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Jill is willing to reconsider the Rabbit's offer out of guilt, but they're not there anymore.

Nothing really "happens" in this page, and nowadays the thought of writing a page where nothing happens causes me to recoil. I'd never really write a page that's just Saffron being sad. Buuuuut, maybe that's an over-correction? There's something to be said for letting a moment breathe, and I wouldn't cut this page. 

The lore post for this page was a super-edgy song written by Riley, a breakup song written from the POV of an abusive boyfriend which is honestly a little incoherent. It's basically a parade of red flags about Riley the lyricist, but we'll see more about what he's up to next page.

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Anne Welborn

Nothing wrong with a good 'moment breathe' page.