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Faulkey wasn’t dead.

Professor Graham confirmed it by walking over to check on him. He didn’t have any broken bones either, but the professor performed a quick healing spell, and said that Faulkey would likely need to sleep off the rest of the headache Lyra had given him.

Graham then cautioned Lyra about using too much force in that final attack, but said her miscalculation was within a reasonable range so he wouldn’t deduct points.

From his follow-up wink, it was assumed that Lyra had passed the class.

As Byron and another of Faulkey's friends carried him to the infirmary, Lyra was instantly the center of attention. 

The observing crowd had burst into applause upon Faulkey’s confirmation of life, and they now rushed at Lyra, with the twins crushing her in a big bear hug. Maus got in there too, patting her on the back, and some of the first and even the second years said things like, “Wow, way to go,” and “That was incredible!”

It appeared that Lyra was pretty well-liked in their class, which made sense given how helpful she was. Even if she wasn't, most people knew how hard she had worked for this and were happy to see her succeed.

Arielle hung back, not wanting to join the crowd who stuck beside Lyra even as Graham called the next duellists to occupy the circle.

She watched Lyra enjoy the accolades, with a small smile sitting on her lips. She was proud of her friend, of her bravery in accepting that battle, and her strength in overcoming her prior limitations. 

Lyra had fought an inner war and won against her mental block. As such, she had reaped a massive reward.

“How did you make that spell?” a voice said. 

Ari didn’t notice Professor Llywyd coming up next to her, but she had expected this conversation. They were standing apart from the crowd who were either talking to Lyra or watching the other duellists.

Arielle thought through her response.

She could, of course, speak in generalities about the whole process, but she could not give Llywyd the specifics. 

“Through meditation,” she answered. “I learned that by meditating and increasing body heat, one can impact the reactivity of Vitae, which can then encourage them to bond with each other.”

“It cannot be that easy,” Professor Llywyd said. "The reactivity of Vitae is one of the most researched topics in the magical world. There have been many, many mage-scientists who attempted to make Vitae-only spells, and all of them have failed. You did it in a week."

"It was longer than a week."

"It's far less time than anyone else can reasonably expect to develop such a thing. The last magical breakthrough we had took years. This...I cannot believe it. It cannot be as easy as body heat."

“It is. It just would not work for anyone else except for Lyra. She has a peculiar set of circumstances that make Vitae more susceptible to being controlled by her.” Vitae was especially devoted and obedient to Lyra. It did her bidding even more than it did Arielle’s.

"I’ve thought this before, but you sometimes talk about Vitae as if it's a living thing.:"

Arielle shrugged. "It helps to see it like that."

A shout from one of the combatants distracted them temporarily, and Arielle caught Lyra's gaze for a brief second. Someone was talking to her, but while she smiled at them, she raised her eyebrow in question at Arielle. 

Arielle didn't know what she was asking exactly, but she shrugged in response.

“The two of you will come to my office later today and show me exactly how you meditated to discover this," the professor said. “Then we will write a paper on it, a proposal that we will submit to the Institute. In that, we will include your creation of the rune as well. You can, of course, retain authorship, and I will be there as a supervisor to ensure you're using the appropriate terms and tools. I'll also have the dean summon your guardian so we can discuss the splits."

“Okay,” Arielle said distractedly. She was back to watching the battle, which looked like the Luxa-Massa boy was winning. 

"Arielle."

"Yes."

"Look at me."

When she glanced over, Professor Llywyd grinned, lowering her chin a tad.

“I don’t think you understand the gravity of what you’ve done here, as well as what I’m proposing,” she said. “You have taken a powerful, difficult spell and adjusted it such that it can be achieved at a lesser tier with only Vitae essences. A Vitae-only spell. You have, Arielle, done the impossible. I cannot impress on you enough how exceptional and unprecedented this is and once we reveal it, you will instantly become the most interesting and famous scholar in the magical world. Noble family heads across the globe will clamor to meet you. Scientists and companies alike will attempt to poach you. You will command influence. They will write about you in journals and offer you wealth beyond your wildest imagination. I would love to get a cut off that, of course.” She chuckled, then coughed mildly. “What I’m trying to say, Arielle, is that this is a very big deal, one that I don’t think you’re treating with the importance it deserves.”

“Oh.” Now that she thought about it, that sounded like more publicity than she had expected. She contemplated Elric's response to all this and decided swiftly. “On second thought, I don’t think I want to do any of that.”

Professor Llywyd's smile slipped. “You don’t?”

“Yes. I don’t have time.” 

“Time?” the professor practically sputtered. “Time? If this is about the rest of your classes, I’m sure the dean will give you time off to fulfil your other obligations. Your discovery is far more important, and you're already far ahead of the class in most of your lessons, anyway. You can afford the break.”

“Yes, but I don’t want to do it. I do not want that much attention on me. It’s optional, right?”

She hoped so. She had only done this in order to help Lyra stay at the academy, not to become the most interesting scholar in the magical world. She was supposed to be keeping a low profile. Elric certainly would not be happy about this, and she didn’t want him to be upset at her again. “I would like to keep the truth about that spell a secret between us if possible." Luckily, they were so far out of earshot that no one would hear them. 

“I mean, yes, it is your choice, of course," Professor Llywyd said after a moment of hesitation. "But making that choice is unthinkable to me. I mean, Arielle, the impact of such a discovery…and the rune...what you've done to Lyra is nothing short of–"

“I didn't do anything to Lyra," she said. “I simply alleviated the consequences of what had already been done to her, allowing her talent to shine. Lyra is the one who worked hard to achieve that spell, and it would not work for anyone who wasn’t Lyra.”

The professor shook her head. “Yes, I understand all that, yet we can glean certain things from your creation of the spell and Lyra’s condition, and build on that to perhaps create a new set of Vitae-only spells. This is only the beginning–”

“No, thank you.”

“But Arielle, you should at least–"

“I don’t want to do it, Professor," she said, fixing her gaze on the professor's pointed boots. “That’s final.”

The professor did not speak for some time, as a groan of defeat announced that the fight was over. 

As Graham told the combatants what they did right and wrong, Arielle risked a look at her professor once more. 

Professor Llywyd was staring straight ahead, lips puckered, protest etched in the drawn lines of her face. Her clear light blue eyes seemed to flash, but she managed to draw in a breath, controlling her emotions.

“I see,” she said. “Well, I respect your decision, though I do not necessarily understand it.”

“Thank you,” Ari responded, turning her attention back to the celebrating Lyra.

Lyra caught her eye again and beckoned her forward, but Ari didn’t truly want to be a part of that crowd right now. It was better that she hold back and congratulate Lyra when she was less occupied.

"You might try to downplay what you did," Professor Llywyd said quietly. "But I know you changed Lyra's fate. Changed her life. You have the opportunity here to do that for more people. So, I truly hope you change your mind." 

"I probably won't," Arielle said honestly, causing the professor to sigh deeply.

***

Professor Valeria stared down at the embossed letter in her hand. She had wiped her glasses several times before reading it again, hoping the words spelled out by the elegantly lilting script wouldn’t change.

Dear Valeria Stephanus

We have never been fortunate enough to make an acquaintance, but I am told that you are the current mentor to one Arielle Blacksoil, who will be attending the Iverson Ball as a guest of highest honor. Arielle will become a member of my family sometime in the near future, and as such, I have taken great interest in her education and would like to meet you in person.

We hereby invite you and key members of your clan as distinguished guests. I would hope to have a private conversation with you there.

Regards,

Lord William Wesley.

Duke of Iverson, Lord of the Golden Lands.

Valeria's hand shook. 

The letter had arrived by raven this morning, and she had been staring at it ever since she had opened it. She had known that this letter would be important, just by the nature of the pale, silky vellum it was printed on, and glowing golden ink that had been used to write, not to mention the imperial red stamp that only royals used.

Rich gilded silk had been woven and beaded around the entire page, and it likely cost a lot of coin to produce, but it was far more than that in value.

The Iverson Ball was where the elite of ascendant society mingled. The High Ascendant himself had attended on more than one occasion. It was very exclusive, and people worked for years to secure invites.

She had never even hoped or dreamed that she would ever get one, yet it was in her hands.

She, a member of a disgraced clan, was invited to the Iverson ball.

She knew, of course, who she owed that to.

Thank you, Arielle.

Valeria hadn’t been in attendance at Family Day, but she had heard through the grapevine that was the professor’s lounge that Lord Wesley had been quite taken with Arielle. He had cleared the hall just to talk to her. It seemed from the letter that Arielle had told him that Valeria was her mentor. 

Valeria felt that she was overselling her role a bit. 

There wasn't much she could teach the young genius. Arielle was extremely self-motivated and was very good at teaching herself most of what she knew. Valeria's job was more of an advisor, and she only needed to clarify things for Ari now and again, or inform her of a better way to do things when it came to spell-crafting.

She had even somewhat given up searching for another mentor for her because Arielle looked like she would soon surpass all the ones Valeria knew, and Valeria did not have the means to reach the Masters beyond that. 

And now, with very little effort, Arielle had just secured an exclusive invite and a private meeting with one of the most important men in ascendant society. 

She couldn't even imagine what her father would do if she told him. 

She herself didn’t know how to react. It had not yet sunk in.  Every bone in her body was frozen in shock and gratitude so powerful it consumed her. 

She didn't move until the door to her office opened and Professor Llywyd walked in, looking very displeased.

“Explain to me something about your mentee.”

“Arielle?” What a coincidence, considering she had just been thinking about her. 

“Yes." She began to pace. "She has achieved something...impossible, to say the least. I mean, I can barely believe I’m even saying it, but…Arielle created a spell using only vitae orbs, and Lyra used it."

Valeria had thought nothing could shock her more than the letter. She had thought wrong.

When Llywyd had thrown the gauntlet a week ago, no one had expected Arielle to actually pick it up. So much so that Valeria had gone to talk to Llywyd afterward about how unfair it was for her to expect Arielle and Lyra to achieve such a thing. Llywyd had explained Lyra's affliction to her and why she could not continue in the program if they did not find a workaround. The dare had been an attempt to get the girls to see that.

“How did she do it? Well, I have no clue." Llywyd laughed again this time with a tinge of hysteria. “It's only a topic that scientists and researchers have spent their lifetimes arguing about, a problem that they dedicated their lifework to solving, with absolutely nothing to show for it. And she did it in a week. A week, Valeria! How am I supposed to explain that? How am I supposed to accept it and move on? She doesn't want to pen any papers, doesn't want to patent the spellform. She wants me to keep it a secret, as much as something like that can be kept secret anyway. She doesn't want her name attached to the discovery. How am I supposed to accept that? Lyra's aura was purely green! There was nothing else there. Just Vitae!”

“Calm down,” Valeria said, because it looked like the other woman was on the verge of ripping her hair out from sheer madness. She was shocked as well, but she had gotten used to Arielle surprising her by doing things far out of the ordinary. 

Yet this was on another level. 

When Arielle had made that rune that helped Lyra cast [Spore Burst], it had been a jaw-dropper. But while that was unusual, it was plausible. Sometimes, they had beginners with impressive bloodlines doing extraordinary feats and Valeria had seen how special Lyra was just from her Vitae scores. It was why she had worked so hard to bring the rest of Lyra’s cores up to speed. 

So Lyra casting that spell made sense in hindsight.

However, a spell made only of Vitae had literally never been done before. It was impossible to even fathom such a thing. 

“When the two of you meet again, you can ask her to draw the spell script she used,” Llywyd said. “If you don't believe me, that should prove it. The girl just achieved the impossible, something that will cement her name in history, and she doesn’t understand it. She refuses to share it with the world."

“It’s her choice at the end of the day," Valeria said.

Llywyd looked at her like she was crazy. "DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT I’M SAYING, VALERIA?"

"I do." She winced at her bolded tone. “But Arielle doesn’t strike me as the type who wants to be recognized for all the things she does. She doesn't work as hard as she does to achieve recognition. She simply does it because she wants to.”

“Yes, but why would she explicitly not want a reward? She seemed fine with writing the paper with me at first, until I broke down how much publicity it would entail."

“Everyone is different," Valeria said. "Some people pursue enlightenment for its own sake and don't want the stress of ascendant politics."

Llywyd stopped in her step, rubbing her chin.

“Unless she’s hiding something,” she commented.

“Like what?"

“I don’t know. There’s something very strange about her. Something beyond her obvious genius. I have friends in High Water. That’s close to Fenway. Perhaps I should look into her background a little more.”

Valeria frowned. "That would be a gross and unnecessary invasion of privacy, Llywyd.”

“Yes, but she has given me no choice." She shook her head. "I must know everything there is to know about Arielle Blacksoil."

***

Arielle sat with Lyra at the dining table. They had already eaten, but this was the only place that could contain the crowd that followed Lyra, demanding to know how she did what she did.

They had been surrounded by people all afternoon, and when a few left, more came to take their place.

Lyra had spoken to first years, second years, and even some third years who had returned from their test and heard what happened.

Arielle tuned out most of the conversation. She probably shouldn't be here, and her time would be better spent doing other things, but whenever she tried to escape, Lyra would look at her in a way that suggested she wanted her to stay.

So Ari waited with her thoughts until Lyra said, “I don’t know why you guys keep asking me about the spell. Arielle was the one who made it."

Arielle finally looked up from her hands, noticing that everyone was staring at her. 

"I thought [Spore Burst] was already a spell," someone asked.

"It was, but it was too difficult to achieve without a rune. However, Arielle managed to adjust the spell till it was an adept tier, and she taught me how to cast that. She's the only reason I won."

"I wouldn't say the only reason,” Arielle said. “It wouldn't have worked if it weren't you and if you didn't work so hard."

"You worked hard. You barely slept for several nights, and you spent hours trying to get my cores to do what they were supposed to do. Not to mention you're the one who figured out what was wrong with me in the first place when all the professors and healers gave up." Lyra's eyes got alarmingly misty, her voice croaky as she said, "Thank you for not giving up on me, Arielle. Thank you so much."

"It's okay," Ari said. "It's what friends do."

"No," she said, beaming at her. "It’s what best friends do."

Arielle gasped. She gripped her thighs. 

This was monumental. 

She had never had a best friend before. 

She had never even hoped that she would gain such a title because she didn’t think she was capable of it. Even though she had made friends, she knew she wasn't doing a great job at keeping them. Somewhere deep inside, she had been waiting for the moment that Lyra and Maus would realize that being friends with her wasn’t worth the effort. Lyra had many other friends who she didn't have to explain simple things to, who didn’t irritate her and miss social cues, and who understood sarcasm, emotions, and all the other things that best friends were supposed to.

Friends who had time to spend with her like the twins, who were also funny and knew lots of interesting things about plants. 

Or Maus, who was generally pleasant to be around.

But out of all of them, Lyra had called Ari her best friend. 

“You mean it?” she asked Lyra, almost afraid to ask.

“I mean it,” Lyra said, and she hugged her. "I couldn't have done any of this without you."

Arielle tried not to be stiff at the hug. She even patted Lyra’s back. "Probably, but there's a 0.1% chance you might have."

Lyra's laugh echoed in the hall, and many others joined in.

"Arielle." They were interrupted by a new voice. It was Lord Wesely's son, the one who was interested in human hearts. 

"The Dean sent me to get you," he said. "You have a visitor."

Comments

VestedStream283

> It was Lord Wesely's son, the one who was interested in human hearts.  Arielle continues to be hilarious

Riveria

Damn I thought I liked Ilwyd but I guess not 😢 Tftc!

Marc Savage

Wow 40 likes already. Not surprised really, its my favourite story

darkmuch

Really Llwyd? She isn't excited enough so you drive her to change her mind. Then when your mishap backfires you want to dig into why she stopped wanting to work with you and expose whatever made her pull away? This is how you never get invited to write a paper with her, and get blacklisted by a master/archmage candidate.

Hellnhavoc

Ugh I can’t stand nosy people like that. Just let her be. I hope our partial elf friend pays her a visit.

Marshel

Oh no, everything is spiraling out of control! Will Ari have a frustrated outburst and teleport herself away without thinking of a destination? Maybe caught up with Elves again, who will wonder where her oath went?!

Javad

Aww cute

Marshel

I still like her. Part of the charm of the story is that no only does Ari not understand people, but people don't understand her.

Marshel

My view is that waiting for Ari to graduate, while taking note of all the things she does, makes the most sense. I mean, what's another 4 years when no one has done this thing ever?

Zeke

Crying.

foldedcorners

I find it a bit odd that both professors didn't think to publish the paper anyways, but exclude Arielle's authorship for anonymity reasons. I supposed their shock would be a contributing factor as to why they didn't think of it, but when they specifically talk about her being fine writing the paper but not the publicity I thought for sure they'd suggest the obvious solution.

KanadianKitsune

Making a Vitae only spell? No biggie. Becoming someones best friend, on the other hand...

David W

Fame, fortune…eh no thanks. BEST friends…gasp!!

Earth Grumble

Is there anyway to kill the Dukes son off sooner…maybe a poll. Tragic toenail clipping accident? Slipped on some dog poo and hit his head? While yelling at birds, they pooped in his mouth, and he died of WhatchaBirdy?

Sinfinite

Why can’t Ari just say she was working on it with Elric? Elric is an arch mage, so she should just hide behind his reputation cause it makes sense for an archmage to make research breakthroughs.

mezeka

Ari found it wonderful to be labeled best friend by Lyra. How precious a moment for her. Professor Llywyd is becoming a thorn. Too much curiosity for Ari’s origins. She will learn Ari’s secret that she can see orbs. I hope Professor Valeria will alert Elric.

Staples01

True but they'd have to site their sources on what EXACTLY they'd be doing. She hasn't explained to anyone she sees the parts of magic let alone it's more atom like electrons. She doesn't know how to explain it that won't give her secret away. The best they could right is "trust us, you can't do it to recreate it but it's possible."

Riveria

It's the last part about her invading her students privacy that I don't like but we'll see how things turn out

Aaron Fechner

The use of multiple POVs added a lot of depth and was enjoyable to read. At times, though—like with the shift to Valeria—I found myself briefly disoriented, and a quick reintroduction could help keep readers grounded.

CPTincognito

Getting nearly choked to death: i see, so this is death Getting best friend status: 🤯😱🥹

Marshel

What would they write? They don't know how Ari did it.

Marshel

She has to think of the lie first.

Marshel

Poor lady is spiraling. There's a lot of self-dealing and reputation shenanigans. It's not just that Ari said no, but that the Professor cannot then increase her own status as a result.

Marshel

I expect unexpected enemies. "I don't want to marry anyone."

Michael T

I gotta say, I'm pretty confused about Elric's social status right now. Aren't there only like 15 archmages, making him one of the ~15 most powerful spellcasters on the planet? In a world where archmages can 'accidentally' release prisoners they're transporting, if they feel like hunting them for sport? And Elric is able to rebuild dozens of buildings in a matter of hours? And he's also a noble, and a senior government official? And he's made it pretty clear Arielle is his favourite niece and he's taking on a parent-like role? And yet, people are constantly disrespecting him? Gio, sure, is more powerful and gets to send him on errands. And Vittoria too I guess, so she gets to temporarily kidnap his niece. But then he's got Emilia insulting him to his face? Lord Wesley presuming to broker a marriage without asking either one of them? Selena trying to stab his niece? Faulkey on day 1 trying to fight her? The Dracos lying to his face and handing him documents they all know are trapped? And his niece impresses a high school teacher with some spellcasting but doesn't want publicity - and the teacher decides, instead of simply discussing it with the 15th-most-powerful spellcaster in the world, to stalk that man's niece? For the 15th most powerful spellcaster in the world, he sure does get people walking all over him.

Nick DiRubio

Elric is going to rip his hair out when he hears about this

Jed Wolfgang

1. He never demands the respect that society says is his due. 2. He goes out of his way to come across as non-threatening and of a lower status. 3. The only people who regularly disrespect him are people who know him. 4. The Draco’s didn’t lie specifically to him. The trapped documents is something they often do. 5. Wesley has a disproportionate amount of status due to two of his sons being archmages, iirc. 6. Emilia and her daughter, house politics. Plus they are his family. So family drama. And the leader of his house is way stronger than Elric. 7. Did Faulkey know of their relation/connection? Plus Ari more than likely insulted him.

chumponimys

This is maybe a hot take, but Llywyd's desire to go digging into Ari's past would make far more sense to me if it were a concern for safety. "Ari seemed willing to co-author the paper with me until I talked about the attention she'd get and then she reversed stance HARD. Do you think she has people hunting her so she's trying to stay under the radar? Or Elric has threatened her not to get too popular because he wants to keep her a secret? We need to dig into this--no one should be coercing her!" type of thing. But as it reads now it's like "Maybe my student is hiding something. And that's causing me not to be as famous and wealthy as I could be! I need to do morally gray things to find out what they're hiding... so I can be famous and wealthy!" It just... makes Llywyd's character very unlikable and less realistic imo. But maybe that's the point if you're going for a campy antagonist teacher?

Josh Delgado42

I simply must make like the title of this chapter and express my gratitude for this chapter. Thank you!

M. Lampi

Since Ari doesn't want the publicity shining on her might it be possible for her name to simply not be put on the paper? That way the magical knowledge would be spread to the masses and the attention would be on the authors listed. If Ari was interested in any monetary compensation, then that could be laundered through the aforementioned authors.

M. Lampi

Ari could explain it to them.....maybe.

HunterIV4

It seemed like it was established early on that Elric allows this explicitly. He originally met Arielle while doing grunt work by choice. He's been criticized by several people for trying to avoid rocking the boat, including Vittoria when he let the demonic sect walk over him. We don't know the full reason for this (other than he clearly doesn't want conflict with other mages), although his status in his clan is likely a factor. So while I agree that he should probably have more backbone, it's probably his reputation as someone who doesn't throw around his status that has the biggest impact. Although he has tossed memory change potions in multiple people's faces which is probably illegal, lol.

Aqualoon

I'm happy for Ari!

Antony Claughton

Ignoring ethical reasons, practically they don’t know how Ari did it or why it works. They could patent the spell but it would be easily contestible. For a paper, they need to know how it worked and why.

Antony Claughton

I’ve got mixed views with Llywyd. It depends on your point of view. On the one hand, she should respect Ari’s views. From another perspective, Ari is being incredibly selfish as this research could be transformative for the world. Hoarding knowledge is wrong IMO. As far as investigating Ari, it’s both a breach of her trust, but if it’s finding out publicly available information is it any different to a background check? And I don’t have an issue with someone doing a background check on someone they want to write a paper with. I will say the thirst for knowledge and publishing Llywyd is portrayed as having is COMPLETELY in line with many academics! She’s well written.

Arkennys

Okay, I hate Professor Ll (pl) the most out of any characters so far. People have misunderstood such statements before, so I'll try to make this as clear as I possibly can. I'm talking about a visceral emotional response, personal antipathy, not a judgement of the severity of her crimes according to some semi-objective standard. As far as we know, she hadn't killed or tortured anyone. The evil twins are more evil, the troll summoners are unhinged terrorists risking untold collateral damage at a busy festival, and Gio is psycho. But I fucking loathe PL the most. Her behaviour is entirely out of line not just in general, but for this setting specifically. Patents (while they don't quite work as in real life, that's totally fine!) have been firmly established as something important legally and culturally. The charm guy has such a socially accepted stranglehold on the industry, that when he has obviously self-serving nonsense complaints, the Dean rolls over for him and gives him free access to his students. Bloodline spells are borderline sacred, trying to copy or reverse engineer them being a taboo. What Ari has done is more significant; bloodline spells are limited, but ultimately still somewhat communal. This is unique. PL has absolutely no basis to insert herself into this situation on any level. None. This goes against *everything* that has been established about the setting. This is equal to (or honestly more severe) than demanding one of her students share full details of their bloodline or the family patents. This is a career ending violation. I've said this before: schools specifically for the elites have ridiculously high standards. Powerful people don't tolerate uppity teachers screwing with their kids. This is only reliable and secure if it's a consistent policy. If teachers violate basic rules for some students, none of the parents can feel safe. It was explicitly established that many children of very powerful and influential families attended this place, and that in the outside world they are regularly hostile to each other. The teaching staff *must* hold themselves to the very highest standards with an iron will, else the entire parent group will come down on the school. People must know that Lord Wesley for example can't use his influence to make teachers extract bloodline spells from students, else the whole thing falls apart. I know Ari is awful at understanding this kind of thing, even though Elric gave her the necessary information. I don't hold it against the character. It's just not who she is. Again, absolutely nothing against Ari. But the only correct response here is: "PL, my discovery is none of your business. Your contribution to my discovery is literally worse than nothing. I asked permission for a private meditation session, which you agreed to, yet I was interrupted and my work was delayed. You have only ever hindered my progress, and if I ever go public, I'll make sure to use my newfound fame to tell everyone who will listen that you are severely incompetent, dishonest, blinded by greed, and wholly unfit to teach anyone anything. If you have any questions, take it up with ARCHMAGE Elric." PL mentions Elric, but only in the context of negotiating her cut. I have no fucking clue what makes her think she can do that, when *the actual rules explicitly established in the story about the setting* make her completely and comprehensively be in the wrong. Even beyond just basic common sense and decency. And now she's going to violate Ari even further? I genuinely, sincerely hope she will be core suppressed, banished from whatever clan or sect she is part of, and be forbidden from going within ten kilometres of a school ever again. As for the rest of the chapter, Prof V stands as a strong counterpoint to show how a good mentor and decent person should act. I still like her a lot and hope the ball goes well for her. She deserves good things. The final bit with Lyra is peak adorable. Best girl doing best girl things. <3 <3

Arkennys

The idea that Ari is selfish from any perspective is baffling. She hasn't at any point displayed any desire to be secretive. She's doing her best to answer questions and explain her work within the constraints placed upon her. She even gives PL a solid hint on how it works. It's explicitly their society which is broken. Elric, the Dean, and the Legendary Commander all took one look at Ari and immediately thought: "she must be hidden and protected else the powers that be will use and abuse her in unconscionable ways". PL not making this connection makes her either dumb as rocks or actively evil if she sees nothing wrong with the predicted consequences. Of course, we only have theoretical exposition. It could be that the three adults on Ari's side are all paranoid conspiracy theorists and nothing bad will happen once Ari is exposed. That would be a very unexpected and novel plot twist. But I don't really think that's what the story is going for. Furthermore, let's take PL's speech in good faith and assume nothing negative would happen. Her inability to understand why a sixteen year old student wouldn't want explicitly global attention and the top house and company heads personally going after her is insane. She's an unhinged, greedy narcissist. She's practically getting off on the idea of shared credit in the duelling room. Credit no amount of cognitive dissonance can convince anyone she's entitled to on any possible level. It's pure avarice. Let's investigate this idea that she may be concerned about the public good. Ari explained Lyra's situation at the first demonstration, yet PL had to be reminded of it again here. Her student was the victim of a truly horrific violation, and she couldn't possibly care less. Actually, PL remains actively hostile to Lyra and Ari. Her challenge to make vitae only spells is explicitly done to show these silly girls how worng they are and to make sure Lyra gets kicked out and fucked over. If she legitimately gave a single damn about doing good, she should have started working with Lyra and Ari after the first demonstration of the big spore spell to help right a wrong and offer help to a victim. She should have assured them that with these circumstances, Lyra is safe at severance. What she does is terrible and makes a bad situation worse. As long as Lyra's other cores still exist, the full focus should be on finding a way to let her keep them and also keep the positive aspects of the ritual. That would be the *good* outcome. Ari's entire thing is doing the impossible. Making Lyra function as a vitae only mage should only be relevant after her other cores are tragically lost. I do expect Lyra to end up vitae only because that's more narratively interesting and unique, but that's only a partial fix after a disaster, not the truly ideal outcome. Loss of cores has only ever been shown as awful terrible very bad. By forcing Ari to prematurely focus on the vitae only spells, Lyra's chances of keeping her other cores are diminished. PL is actively and deliberately perpetuating the harm and abuse from Lyra's aunt. And now she wants credit when her bullying tactic backfires? Fucking burn her alive. Incidentally, Ari with her gift and currently developing her elf core should know better than anyone how important they are. Her lack of full dedicated focus on preserving Lyra's other cores is a shocking oversight that's borderline hypocritical and cruel. In truth, my assumption is that Lyra will end up vitae only because that's undeniably the more interesting story, and the plot is written with this endpoint in mind, so for the sake of pacing Ari doesn't even attempt something the author knows is a dead end. So I don't really hold this against Ari. The argument that investigating the background of a research partner for a paper is reasonable holds no water when that desire for collaboration is strictly one sided. It would track only if Ari were asking for her help and support, for her to put her reputation on the line. We have the opposite. She's deciding this unilaterally, and her motivation is blatantly a desire for fame and fortune. No other interpretation is consistent with the framing. Her priorities and values couldn't be more clear. As for the information being technically public, the argument isn't that her plan is illegal, it's that she's a morally bankrupt spineless scumbag. Also this school has been presented as a high school with the students largely being idiot children. That's wholly different from a PhD program. Her behaviour would be marginally more acceptable at a research university, but that's not what this academy is. Doing this to literal children is vile. As a final point, since she revealed her pathetic plans to Prof V, I really hope she'll give Ari and Elric a heads up. Prof V is my favourite staff member, and having her support this garbage nonsense, even if only by her silence would be profoundly disappointing.

Arkennys

This is a consistently established character trait of Elric's. I admit I was initially frustrated, but with his recent showing standing up for the maid, I'm pretty sure his character arc is going to be the Ari situation forcing him to confront his complacency and step up. Which is pretty interesting and a unique approach to the archmage mentor /benefactor figure, so I like it. :3

Hauke Sattler

One one part I can understand your argumentation. But on the other hand, I can understand Professor Llywyd. This is 'like a Student discovering the cure for cancer'...and don't want it published. Sure being the co-author for such a paper is huge. But just publishing this breakthrough is even more important. More important than even the feeling of a 15 year old girl. And it would be nearly impossible to publish these things anonymous. Ari would end up involved in the hype no matter what. Best way to get out of this mess would be if Elric would ask Vittoria (the quarter elf meanie) to act as a buffer. Someone who couldn't even pressured by Gio. "A friend of a friend asked me to publish their discovery in my name. A friend who doesn't want to be bothered. A friend I don't want to be bothered by you. So don't even think about asking who this friend is. Am I clear?"

Hauke Sattler

It has to be a believable lie. Elrik, even as an archmage, won't be able to produce something similar. He had spend years in creating his restoration spell. Ari copied it in mere seconds. She has created and recreated spells that are just beyond Elrik. Even claiming that Elrik helped would be quickly disproven as a lie.

Antony Claughton

Ari may have good reasons to remain hidden. The simple reality is that she’s keeping knowledge from the public. One that might actually provide a solution or insight to a world changing threat. It’s fundamental selfish, putting herself first.

Hauke Sattler

As I said way below, trying to publish that without mentioning Ari would be quickly sniffed out. And then a relentless questioning would follow. A questioning that both Professors can't hope to survive. They need someone like Vittoria (the quarter elf meanie) to act as a buffer. (I'm repeating me here) Someone who couldn't even pressured by Gio. "A friend of a friend asked me to publish their discovery in my name. A friend who doesn't want to be bothered. A friend I don't want to be bothered by you. So don't even think about asking who this friend is. Am I clear?"

Arkennys

That's valid, except... a) that's not presented as PL's principal motivation. She blatantly wants fame and personal involvement. b) the setting was firmly established not to function on the principles of public good like this, so applying it to Ari is an unforgivable double standard. c) it has been driven into Ari and us that attention = ruin and disaster. She's not being shy, she's trusting Elric's assessment that revealing her would be a massive issue.

Arkennys

That's not a workable definition of being selfish. What? You are demanding martyrdom. Putting that aside.... She's not avoiding personal inconvenience, Elric's speech included saying people might worship her as a god. That she might have to overthrow the High Ascendant even. For better or worse, the stakes have been raised past the point of Ari even just personally dying. That's to saying nothing of the assumption that going public would even lead to her discoveries benefitting the masses. This is overtly a dystopian world with an openly corrupted and oppressive ruling class. With everything that has been established about how this society functions, thinking Ari publishing a paper would lead to any meaningful improvements for people who aren't part of the elite is naive at best. If anything, the commander has the right idea. Cultivate Ari as a hero and make her challenge the system when she's ready. That will do much more than giving the oppressors extra spells to work with.

Orca

Typos her bolded tone. (maybe) her bald tone. (Other words are possible too. Not bolded tho', unless you're breaking the fourth wall.) Lord Wesely's son, Lord Wesley's son, their lifework their life's work (Unless 'lifework' is a specific term used in this world, maybe.)

Hemlock

Professor Livid! Tftc!

Hauke Sattler

@onedayokay I small error: "Arielle created a spell using only vitae orbs, and Lyra used it." The professors can't see that the essences are orbs. They call the call them 'Essences'

Hauke Sattler

attention = ruin and disaster: Ari knows that Elric knows that Llywyd doesn't know that. The world setting sounds like a world without psychologic sciences. Being on the spectrum, or Autism is not a thing here. Here such people are just strange or have mind damage. So due to this blindness Llywyd can't imagine why someone doesn't want fame and suspects nefarious reasons.

Arkennys

PL not understanding the consequences of brining Ari to prominence is a failure on her part that she is fully on the hook for. She should understand the society she lives in, especially as a teacher who is meant to guide children.

Hauke Sattler

It is especially the society she lives in, why I can understand that she does what she does. This is a medieval feudal setting. Ari's behavior and motives are completely alien to the professor. Things that are normal for us (like neuro divergence or Asperger) are completely unknown here. Please remember, in our world it is maybe just 200 years ago that epilepsy was considered as demonic possession. Character like Sheldon Cooper would have probably been burnt on a stake.

Arkennys

I'm not sure what Ari's neurodivergence and the others' understanding of it has to do with PL being an awful person. The risk to Ari isn't because she's different, it's because of her spellcasting ability. Her being more average in her way of thinking wouldn't make a difference if her powers are found out. There is no misunderstanding between them because Ari is not communicating effectively or anything of the sort. PL is inserting herself into a situation that has nothing to do with her, and as I said, if anything, she actively hindered Ari - and she is doing so overtly and obviously because she wants to become famous and rich.

Michael T

I'm not saying the guy lacks backbone, I'm saying it's inconsistent with the rest of the setting. This is a socially stratified society, some noble houses being more important than others, noble brats expecting people to bow to them because of who their father is, and magically assaulting powerful friendly spellcasters just for not answering their questions. The norms of this society are to be very respectful towards people of higher rank. If Elric is the 15th strongest magic user in a magical society, why isn't he being treated accordingly?

SnowingSilently

I don't think PL is dumb so much as one, extremely greedy for this chance to get massive credit on an extremely important paper, possibly causing tunnel vision. And two, unaware of the sheer depth to Ari's abilities. She probably doesn't think there's any real risk for Ari, especially with Elric's backing. Only a few people so far understand just how insanely special Ari is. If she's evil, she's not extremely so, just the banal evil of mundane academic greed. If she was aware of the golden goose she's threatening, with a bit of bribery she might back off.