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Rule nr. 1:

No hard feelings. I will listen to any and all criticism without complaint.

Give me your feedback in the comments if you want to. I appreciate it and the game get's better as a result.

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Shark Tooth

Would it be possible to make a separate slider for the squishy sounds in the lewd scenes. They are a little too loud in my opinion. The lewd sounds seems to linked to the music volume.I like the level of the sounds of their moans.

Shark Tooth

I'd also like the MC to go faster and harder (bigger thrusts) into the ladies, when they are near climax.

Shark Tooth

Kudos for the butt jiggle, much appreciated. The exploration of the city was almost like being in a movie, very well done. Looking forward to the next version :)

395games

I am aiming to provide that in future scenes. It is actually a bit harder to animate faster action and I am still learning to make that look good. But I just picked up a good book about animation and from a few tests I made I am confident that I will be able to do that very soon.

395games

I think a separate slider would be very difficult to do, if not impossible to be synchronized. This problem basically comes down to my mixing, which needs to be done with more attention. I need to get more consistent here. But the good thing is that changing the sound levels of already done scenes is quite easy and only a bit time consuming. I think in the end I judt have to pay more attention to the mixing and then I should be able to get it right. Sound is really not my strong suit, but I am slowly getting better.

neocount

So, a couple of things. First, you need a new graphic for the shotgun when you use it. Second, and this is purely a subjective request or opinion, but... well... one of the reasons I like Mia so much is her style. I would very much have preferred she left her socks on during sex ;)

Shark Tooth

The animations themselves have improved a lot. I don't want, everything I write to sound so negative. This is the "suggestion box", so I guess there's bound to be more constructive criticism than praise. There's also something about the finish. The new scene with mia is a bit better in this regard, but the jump between the sex scene and where the MC already came. Feels like being blue ball'ed out of the climax. If there was a little end animation where we could see the MC cumming in one of the girls or where he sprayed the cum from the cum shots. Would make it feel more rewarding for the player.

Shark Tooth

I currently have the music (slushing sound) halved in the sex scenes, as the volume of the slushing seems more appropriate that way.

Linkadion

Played through it and its fantastic expect one tiny thing: THAT IS THE MOST MEANEST CLIFFHANGER IF HAVE EXPIRINCED IN A WHILE!!! I want me demonic possesed Stepsister...

MarmaD

Another excellent episode. I echo Shark Tooth comment and give high praise and admiration for Mia's butt jiggle. The city is nicely atmospheric and the animations certainly give you a more engaging feel than standard VNs. Minor grammar points to note (not being picky just see how much effort you have put into the game and thought you might want to address them) the below spellings adress = address suplies = supplies sudenly = suddenly reson = reason better to safe now = better to save now

395games

I'll look for those in the script. Thanks for pointing em out.

395games

Yeah, I admit. This one is mean. But I just HAD to take it, the opportunity was too good... Sorry <3

395games

Hmm, I guess nothing speaks against Mia wearing her socks in a future scene. I am sure I can do that.

Sync

Suggestion for a change of description: when you have sex with Robin on your return from the first expedition into the city (Robin is in the PC's room looking for a map of the city), the PC describes Robin has having a "sadistic" body. That's probably not the best description, as I'm sure Robin doesn't want to cause pain in any way. Suggested alternatives might be "sexy, "slutty", "sensual", "seductive".

395games

You are 100% right. Seems like I am an idiot, of course I meant the opposite. No Idea how I overlooked that.

daniel

i liked the update alot! the city was really well made and it built a great athmosphere. the only thing is i felt it was a bit short. idk if thats just me but it felt like that. other then that keep it up! i love how the game is turning out

Wirehead

Great update, the cinematic transition the first time you explore a new place are great, really add to the atmosphere and tension. Plot still as engaging as ever, nice too. Congrats for the works, the game really comes together with the constant improvements. I however found two minors weird inconsistencies (spoiler alert, I guess): 1) When Robin is wounded, it's still possible to spend the evening with her, talking on the couch like nothing happened, which is definitely not supposed to happens, I suppose 2) When Mia offers to smash open the keybox on the evening you come back from the city, the MC states it would be unwise to do it now and that should be done tomorrow in the kitchen. However, you can still immediately go in the kitchen and do it on the same day. This actually doesn't change anything, though, so it's not like it's game breaking.

John G Busia

So, I downloaded the latest version 0.4a, but I'm experiencing a problem where after first returning from the city, the game keeps saying I should talk to Mia and that she's giggy about it, and when I click on the couch near the fire, it automatically acts as if I chose to talk to Mia, but no special scene happens and I just get the same generic dialogue about nothing extraordinary happening. Is that by design or is a bug? I also noticed that you can still explore the city, with talking to Robin and getting the map, and game acts as if she'd already given it to you. Robin also disappears at night, prior you returning to the city, probably because the game doesn't seem to trigger whatever event that's probably suppose happen by spending time Mia after first return from the city. Also, that I'm continuing from a 0.3.2 save

395games

I did some testing and realized that I made yet another logical error here, I guess I need to make a post about it, I missed a lot of things on this update. So yes, you aren't supposed to go into the city without the map, but I forgot that you could advance time to the morning before briefing the girls, which kinda breaks the cycle I had intended. The special dialogue wit Mia should trigger after you briefed them about the city. And that should work even if you went to the city first. It is tied to its own variable that doesn't interact with those other events. For any further help i would probably need a savefile.

Bakapineapple

Great update as always. Cant wait for the new girl and the depravity we can expect from her. Got some small notes: Trees in the ski lift animation are so obviously a flat image. Maybe replace it with a bigger one so we cant see all those seams or make something if u feel you have the time. The city felt great and i loved the atmosphere. The animations and such were also great. Though maybe they should be saved for bigger reveals? LIke instead of every single step forward you get one, but only at bigger locations. Not saying you need to do this, but maybe that'd be better later so we dont get tired from too many/you can spend more time on each bigger reveal I also noticed some clipping in the animation in the tunnel, right before the hospital. Im missing some distortion around the girls' pussy with each trust. It just looks like two objects clipping into eachother sometimes. A hard task, but id love to see if you can improve the scenes even more. Overall, love the work. Keep it up.

Cardiotherapy

I love the worldbuilding! Keep it up! :)

Tibor Pongrácz

Hi! Nice story, I'm really curious what is behind it. Feedback: after drinking tea no girls are interested to have fun, am I missing something? :)

395games

There should be a scene with Robin directly after you drink it for the first time.

Jacob A

So I finally got around to writing this. First of all - this update was awesome. In terms of immersion and feel, the new content does a very good job. Renders and visuals in general give off a great sense of atmosphere. At times I almost forgot I was playing an H-game. I still want to see even more of that though - both in terms of actual H-scenes and interactions with Robin and Mia. There's just so much potential in further developing the characters and their relationships - I really feel you could expand on this without needing to drive the story forward. Minor QOL suggestion: Make the "leave dungeon"-button easier to find.

Ikedia

how can you view exclusive scenes?

Ikedia

ty ending up finding the link but wouldnt open for some reason

Ikedia

also phenomenal game one of the best of the adult genre i have played to date.