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New Learnings (Patreon)

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2021-07-04 20:43:14
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2026-06
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I don't normally do fantasy science fiction in areas such as mind control, but I was urged to write something and the idea of this perspective of it appealed to me.

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Sammy C

This is another inventive twist on Pygmalion. I do think that the premise needed a little more priming. A little more back story. Just enough to have the reader lean in to the motivations of both characters. Maybe I'm a romantic but I do think Sammy wasn't entirely clueless about their relationship and maybe had an inkling of what the experiment might be about. Still, lovely story.

Maryanne Peters

As I said, I avoid fantasy, so how can this be real? I think that Sammy had a crush on Jeremy, but did Jeremy have a similar attachment. Sammy trusted him "to the extent that I had faith in his abilities" but what would Jeremy do? My guess is that Sammy happily submitted in hope (?)