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My Day Sucked! Now, Let Me Be A Sad Burrito! - (GFE , Making Your Sad GF Feel Good) I had a really hard day and i need you to help me feel better plz ;v; do u have any ideas? oh, i certainly wont say no to a little massage... wait, where are your hands go-OH! o-oh, yeah, that uh that's definitely a way to make me feel better >///> no, i didn't say stop! please... keep going...(and for those of you asking, yes I filmed this myself with motion capture!)Content Tags: GFE, story, funny, handy, POV, fin gering, reversecowgirl -----SCRIPT CREDIT: https://scriptbin.works/u/Burwinkle_Hendershot/f4m-your-girlfriend-is-now-a-burrito-script-offer

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Feel Me Up, Fill Me Up (sad burrito mel)

Feel Me Up, Fill Me Up (sad burrito mel)

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Remix Kun

Oh my did gonna be good always lover your 3D recordings god dayum

Nickss409

Ok so overall the concept is cute and you did a good job with the roleplay. Some constructive critisim would be the video did seem a bit jankey with cuts and introducing concepts that didn't really go anywhere but wasn't a big deal. The disembodied hand I get is meant to be representative of the listener, but with how it randomly appears and disappears abruptly it came across kind of distracting. Again still well done overall but definetly something to keep in mind in the future

Nystemichu

Well this is certainly one cute and grumpy burrito. Unfortunately, like one made from Moe's Southwest Grill, this burrito starts to collapse quickly once the customer gets a hold of it, and only some of the scattered ingredients are worth shoveling with a fork for. The acting here is the first thing that's evidently stale. For someone who's supposed to be sad for having a bad day, the tone that Melody uses throughout is a bit too whimsical; kinda no different from a regular performance. With how silly the script is, a full-on dramatic reading out of a Spanish soap opera would certainly do the scene more harm than good, but at least a bit more melancholy or poutiness in the voice would add more impact to it. There are some moments where this happens and it works, but the consistency isn't constructed well enough to keep the first act together. There is still a fine delicacy for the eyes in this though. The motion capture is a prime main ingredient shown here, and it spices things up quite a bit. It's fluid, juicy, and shows off some good-ass meat. The hand garnish here and there is a nice touch (that pun not intended), but the placement of it and the inorganic way it appears and disappears throughout the scene gives the dish a weird taste. It's also a shame that the sauce is a bit scattered about unevenly, as in the audio source file seems to have suffered through some heavy noise suppression. Just as things are getting hot and giving Mel too much of a good squeeze, noise suppression comes in to cockblock our taste & earbuds, curtailing any momentum being gained. The burrito is still passable to chew and all, but if this is what's being offered to encompass "sad-GF" sweetness, I think I'll just pass on the taco joint and go straight to the bakery instead.