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Animeplayer

Hahahaha, I take it that's Warhammer Fantasy portal. XD

Shape of Thought

Исправления/более благозвучные варианты: "Look there, the gate to the material world is open!" На крайняк, "has opened." Аналогично, "but there is another gate open" или "but another gate opened too." "Chop off" - значит "отрубить", лучше "chop up" - "порубить". "will be glad to any advice" - "FOR any advice" "we're always glad to new followers" - "FOR new followers"

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Спасибо)

James Schweitzer

"Last time we had to do it...without them." Lol, hey man, own that! You're Slaaneshites, there are no boundaries!

Gapaot

Cut him some slack, he's new to this Slaanesh stuff.