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Hello all you lovely patrons!

We're starting off the month with a WIP look at pivotal flashback sequence in Book One. If you read the original pass, you'll recognize this is where it left off. The scenes were heavily reworked, but the general premise remained the same, so now you can pick up where you left off! (kinda, sorta)

Thank you again for your continued support, and we hope to have more to share with you soon!

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Callum Quinn

Thanks Ian, so excited to see you and Bryce’s work come to fruition!

Callum Quinn

A few lettering errors: The Knight says “I’M been waiting” And the main girl says :I’ve been hiding my entire … as a hume etc.” Was that supposed to be “My entire LIFE?” And sometimes the “I”s are indented in strange places, which might be a stylistic choice, idk. But it made it hard for me to understand with what inflections the characters were speaking. *also, I don’t know how to spell Hume, so ignore that part. Otherwise it looks great!

Steven MacKnight

It looks so good! Loved the he's a one man army YEAH BUT IM SUPPOSED TO BE A GOD moment