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I Will Never Forgive You chapter 4 (Patreon)

Published:
2025-07-23 13:37:36
Imported:
2026-06

Content

Due to patreon constantly auto-flagging this story as violating this or that community guideline, and then not answering my messages about it, I'll just link to the story on Ao3 instead of posting it here.

You can read the story here.

The next chapter will be an intermission of sorts, from the point of view of Gloria. I worked tirelessly to write a character that is even less sympathetic than the main duo. It will be fun fun fun times!

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Comments

Stephen Wells

Enormous props for the line: "I am not seething," Beverly said, seething. There is no subtext here. There is only dommetext :)

HARK!

A character even less sympathetic than the two? Neat. Personally, I think it is very useful to be capable of writing unsympathetic characters in a way that is convincing. Where it is understandable how this character functions, not as a plot device but as a (fictional) person. Over time, I have come to resent the often insisted upon "advice" that a story must have sympathetic and relatable characters. I see that as simply wrong. Not that a story with sympathetic and relatable characters is bad or lesser. My feelings are specifically on the claim that one has to have such characters in order to have a good story. In reality, people exist that are, depending on who is asked, deeply unlikeable and hardly relatable. So, why can't one have fiction with such people? I consider it more important to have characters that are understandable in how they are as they are, regardless of how they are. One could have unlikeable characters, but they could just be a bunch of unlikeable ways to behave, without a human person in it. I don't think "evil" is a substitute for personality, nor is "good" for that matter.

yello

Had me rolling

reddest

I am so obsessed with this story and you just keep feeding me! I'm eating good!

Huge Cook

Is it wrong that I genuinely feel sorry for Beverly? Her life is a hell of her own creation

Huge Cook

Oh, you fuck. You amazing spinner of fiction. You actually made my heart hurt for that self-hating bitch. The hell that she created just to convince herself that she was "normal" and the lies that she tells herself. It's painful. I want more. A novel. A movie. A serialization. I have to see where this goes. I'm officially obsessed.

Faelin

*sniffles while slow clapping.*

hellenberg

Absolutely lovely once again. One small note - I would love to see Beverly tied up and tickled. It feels like a natural way to torment a former bully (especially if she did the same to Stella when they were younger). Also I'm into that sort of thing.

The333Man

I have little faith in Bevs and Stella ending up together, but I would love to see Stella meeting Victoria and having some meaningful interaction with her.

Anorm Al Scarecrow

I literally subscribed for a year just to say that I hope this story continues and gets a proper conclusion.

Funduffy900

I have this strange thought of Stella bringing Beverly to therapy of some kind.

Dan

hooked on this.

clementine

waiter, waiter! more toxic yuri please!!!

Robert Martin

> Finally, after a long pause she simply said "Eat it." Just eat it (eat it), eat it (eat it) Don't you make me repeat it (oh, no) Have a big muffin, have some nice snatch, You better like it, it's a fresh batch!