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Vittoria got up and started pacing, muttering to herself and running her hands through her hair several times.

“The antidote will be one of the most guarded items in the sect, probably having several layers of curses and alarms,” she murmured. “There are a few places it could be, so I have to narrow it down first to ensure that we’re not just hopping from place to place, wasting our time and probably leaving behind tracks.”

“I can hop from place to place,” Arielle said, standing up. “I can go right now. Just tell me where to start the search.”

“No,” Vittoria responded. “It’s too risky.”

“But Elric–”

“Should be fine for the next two to three days at least,” she said. “The bands around his neck and his body slow down the spread of the disease massively, and I’ll have a healer on standby to take care of the side effects and ensure that he’s still getting the sustenance he needs. However, if we make a mistake and alert the sect as to what we’re up to, they might take further measures to hide it. I mean, they already might. They may suspect my involvement, but you absolutely cannot get caught, Arielle.”

Arielle didn’t care about getting caught. Three days still sounded way too long for her. She wanted Elric to open his eyes now and tell her he was okay. "Why can’t you just plead with the High Ascendant for one of his cures? He has two.”

Vittoria gave Arielle a look. “Just how much has Elric told you about the High Ascendant?”

“That he will probably suppress my cores if he finds out what I can do.”

“Yes. But apart from that, he is very...peculiar. Insane, some might say. Hard not to be when you've been alive for as long as he has, and he's been here since the beginning of this Second Earth. He has seen Archmages come and go. Elric will be no one special to him, simply another dead soldier who can be easily replaced. Contrarily, those cures are his treasure. It requires a pure-hearted saint or saintess to willingly give their life in order to be created. It's a rare thing indeed." Vittoria brushed through her hair again, and it landed in mussed waves around her face. "Right now, there's nothing that Elric or I can truly offer him to make it worth his while, because they would need to wait for the voluntary sacrifice of another saint to make such a potion again.” Vittoria’s features darkened, but she shook it off and said, “Convincing the High Ascendant to part with his antidote is a feat that I’m not even sure the combined efforts of the Legendary Mages can manage. And even if they do, it brings too much scrutiny to him and you as a result, which is precisely the thing he’s trying to avoid. He becomes a person of interest. Every aspect of his investigation will be combed over, and your identity will be discovered. We can’t have that happening. Not yet, while you're still not ready."

Arielle gritted her teeth against the surge of impatience. Elric had told her she wasn't ready, too. But she was. She felt ready. 

“When will I be ready?” she said. 

Vittoria stopped pacing to contemplate as she watched Elric's breathing.

“Elric wanted slow progress for you,” she said. “I think that’s a foolish notion. I think that you should climb as fast as you can and become as prepared as you can. He wants you to blend in, but I think the opposite can be a source of safety for you.”

“You want me to stand out?” But she had just reiterated that they didn't want the High Ascendant to notice her.

“You already do,” Vittoria said. “You have inadvertently assumed an identity that can easily become legendary. You will henceforth be known as the one who not only saved the people of Khor but also saved those in Yvoirren and defeated sand pirates. One who emerged from the temple as a gift from a Primordial to Earth. There’s some safety in being known, in becoming a legend that the people admire, and becoming indispensable to them."

“I’m not sure I understand what you’re trying to say.”

“That’s because I’m thinking out loud and don't have a solid plan for that yet." She shook her head. "Anyway, back to the topic at hand, sending you in there to get the antidote...they'll be expecting it. They already have a plan in place to stop us or intercept us. We can't go in there half-cocked without information."

"What if they destroy the antidote while we wait?" she asked. "Or if they somehow take it to the demonic realm or hide it?"

Vittoria's face rippled with unease as she bit her lip in thought. "They won't take it to the demonic realm."

"How do you know?"

"Because Yseult and Elders will not be stupid enough to trust a demon with that, even one that is currently in charge of the sect. He would have reported this long ago if the demon had that much leverage." Vittoria brushed her chin. "The antidote is likely with Yseult. He has placed it somewhere. We just need to figure out where."

"How do we figure it out?"

"You leave that to me."

Arielle clutched her robes, breathing harshly through her nose to keep from screaming. Tension had coiled so tightly within her that she almost shook. "Why don't we do both? Tell Elric's father to ask the Ascendant for the potion, while we're trying to steal the one from the sect."

"That will be tricky to balance. If we reveal to the High Ascendant what's happening and he doesn't give us the cure, which is the most likely scenario, and then we end up with a cure anyway for Elric, that will be announcing that we stole it from the sect. If we do steal it, however, without letting the Ascendant know, then the sect will have to accuse us of the crime first, which would mean opening themselves up to investigation, too. We'll get to tell our story as well, and it will be mutually-assured destruction. They won't do that. We also need to be careful because if the council finds out about Elric's poisoning, some might suggest ending his suffering right now. Which is likely what Yseult wants."

“What if Yseult reports that Elric has been poisoned by a demon?”

“He wouldn’t, because then he would need to admit how he knows that, and that would be opening himself up to scrutiny, especially from Elric's father, the Holy Anchor," Vittoria said. "It's a tricky game he's playing, but his best bet is to do nothing and just hide the cure as well as possible, which is likely what he will do. I need to leave now and figure out his next move and also make sure that the behemoths are being cleared out.  But I doubt Yseult will say anything that might lead back to him. He’ll probably just wait for Elric to show up dead or to become a demon-kin, so that the demon master can control him."

“What if we offered Yseult a deal?” Arielle said. “We’ll tell him that Elric will stop the investigation and take back everything he said if he gives us a cure.”

“Even if he believed us, I doubt he’ll agree to that,” she said. “That being said, I will have to talk to Yseult eventually. The timing simply has to be right.” She sighed deeply. “And perhaps I might have to approach my mother after all. Find out some more information.” She closed her eyes, turning her face toward the ceiling. "The things I do for you, Elric."

“Why do you hate your mother?”

“I don’t hate her,” she said. “I simply dislike her cowardice.”

“What do you mean–”

“This isn’t the time to discuss that. The first thing I must do, before I leave for my investigation, is teach you how to protect your mind and safeguard your memories against demonic interference through a technique known as centering. It's not something most people can learn, but I think you will manage pretty easily. After that, we have to get you back to campus. It’s already late, and I’m not so sure I’m doing a good job at pretending to be you as I thought.”

“Wait, you’re still there?”

“Well, not right now. I said I had to go for a walk alone. Your handsome friend was entertaining to talk to for a bit, though."

“Who?”

“You’ll see. Anyway, let's hurry up so I can get you back to school."

Arielle shook her head. The last thing she wanted was to get back to campus and continue as usual while Elric was suffering. "I don't want to go back."

Vittoria responded, “We don’t know if Yseult has spies on campus, but any prolonged absence on your part might look suspicious. He’ll suspect you’re working with me."

“But if my cousin was injured, it makes sense that–”

“You’re not supposed to know that,” Vittoria said. “This might be the hardest thing I ask of you, but Arielle, you have to pretend while you're there that you don’t know anything that happened or that Elric is in trouble until the Dean himself gives you news. I'll bring it to his attention tomorrow. He’s going to offer to delay some of your trials and give you a leave of absence to visit Elric. You’ll take it but only for a day. Understood?”

Arielle clenched her teeth and nodded. “Do you think I can learn this centering technique fast enough before going?"

“Well, it typically takes multiple sessions to learn, but you learned the Phasewalkers technique, something that takes decades, in a single afternoon.” Vittoria managed a tired but amazed smile. “That was jawdroppingly incredible. So I have no doubt you will be able to learn anything I could teach you. And some day in the future, you might be the one teaching me.”

Arielle glanced at Elric. She couldn't even be excited about learning something new because she was so worried about him. 

"One more thing." Vittoria pointed at Arielle, and a rush of Luxa surrounded her neck and wrists, much like the ones on Elric's neck as well.  

However, unlike his, hers disappeared. 

"Demons have different magical techniques and essences that humans don’t have access to,” she said. “We don't know exactly how their mind-alteration works, but we do know how it starts. You see, a demon will usually take the form of someone, perhaps a stranger, perhaps someone you know. They will engage in conversation with you, and as they do, they invade your mind and put you in a trance. It's almost impossible to tell what's happening if you don't have incredible discernment, and with higher-level demons, even discernment isn't enough. You must stop them before they trap you in your own head and alter it in the way they want. Once they give off obvious tells that they are a demon, it's typically too late."

“I think I'll be able to tell," Arielle said. 

Vittoria raised an eyebrow. "You think so?"

“Yes.”

“The same way you knew where that Overlord was?” she asked. 

“Yes.” The demon she had seen had a distinct pattern of orbs around him. Perhaps not all demons would be the same, but neither behemoth nor the Overlord carried constellations that humans would. Speaking of which, she glanced at the Overlord once more, ensuring that he was still dead. 

He was.

“Good,” Vittoria said. “The bands around your neck should help. It should ward off demons first of all, including curses, and it should help you with aligning your mind and centering it on truth.  This is not a spell. It's a meditation technique that requires extreme focus and frequent practice. Okay?"

"Okay."

"Okay. Now, watch me do it first and copy it." 

Arielle watched Vittoria close her eyes and inhale for ten seconds before exhaling for two. 

She did it again, this time inhaling for twelve seconds and exhaling for two.  

The inhale time continuously increased by a magnitude of two seconds, and it attracted the Vitae, Massa, and Luxa, which circled her head, resting on her temples.

Then on the tenth inhale, it was absorbed through her skin. 

So cool. 

Vittoria told her that while inhaling, she had to focus on her truest thoughts, from the biggest truths to the smallest. 

"Each meditation's effect lasts maybe 6-12 hours, depending. So do this once a day at the very least. Okay?"

"Okay."

"Good. The good thing about it is that demons can really only change a few things at a time, so even if they alter your memory, it can be recovered by the next session."

Ari nodded.  

Once she confirmed Arielle had the technique, Vittoria left her to it, to continue her initial investigation, although she left her bird behind. 

Ari did meditation with her eyes open, using nothing but her breathing to attract the three orbs in the right orientation.

It was a similar method of communication to what she was used to, but the absorption was different. For her to get the orbs through her skull, she needed to breathe through her entire body, and her brain needed to attract the orbs, the same way her fingers would when casting spells. 

That was the hard part. 

Thinking a lot helped. 

She had to think about what she knew. The things that were true and the hallmarks of her being. That was what Vittoria meant by centering on the truth, going from the bigger to the smaller details. 

She was Arielle Mossborne.'

She could see spirit orbs.

Elric wasn't her real cousin. He was her friend.

After a few minutes, she briefly paused her meditation so she could watch Elric. His breathing had steadied. His mouth was still drooling. He no longer looked to be in pain, but he did look far too pale. 

Arielle was terrified of the possibility that he might die. 

This time, she wasn't thinking about how wasteful it would be. There was no outer force suppressing the fear or telling her that life was transient. 

She just didn't want Elric to leave.

Should they tell someone?

Maybe Anne, who was technically his sister? Or his father? Elric said he didn’t get along with them, but sometimes she fought with her siblings too, and they would still want to know if she were dying. 

But she couldn’t tell them if doing so would put Elric in danger. 

She reached out and held his hand. “I’m sorry. This is all my fault.” 

If she hadn’t done what she did, hadn’t gone off on her own and killed those trolls in Khor, Elric may never have involved himself in this investigation, and he never would have been in this state.

Or if she hadn't helped him unlock those scrolls...

She shook her head. 

There was no use in blaming herself now. She would do that later but now, she just had to do something to help him.

She tried to analyze the nature of the disease in his body. Maybe if it worked like a curse, she could just break it.

She used Orion and the aura-charm to scan him, searching for signs.

All she saw was a mess of chaotic orbs within. 

They were wrapped around his organs, squeezing tightly, bouncing off each other, rioting with no rhyme or reason. It was scary to watch because it felt like it was tearing at him, pushing at Vittoria’s bands attempting to force the spread. Urgency had her heart racing. 

They needed to do something. Right now. 

Arielle nearly tore her gaze away instantly, but she noticed something. A host of silverish-grey orbs mixed in with the rest. 

What were those? New demonic essences?

She couldn't even be excited about the discovery, not under these circumstances.

She didn't know if she should attempt to break apart the orbs in his body. Or maybe draw out the curse? Would it accidentally make things worse? She didn't know enough about human anatomy. 

Although she did know someone she could ask. 

After some time, she opened her eyes and moved Elric’s arm, which was hanging off the couch, to his side so he would be more comfortable. As she did, she heard a jingle. It came from his pockets.

She frowned and stuck her hand inside, retrieving what looked to be jewelry in little silken pouches, all very shiny and expensive-looking. 

She poured them onto her palm and brushed over them with her finger, wondering what they were for. Elric didn’t wear jewelry, and they looked too feminine for him anyway. Unless he was trying something new.

“They’re for you,” the bird said. "I was just at the market in Rittersaal in disguise. Spoke to some merchants.They don't remember exactly what happened, but one thing they remember in detail is the fact that Elric was buying items for his cousin. He seemed really happy doing it too, and he left some of it behind.”

Arielle stared at the things in her hand, the expensive jewels. He bought them for her?

Now it felt like her heart was being squeezed.

Her eye stung, pressure pushing behind her eyeballs. 

She’d never liked jewelry much. She should have told him that before….before.

She went back to meditating, pressing her lips together, refusing to cry. 

That was how Vittoria met her later, appearing with a basket of clothes and laying a hand on her shoulder. "Let's get you back to campus. Tomorrow night, we'll invade the demonic sect compound."

Comments

Antoine De l'Epine

Considering her friend got a hidden ability marker already I wonder why Alice isn't considering getting one of her own a bit more... Or, if Alice isn't cuz she's kinda psycho rigid, why isn't vittoria insisting a bit more? Alice being able to cast master level spells would be a game changer and make her actually useful in higher level fight. From her fight against the phasewalker, it was obvious she over relying on vittoria... Idk, maybe im reading too much into this or she will accept a hidden ability marker next chapter for Elric, which wouldn't be too late... I think it might need reclarification at least though

CPTincognito

Really want her to remove the curse thing herself! Dont hesitate! Tyfc

tonright

She's well written (like all characters in this story) so this isn't a criticism of the author at all but I'm getting real sick of Vittoria as a person. I don't know that she's actually done *anything* likeable yet? It feels like she is all bad sides. If the guy at school she was talking about turns out to be that "matters of the heart" guy and she's in some way lead him on or said that Ari will attend that event thing I think I'm going to just actually hate her for good. --- Ari has the patience of a saint. Every time Vittoria appears she gets basically completely robbed of her agency. She is lied to, spied on, and that she might have other things going on in her life is just never taken in to consideration. She gets thrown in to fights, strangled nearly to death, and her first real friend gets his whole self poisoned because Vittoria was playing around and standing back to watch what happened with him. She just straight-up said that he might die without urgent help here, and then when Ari panicked and started suggesting ways to fix it, Vittoria was basically, from Ari's point of view, like "Hmmmm no I don't want to do that one". Is Ari not a literal CHILD? 15 or so? Putting this kind of thing on her is straight-up abuser behaviour. Yuck. --- Is her biology perhaps somehow making her childish? She doesn't seem the same flavour of neurodivergent as Ari but her actions make her seem almost like a superpowered toddler. Maybe it's just regular powerful-mage-insanity?

tonright

I so rarely find it in myself to *hate* someone but mistreating children does it. This character has my blood boiling. I am a similar flavour of neurodivergent to Ari but by this point even I'd have recognised that someone was not a positive influence on my life, and that they did not have my safety or the safety of those I cared about in mind. I know being calm is Ari's whole thing but I don't know how she's maintaining that here. I'd leave AFTER Elric was better, of course, but I wouldn't be so calm now. I hope her recklessness, irresponsibility, and lack of thought for others at the very least results in her seeing some kind of consequences. As of now she just seems to get to be a wrecking ball with no repercussions. I suppose that could be why she's off by herself to begin with?

Hauke Sattler

Why doesn't she use/offer her Orion spell. I know wants to keep it secret. But even she must see that Elric's life is worth more to her than some secret. Oh, by the way, I can so see Ari tell Vittoria: "Oh that super special antidote is really easy to copy. You just have to combine these different, absurdly complicated, pure vitae structures. And then you get an antidote that is at least as good if not better than the stuff we have just stolen." Vittoria: 8-O

Findell

I really wish she would stop hiding her strength soon someone imporant is going to die because she doesnt want the hidden spell thing.

Anotherb Account

Really love this stories system. Arielle and her orbs!!

mezeka

Blue orbs from the elves… silver orbs from demons. I wonder how many more orbs there are. TFTC!

Nekosensei (edited)

Comment edits

2026-09-06 13:00 You know I like vittoria. She's old ... Inconsiderate ...considers herself a good person....which makes her a terrible selfish friend .....possibly unstable as well. Just the kind you find in irl
2026-05-29 03:54

Hibou Ronchon

I think it's going to be necessary to remind the readers that Arielle cannot afford to get the hidden ability marker because it would bring her under scrutiny which she *cannot* afford, contrary to pretty much everyone else... The questions about it are getting annoying and I'm barely even reading them, much less being the one those remarks are for...

Niklas Nikkinen

I think it would be nice if Arielle would gain a connection to the elven essence before going to demonic conpound. It would be positive encouragement in rough times for her to. For example: after pouring her heart out to the orb about the situation, the orb decides it wants to help her.

Orca

It could be quite interesting to know what others make of Vittoria-as-Ari. Typos Mossborne.' Mossborne. Ari did meditation (maybe) Ari meditated Contrarily, those cures are his treasure. (maybe) Conversely, those cures are his treasure.

Orca

There could easily be more than one extra type of orbs for elves or demons. If it's based off RL chemistry there might be more types of silvery-grey orbs than you could shake a stick at.

ConstanTeen

Considering her performance at the academy her not having a hidden ability is more strange. Even her friend already got this marker and no one investigated her yet.

Marshel

On this correction, I think "Mossborne" is supposed to be "Blacksoil"? Her name is Blacksoil, she is a Mossborne.

Marshel

I think it's worth pointing out that Vittoria isn't human, she an elf. She is not a good friend to a human girl, though, that's for sure. But if we take how the Elven princes behaved, Vittoria isn't far off.

tonright

I did question whether her biology was playing a part but IIRC she was only part elf, unless I'm misremembering? The full elves seemed kind of aloof and quite direct when it came to communication, but her being the way she is seems different and very much reads as a her thing. IIRC the whole reason Ari had to stay hidden and Eleic has to face danger to begin with is because there can only be so many archmages at once? I'd honestly be good with just bumping off Vittoria once Elric is better then letting Ari take her place. Conflict over, happy ending for basically everyone.

SnowingSilently

I think it's more likely she has a messed up mentality from being alive for so long, maybe with some PTSD or other mental issues from so much combat. And maybe she has deliberately developed a childish personality because it's a way to get back at her overbearing mother. Imagine being helicopter-parented for centuries, you'd probably crack too. That she keeps avoiding doing anything that involves her mother points to this too. Is it likeable or defensible? Not really, but other than the massive problems avoiding getting help from her mother is causing, she is (poorly) trying to fix the problem.

onedayokay

You mean on Elric? She does attempt to use it to understand the curse, but it's more complicated than she can manage right now.

onedayokay

Her situation is different. Lyra can afford the extra scrutiny. Arielle can't at this time. A Hidden Ability Marker is basically announcing to the system that you're doing something you shouldn't be able to do, compared to your relative level. It can involve extra evaluations and they will want to know why she can do those things. That's what Elric is scared of.

Antoine De l'Epine

But considering her already shown talent isn't it even more suspicious that she doesn't have one already ?

Hauke Sattler

No I meant on the antidote. To find out where they hide it.

Marshel

I can't see Ari becoming an Archmage in this world as a net positive for her.

Marshel

These corrections make it to RR?

Orca

Them or something like them. There's times where my correction wasn't quite what she wanted, but taking a second look made her correct it a different way.

me blue

Ngl the most irritating well written character in fiction. Maybe the most irritating character in fiction period. Not even that purple guy from MHA get my blood boils like this. I really, really hope she got hit by some actual karma. I really hope that she didn't actually accept the invitation because that's way worse than identity theft