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Trucking along. As always, your thoughts are welcome.

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Talc

Set my alarm a bit early this morning to squeeze some reading in before work. I only wish I set my alarm even earlier. Snuck the remaining pages in at work. I'm really enjoying the direction you've been taking the story.

James Strozier

This character is amazing. The story is truly taking my full attention. I have nothing against the original creator of th series but the childishness/anime high-school like premise makes it a much harder book to get through. The formula you have for this book you are creating just has me waiting for more and more and hoping to see Ben's life as he becomes an adept hunter.

Lena

Woooof, favorite chaps yet. Firstly, because I absolutely adore these two, their personalities and resulting dynamic are just sheer delight to me and I could enjoy them all day long. Secondly, Ben using ancient philosophies from Earth to troubleshoot his rather unique predicament is fascinating and I'm hyped to see what using the Tao parallels will come to. (Thirdly, I desperately need more of the militant space wizardry, but that likely goes without saying) Still love, much thirsty.