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Chapter One, Page Four (Patreon)

Published:
2020-05-14 04:41:26
Edited:
2020-05-20 05:04:55
Imported:
2026-06
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(EDIT 3: Stoker asked for one more revision because he's a NITPICKY JERK but also because the text in the word balloon in panel four was a little difficult to read)

(EDIT 2: AND ALSO FIXED A WORD BALLOON TAIL ISSUE this should be the last edit AHAHAHAHA)

(EDIT: Fixed a very minor problem, eliminating a tangent with the top word balloon and the panel border in the final panel.  If you don't know what that is don't worry about it it's an art thing)

Sorry this one ran a little late, but LOOK at all that detail that went into it!!  Jonas is a madman, I tell you.  A MADMAN!!

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Max and David (edited)

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2026-09-12 12:00 they should give her some clothes poor thing
2020-05-14 04:42

Max Kinne
>>36879744

ok i dont want to be that guy but there is a tangent with the word balloon in the last page you might want to correct that before this goes publc

Alarm Frog

This is some top tier banter

nakedpenny

Can you point it out? It might be the extreme sleep deprivation talking but I don't see it

nakedpenny

Oh, no, wait, nevermind, I see it now

nakedpenny

Our writer bat was EXTREMELY proud of himself for that X)

Tygepc

Man, this is a level above. How will you keep up this pace! I mean, the colors, the shading, so many characters! Jonas! What are you doing to yourself! How many layers? How many attempts? How little sleep?! And there's so much going on! This is the equivalent to "I just read it for the articles." There's so much more to see there than a simple glance. Love that retort at the end. Not many people would be able to think that clearly while under that much pressure and panic. Very cool, Penny! Way to keep your wits about you, even if that just about all you have. . .^_^ Thank you, Stoker for the fun dialogue and scene set up.

Tygepc

As he should be!

nakedpenny

Well fortunately not EVERY page will be this eleaborate! We kinda wanted to hit the ground running ahahaha

nakedpenny

Thank you, though, for all your kind words. This is imho the best page yet, and I think we're really starting to hit our collaborative stride

Tygepc

But the bar has been set! You can't stop now! You wouldn't want . . . disappoint us now, would you? Seriously, it's not just your opinion, but mine as well. This page is amazing. It's pretty incredible in itself you've "synced up" as well as you have so quickly. Static art commissions are one thing, but collaborating like this? Well, you would know better than I how rare that is.

DavidXNewton

These are amazing - she’s so cute... and so naked :) I love the detail of her covering herself with her tail.

Anonymous

Talk about fleeing with your tail between your legs.

nakedpenny

That was a personal favorite too X) Thank you!

nakedpenny

Couldn't have said it better ourselves X)