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Feedback Post | MIST [v0.3] (Patreon)

Published:
2020-05-15 12:29:02
Imported:
2026-06

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Rule nr. 1:

No hard feelings. I will listen to any and all criticism without complaint.

Give me your feedback in the comments if you want to. I appreciate it and the game get's better as a result.

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Bakapineapple

Fun update. Only problem had was the dialogue in Robin's scene. A bit uh awkward to put it lightly. No need to cycle through all the different words its possible to use.

Jacob A

So I had a chance to play it - and take a look at the implementation of the easy mode. I think the game is going in a great direction. However I do have two points of feedback, I'd like to share: First, it seems strange that the story seems to be focusing on leaving for the city very soon, but we at the same time we are planting crops and (soon) building defenses at the lodge. This feels confusing. Secondly, and perhaps the biggest problem with the game, is the script. It's not bad, but there places where it shows that English is nor your first language - the dialogue feels wrong. If you want, I would be happy to take a look at the script for you and send you a revised edition - I'm no professional writer, but I might be able to help you out a bit. Send me a message to let me know! :)

daniel

only played the public version of it and only now gotten around to becoming a supporter on patreon but i can say that everything jacob A said rings extremly true. i would also be super willing to help you out with the script! other then that i love this game and i want to see this game get better and better!