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Working on the page layouts for what is currently Chapter 4: a family fishing trip. The text is certainly not final but I hope this offers insight into my direction.


I want to balance the 'eyewitness guide' style with the books narrative.

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ZCochraine!%

Absolutely great, you get a sense of the character who’s saying this. Just 👌

Astro-Aladfar

Totally agree. A reported-speech-type narrator fits perfectly to a birrin storytelling.

Astro-Aladfar

The cache must be extremely airtight in order to preserve plastic for milennia. Does that mean that they, others or others before them traded plastic from the more advanced birrin people abroad?

alexries

The cache protected it from UV and severe temperature changes. lots and lots of buried stuff out there.