuff, I feel like maybe building a solid foundation with the past might be for the best. I'm glad that, outside of color, not a lot had to be visibly sacrificed. With the adjustments I made to my workflow, I was actually able to produce these four pages in less than a week. Not that I'm trying to keep that momentum necessarily, since maybe I was a little manic at the time. But it's promising all the same.

Bonfire Demon

It's great that you can identify with Levi right off the bat here, haha. I'm glad you aged out of toxic environments. I'm also really pleased to hear that you find good value in where I've found myself for these initial pages - thank you so much for the encouragement!

Cale_82

Is it bad I really see myself in Levi? Like we have the same thoughts on our lives?