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Kabalite girl (Patreon)

Published:
2019-03-02 06:47:05
Edited:
2019-03-02 08:49:11
Imported:
2026-06
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Content

Something about a kabalite girl that Dimetrius have met in the forest.

Let me know about mistakes in the text.

Also some scraps to some videogame.

UPDATE: Attached version with 2 colored frames.

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Comments

Charles A Hershberger

can anyone who knows English and lore tell me if "feed my soul" is the correct usage?

Charles A Hershberger

I hope this helps panel 1 I have lived for so long that it has become harder to feed my soul. Life is boring and there is nothing that causes me to have an emotional response. panel 3 That's Much better. But I have seen it a thousand times... panel 5 not sure on this one That was fun. But I guess racing is not one of my interests (she did not enjoy the hobby) That was fun. But I guess I lost the race (she did not win the race)

flick

Color wasn't supposed for this fast scrapy strip. Consider it's like a noir) But I think I can color those 2 frames^^

Oinkbane da Subtle

I noticed in panel 4 that “pleasures” is a little misspelled. Also, “did you ever ride a jetbike” sounds a little odd. Personally, I would have written, “have you ever taken a ride on a jetbike before?” or “ever ridden a jetbike?” Hope this helps 👍

Hedrah

"Mon-Keigh" ...Mon Keey...Monkey.

The Silver Socialist

It's weird for her to perceive Dimetirus as a monkey. Is she not an undead human?

Oinkbane da Subtle

She’s a Dark Eldar, basically an evil space elf. Mon-Keigh is the eldari word for human.

Anonymous

Okay I just want to say that I love her and would very much so like to see more of her.

Blood Raven

Sucy-lite girl. Sorry she just reminds me of Sucy from Little Witch Academia, and she's just adorable from the first time i saw her.

Brian

Ooh, more please

Muddy

Oh Bayonetta looks amazing!

Richard Reynolds

I love the kabalite girl~ Something about that sleepy-eyed face is just adorable to me.

Brandon. A

Oh my. Now I want to see more of her, with her new boy toy trying to make her happy, as in heart happy. :) Great work!

Brian Kim

Love the last panel, she found joy of being alive again.

flick

She can't take Dimetrius home because of plot) Thanks!

Anonymous

Emo is not good for you health i guess

Brian

You’re right, they do share a resemblance. Maybe I’ll watch some of that tonight.