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Hey everyone! Hard to believe it's March already.

I wanted to let you know I am working on Ultimate Fairy chapter 3 in my free time. I should have it completed by the end of the week.

Following that, I would like to switch back to Ultimate Pirate and continue that story.

In the meantime, you're free to offer feedback and suggestions for what you'd like to see take place in all three of my stories going forward.

As always, I appreciate the support and feedback! I hope you have a wonderful day!

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JoshL1294

Ultimate pirate: A) Ben creating moves for his other forms, and saying their names (Ex: Echo-Echo's wall of sound, and SONIC DOOM). B) Ben collecting memorabilia to commemorate a venture on his journey (could also work for ultimate fairy). C) Ben vs The Admirals; Heatblast vs Aokiji, Articguana/Big chill vs Akainu, and Chromastone vs Kizaru. D) Ben gets Funkfreed, the sword elephant from Enies Lobby (I think it's appropriate because EVERYONE got a boost that arc, new moves, gear, and emotional growth. PLUS, I just think a sword that can transform into an elephant is wasted on a scumbag like SPANDAM! -Ultimate Fairy; A) I'm not much for Ben becoming an Anodite, the way Pyro handled it turned me off to the idea (He became an Anodite, showed off he could use magic, did nothing, and got tortured). I prefer the Ultimate 10, where he's projecting barriers and footholds. Though you could also have him form constructs of weapons, and have the mana affect his forms (EX: Ultimate Terraspin). B) I can't stop thinking of Ben using Clockwork to repair the collateral damage left behind by the others. That way, the guild's reputation improves, and there's more funding available since theres less to spend on repair bills. Thank you!

JoshL1294

OH! Also, will you be doing the filler arcs/ movies? There were some epic moments I feel Ben can really show off (The later parts of One Piece are my favorite parts, because it's just the crew taking on a Dynasty Warriors game amount of enemies!)

Ultimate10

If it makes sense to do a filler/movie arc, then yeah, I can do them.

JoshL1294

I'm mostly alluding to Strong World, Film Gold, and Stampeede. I feel like there are too many Dynamic Scenes/fights and callbacks to miss.

andrew34

i would suggest doing something similar in "lost hero" that i really liked, by having ben not join the main cast immediately, but have him explore the world, a bit so he can have more context of the setting, because we as reader know what fairy tail, and the straw hats are, but ben does not, or what the world government, or celestial dragons are. example being if ben saw the straw hats, and the marine fighting, all ben would see is pirates attacking the military, and would more than likely help the marines, since we as the reader know about all the good the straw have done, but ben doesn't know that, also it's interesting to see ben interact with side character outside of the main cast.

andrew34

I think the one movie and character, he should add are film red and uta, because of her sad backstory and her relationship with shank, and luffy.

andrew34

Ben vs aokiji would be an amazing fight, with Ben challenging aokiji ideals, and questioning why he would work for an organization, that would promote such injustice, and aokiji telling him about his wish to reform the marine, if he becomes fleet admiral, and if the pirates win the world would fall into chaos.