A quick note (Patreon)

In case you missed it, I did significantly update the previous advance chapter and then posted it a little later, so if you only read that version, it might be worthwhile giving it another look.

However, I'm currently having a bit of a stupid moment regarding this story. I spent like a week on revisions for the chapter, and I already feel like the one following is off, too, and want to revise it, and I'm worried about this turning into a situation where I post multiple advance updates here that aren't just rough in some of their wording and grammar, but outright different than the final version, which would be really bad. 

I'm not sure if I'm legitimately having problems with writing, or I'm just getting hit by neurosis as a result of so-far pretty low popularity of the story, but I'd like to take a day or two to fix it and maybe reassess a couple earlier parts of the story, and then post the advance chapter as normal.

I know there's only a few of you donating, but I feel like I've been a pretty lousy patreon person so far and this is kinda explicitly - if only a little - going against an actual offered goal, so if you're frustrated by it, I apologize and won't blame you if you wanna unsubscribe. I get pretty self-conscious about my writing, so even getting just a handful of donations has been tremendously encouraging so far, and kept me sticking with this project.