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Waifu (Patreon)

Published:
2018-02-26 08:44:48
Edited:
2018-02-27 06:06:32
Imported:
2026-06
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I'm afraid that the text is full of mistakes, so correct me if something sounds wrong.

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Yargh

Give yourself to Slannesh, waifu. All will be well...

Shape of Thought

"Go with friends in a raid" = "on a raid" "As if nothing had happened" = можно убрать "had". "Absolutely human face lost" = "absolutely lost your human face", полагаю. "You will not be full of Chaos" = понятия не имею, что подразумевалось. "my parents support!" = лучше "my parents support us!" "And when your campaign" = "and when is your campaign?" "Are you leaving a family" = "your family" or "the family" "He hired a mercenary" = "was hired as a mercenary" or "became a mercenary"

Webster

I'm anticipating a pt2 to this where she forgives her now chaos spawn husband because of the awesome tentacle sex he can now give her.

Brian

dude I just read it as if your characters had russian accents and it made perfect sense, i wouldn't worry too much about the grammar

flick

Спасибо!

Shape of Thought

They are Norsca, though, not Kislev. And better grammar is always, well, better. When you are attempting to write poor grammar intentionally, you should know what you're doing.

jaster

I want chaos spawn-chan to be happy