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GNM3 mini: A Short Bet complete! (Patreon)

Published:
2026-06-10 15:41:44
Imported:
2026-06

Content

The end!

I probably should have added these extra pages on Monday to make a big finale, but my mind wasn't in the right space. Also, some of you might be disappointed that the story doesn't continue, but I'll explain that after I break down the pages.

98: I love the shot of Vrie getting dressed. The angle makes her breasts look massive. But to be fair, they are here.Rather than list Vaqua and Vyse's heights changing, I combined the two with their color and fonts given they're the same.

99: I love the shot and expression on Vrie laying down. You can tell how disappointed she is in herself and how the day went. Also, more British slang!

100: This is the same as GNM3 072.

So why did we not get to see Buni struggle at her small size? Why did we not see more of Vrie being big and sexy? The short answer is that this story takes place within GNM3, so I had to end it at the same place in GNM3. That means Buni and Vrie had to be back to normal.

So you might be thinking, why not make the story longer? This "short" story was already significantly longer than I wanted it to be. Shorts are supposed to be around 40-50 pages, but I kept wanting to make Vrie smaller and smaller, so I kept extending the story. I had to stop myself and set a hard limit of 100 pages, so if the ending feels a little rushed it sort of is.

But don't worry. I learned a lot in both how to make these sorts of stories, and got a lot of feedback from you guys. As it releases on DeviantArt, I'm getting even more feedback! I already read every comment and I can tell a lot of people enjoyed seeing the extreme changes in this one.

So that's the end of GNM3 mini: A Short Bet. I hope you enjoyed! I'll have an update on Friday detailing what sort of things I'll be doing between now and GNM4.

Comments

Simpsons Reference

I enjoyed the story quite a bit. In the future, if you want to go crazier, maybe you can make some "what if?" Scenarios

BUSCUIT Industries

Well, that's basically what the "dream world" stories are of the first two mini comics.

H4G62

This story is so good! It really shows how honest with herself and well-mannered Vrie is. Though I slightly missed where all of Vrie's "energy" went when she shrank in the second-to-last image.

Simpsons Reference

Oh yeah thats true. I have the memory of a goldfish sometimes

BUSCUIT Industries

On the previous page, she restored Buni, Vaqua, and Vyse. She basically reset everyone.

Rotom

This change scene is definitely very cluttered, I do like the color combo for double changes though! Shame we didn't get more smol Bun, but I get why and there's always the future! Vrie laying down is definitely a great shot! Change shot is good as well, though definitely another one where I would have loved the individual frames as a bonus post. I do think it's funny how her final size head is right in her big size breast, but is barely a fraction of the size. Guess this is the last we'll see of 5'3 Vrie... damn, you'll be missed. I do think the ending could have used an extra 2-3 pages, but I'm super thankful it went on for as long as it did! This is probably my favorite comic from a for fun perspective. It's hard to say favorite overall just because it doesn't have story stuff.... or new vaqua, but it's really fun and I think there's some good stuff to learn from this. I'm glad it was received as well as it seems to have been since that means we'll likely get a lore more small stuff in the future too mixed with the big! I might do another more full writeup tomorrow, but we'll see.

BUSCUIT Industries

Thanks for going back and offering feedback on everything! I was pretty sure you would like this one. The end certainly is a bit cluttered and rushed, but that's because I really didn't want to go over 100 pages. But it only got there because I kept adding to it.