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Arielle stared at the black bird, which looked nothing like Vittoria's. While Vittoria’s bird resembled a raptor, this one looked more like a crow.

It wove around her, leaving traces of shadow in its wake that shimmered in the air like corruption. Waves of Vacu combined with Luxa, linking in a complicated pattern that fascinated Arielle…

Until she realized the environment was changing. 

It started with the grass growing darker and the sunlight dimming. Then the sound disappeared entirely, leaving only a slight whine.

Arielle whipped around as the ground beneath them turned completely black and day turned to night. The sun became a moon, letting out only the barest beam, turning everything around her, including the buildings, dark and foreboding. Fog covered everything, and whispers emerged from nowhere. Even the texture of the air felt wrong, like it was just a little thicker than it should be, as though it were alive and hands were reaching out and tracing against her skin.

It was unpleasant, but Arielle focused on the shifting spells, finally recognizing what it was.

It was similar to the spell that the demons had used to trap her in their abyssal pocket dimension. Was that what Gio was doing?

How was he doing it without any of the demonic orbs?

“I’m curious,” Gio spoke casually, as though he had nothing to do with the magic stitching together an obscene amount of orbs continuously shifting in response to his whims. He stepped closer to the statue. “What is it about this thing that has captured your attention?”

“What have you done?” Arielle asked instead. “Where have you taken me?”

"Why? Are you scared?" He turned to her. “You don't seem scared."

"I am." She was scared that he would discover the truth about her powers.

"No, you're not. Most people I've brought to this nightmarish realm start panicking and spilling their guts immediately as they beg for mercy. Either that or they scream for help," he said. "You're a very strange little girl, Arielle Blacksoil."

Ari swallowed. She met his eyes briefly before she looked away.

"This is [Saint’s Domain]," Gio said. "One of my Archmage Tier spells. Essentially, what it does is create my version of reality, where only my rules apply.”

“Like an Overlord.”

"Exactly. Now how would you know that an overlord can create one of these?”

Shoot. Arielle could have smacked herself. That was a stupid mistake. She’d muttered it because she was frazzled, giving more information than she’d intended.

“Elric told me,” she said, and Gio shook his head. 

“No, he did not,” he said. “You’re a terrible liar, you know. You need to work on that to survive in this line of work."

Arielle swallowed. She glanced around her even though she knew there was no help coming. Gio had trapped her, and likely no one would even know she was here with him except Maus. Maus could be getting help as they speak, but only if Gio hadn’t incapacitated him or rendered him unconscious in some way.

Just the thought of it made her mad.

“Let’s make a deal,” he said. “We’re going to have a little exercise, a game of sorts. If you win, I’ll let you go. For every round you lose, you have to answer a question honestly. Don't you think that's a fair trade?"

"I don't want to play any games with you."

"Oh, come now," he said. "You know I could simply make you tell me the truth, but if I utilized my other methods, you might get hurt, and my good friend Elric would never forgive me. At least this way, you have a chance to keep your secrets, and you only have to be truthful if you lose the round. That shouldn't be hard for someone like you, right?”

Ari chewed the inside of her lip. She didn't like this, and she didn't like the fact that Gio suddenly looked more animated than he'd looked in the room with Lord Wesley.

"Please?" Gio put his hands together with a mocking expression. "You have no idea how long it's been since I've had someone to play with."

“What if I don’t play?”

“Do you really want to know the answer to that?”

Arielle met eyes that were suddenly cold and humorless.

She hadn’t noticed before that he had a permanent almost-smile on his face, one she had assumed was his natural expression.

But when he dropped it…

Well, it was like there was nothing there. No humor, no anger, no sign of humanity at all.

He could hurt Maus. If she didn’t play along, he could hurt Maus and maybe even get away with it.

She tore her eyes away. 

Regardless, Arielle had to get herself out of this mess. She was tempted to call Vittoria, but Vittoria was in the demonic realm and wouldn’t be able to access her. She didn't know how to activate the portal bird on her own, and even if she did…would Vittoria want her to? Wouldn’t that reveal their association?

Maybe she should just play along, and get this over with as quickly as possible.

"Fine," Arielle said through gritted teeth. "If I win, you let me go and don't bother me or Elric any more."

"Perfect." His grin returned full force. "Now here are the rules of the game. You have to play it earnestly and to the best of your ability. I will know if you’re holding back.”

How would he know? She wondered. Was the domain feeding him information?

Speaking of which, she could always break the domain spell if she wanted to. But then that would expose more of her powers, and the backlash might kill him. She didn't know if she had enough skill to avert that much backlash before it hit him.

She was stuck.

“What’s the game?” she asked finally.

“I’m glad you asked.” Gio held out his hand and duplicated himself ten times, each body forming a piece of the circle around her. A swarm of birds surrounded him too and shot into the sky, circling them, as though observing the game.

“It’s very simple,” he said. "You have to find me, the real me, before the timer runs out.” Just as he said it, numbers hung up in the sky, a three and a zero.

“You have thirty seconds. Three rounds. Play well. If you lose, you have to tell me the truth. Remember, I'll know if you’re being dishonest."

Without any further explanations, Gio Li disappeared, along with all his clones.

The timer began. 

Arielle looked around. She could detect from his magical signature, because she recalled the way the orbs had arranged themselves around his body. Her view was just obscured by the thick shadow that shifted across the field like mist, along with the wailing that could get distracting.

Nevertheless, she enhanced her senses and detected all the orbs through the shadows, identifying all ten clones.

One thing immediately bothered Arielle.

All the clones had the exact same magical signature as Gio himself. That was impossible. Usually, a clone should not bear the exact magical signature of the person who cast the spell because the clone was the subject of magic, not the originator; therefore, the magical signature around the real Gio should be significantly thicker. She had observed this with Vittoria and her soul clones too.

The fact that it wasn't could only mean one thing.

None of them were the real Gio, not even the one who had spoken to her originally.

Darn.

Arielle studied the rest of the magical network within the domain, noting that all the spells seemed linked together, but she was having trouble tracing the origin of the spell.

Which could mean that Gio was not in this domain. At least not on the ground.

She didn't know how that was possible, but perhaps he could govern the domain from outside of it? Was that possible? How? The domain would need an anchor to reality, wouldn't it?

Her mind raced. Was there something she'd noticed before? Something that could help her?

Arielle looked up to the sky, wondering if maybe he was one of the birds that circled. When she’d first met him, he’d materialized from a bunch of birds swirling around like it was now.

Was he one of them, or all of them? She evaluated the orbs, just as everything darkened, obscuring her view even more.

The time ticked down while she shifted her eyes and used [Sensate] to look as far as she could. There were ten seconds left now. 

“[Light beam],” she said, but suddenly it was snuffed out. 

“My rules, remember?” Gio's voice echoed from…well, everywhere.

She frowned. Did he want her to do this without magic?

“I have no problem with you using magic,” he said. “But don't insult both of us by using such weak spells. We both know you're better than that."

Before Arielle could ask what he meant by that, a loud buzzer echoed, and he said, “Alright. You lost the first round. Question number one…did you accompany Archmage Vittoria to the demonic sect to save Elric?”

Arielle closed her eyes. Her heart raced,and she thought of a way to avoid the question. He would know if she lied…but Dean Octavius said one could be deceptive with the truth. 

Then it hit her. 

“No,” she said. “I did not accompany Archmage Vittoria to the demonic sect to save Elric.” Technically, that was the truth. She hadn’t gone to the demonic sect with Vittoria. Vittoria’s bird had come with her, but Arielle had been mostly alone until Vittoria came to save her. 

A bird cawed loudly and arced down at Arielle, flapping its wings in her face.

“I told you not to lie,” it said.

“I didn’t lie.”“You were trying to be deceptive. I can sense it. As your penalty, you get even less time for the next round. Good luck."

The bird exploded into black feathers, some of which got into Ari's mouth, and she had to spit them out.

The timer now read twenty seconds, and Arielle’s heart pounded as it began.  

“You’re not in this domain?” she asked. “Are you?”

“Am I not?”

“How are you able to create it without being within it?” she asked. 

"I wonder how."

He was being unhelpful. Arielle glanced up again. The birds, the sky, the domain. There had to be something about it that could give her a clue.

“Like you, I have tricks that I don’t want the system to know about,” one of the birds said in Gio's voice. “Or am I to believe that you’re truly a level fifty-two with your skills?”

Arielle chewed on the inside of her lips, and he added, “You would be more convincing if Elric had let you start at a higher level, but it's almost like you're avoiding that. Which makes me curious about what you're so desperate to hide?"

Arielle took a breath. She had to think, but his words were distracting too. She continued to survey the environment, the seconds passing too fast, the pressure getting to her. 

“Time’s up. Question number two: how did you manage to stab the overlord?”

Ari didn’t answer. She couldn’t lie but she couldn’t tell him the truth either. 

Another bird was shot out of the sky and flapped in her face. “If you keep breaking the rules, you’re going to irritate me.”

Frustration rioted in Arielle. She didn't know what he wanted from her. Why was he doing this?

"Why are you doing this? Why do you want to know?"

"Because." That was all he said.

"Are you trying to get Elric in trouble?"

He didn't answer that.

The next time on the timer was ten seconds. 

Arielle seriously considered just breaking the domain spell and being done with it, but then she realized something. 

The statue.

It was the only thing that hadn’t really changed. Apart from being shrouded in shadow, it had maintained the same locking spells that it had had in the real world. Arielle doubted that Gio would go through the trouble of recreating all those intricate spells even if he could do it.

Which meant that the statue was real.

That was the anchor. And if Gio was indeed not in this domain, that would be the way he accessed it. 

Just as she stared at it, the smoke got thicker in that general location, and Arielle finally noticed that it was the smoke that was the link that held all the spells together. It was hard to tell at first, because the orbs controlling it continuously shifted, but just behind the statue, both smoke and orbs were thicker and shielded the attachment to the rest of the domain.

Without wasting time, she whipped out her wand and said, "[Air Chain]."

Strips of air shot out of the end of her wand and wrapped around the smoke and the statue.

She circled it to find Gio, materializing, leaning against it. 

He grinned. "You got me.

"I did. Now let me go."

He didn't. Instead, he made her [Air Chain] vanish and walked out from behind the statue, clapping as he shook his head.

"I'm thoroughly impressed," he said. "You didn't even bother looking for the decoys. You just instantly knew they were fake, and then you thought maybe it was the birds, but somehow you knew it wasn't the birds either." His eyes gleamed in delight as he balanced his hands on his knees and leaned in. "What did you see, Arielle Blacksoil, that had you so convinced? What did you see that made Elric ask you to perform your test with your eyes closed?"

A metaphorical alarm blared in Arielle's mind.

She didn't say anything, but she didn't know if she managed to keep her expression contained.

“Do you think I won’t keep your secret?” he asked, voice almost gentle. “Do you think I already don’t know what you’re capable of? Do you think I would want your cores suppressed?”

She didn’t know what he wanted. That was exactly the problem. “I’ve won your game. Please, let me out.”

“You didn’t win. I won two rounds, and you only won one. So now you have to play another game.”

"That wasn't the deal."

"It is now."

Arielle couldn’t help it. She glared at him. 

He chuckled. "You seem angry. Luckily for you, this next game involves a fight."

"You want me to fight you?"

"Of course not. That would be ridiculous, I don't fight children." He raised an eyebrow. "Unless you think you would win?"

Arielle shook her head. She wasn't trained in combat, and Gio was. Not to mention he wasn't as restricted as she was, knew more spells than she did, and had more essences than she did. "Who am I fighting then?"

"Him." He snapped, and the birds swarmed towards Arielle, but they stopped right next to her. They immediately formed a young man who was just about Gio’s height. 

He had shorter blonde hair and a mischievous smile. A scar across his eye and a chipped tooth.

Nevertheless, the familiarity was unmistakable.

It was Gio, with a different look. 

"I don't understand," Arielle said. “You want me to fight you?"

"Not me, right now. Me when I was much younger. Me back when I was a prodigy." He turned to her. "Me at the age I defeated Archmage Klaus and took his place." He shrugged. "I'm curious how you would measure up against that man."

"I'm not a fighter."

"Really? I'm sure Anne Earthbinder and Leviathan would say differently."

“I don’t want to–”

“I want you to take this fight seriously,” he said. “If you value your secret and Elric’s safety, you will."

The threat towards Elric once more triggered Arielle's temper.

Arielle gritted her teeth as Gio's smile once more completely left his place.

"I am not your enemy, Arielle," he said. "But Elric was right to warn you about me. Because he knows who I am. He knows that I would be willing to blow up your life and his, just to prove a point. Do we understand each other?"

Arielle swallowed the threat lingering in her mind as he leaned back.

She nodded slowly, and the smile returned.

"Good. Now fight."

AN: Have a great weekend! Thanks for reading.

Comments

AceHW

Yay new chapter

AceHW

ugh. I feel like it's fucking stupid that she agreed to his game. She should've tried breaking his spells first by removing as many orbs as she could quickly. It's like agreeing to play a game with a fae or a devil/demon. Just a terrible idea all around. She's concerned about the backlash to him? Fuck that guy. That situation is sketch as fuck. Geo Li is an archmage, right? He shouldn't be dishing it if he can't take it, and she can just say he's an archmage and she expected he could take it. and if the backlash killed him, he fucked around and found out.

Mobius

I lost the game

Staples01

SUCH A CLIFF!! I ALMOST DROVE OFF.... Thankyou for the chapter!

BlastYoBoots

“Fine, I’ll fight.” *Breaks the entire Domain spell.* Of course she won’t, it wouldn’t be the smart move, but… if only. I wish we could see his reaction to shattering his greatest spells, even though even what Gio is about to see here is bound to surprise him.

tonright

Arielle should just rip up the domain and the clone and hit him with the full knockback. I do not like him one bit lmao

Blackjack

I understand the anger, but breaking the domain will simply prove his point. It'll show that she has far more power than she should. It likely wont make the situation better, but worse.

BlastYoBoots

Typo: “as Gio's smile once more completely left his place” -> (face)

V0lcano

Using his power to so overtly coerce Arielle should be a crime. Maybe it is. But this should for sure be a tipping point for Gio to receive sanctions from the council, especially considering Arielle's potential. I hope Gio receives real consequences for this, and not just a slap on the wrist. At least Arielle has two archmages on her side, 3 if the Massa clan patriarch sides with her.

furyfairy

Lack of agency is frustrating me. A suggestion would be to change the rewards of the fight, maybe to extract something of a promise to make Gio stop causing trouble to both Arielle and Elric. While Gio did agree, his response seems whimsical and I feel as if there’s uncertainty that he will follow up on his agreement.

mezeka

Whatta weekend cliff! Cant wait for the next one! Tftc

Wolfzie

She can’t go to the council but vittoria might have something to say

Wolfzie

Dumb question but why isn’t Elric there again? Did Gio send him on a quest?

AceHW

I think she should've refused to play his game, and if he insisted she should've dismantled his spell. She certainly shouldn't've agreed to play his game without having any idea what the game was first.

AceHW

>"I am not your enemy, Arielle," he said. "But Elric was right to warn you about me. Because he knows who I am. He knows that I would be willing to blow up your life and his, just to prove a point. Do we understand each other?" blow up gio li. give him what he deserves. break all his spells. be ungovernable. show him you're supergirl in handcuffs (like superman in handcuffs in that one movie)

BlastYoBoots

Unfortunately, Gio had a point about himself— if they aren’t willing to entertain and humor him, Gio is ABSOLUTELY willing to blow up Arielle and Elric’s lives and hurt people they care about, even revealing Ari’s secrets to do it if he had to. He’s genuinely cornered Ari in a situation where she HAS to “entertain” him enough for him to DECIDE not to ruin her life— even a completely all-out fight with him would be so loud she couldn’t hide from the High Ascendant. Complete refusal to do anything would make him either blow up her secret, or more likely put the screws to Maus and others until she fought back. Arielle CANNOT win by force, here.

BlastYoBoots

All of that is by design. Gio is abusing his power and Ari’s need for secrecy, the threat to Ari’s loved ones, specifically to give Arielle no choice but to *be interesting enough* to him for him not to snitch or hurt her friends. He’s denying Arielle almost ALL agency, because he can, and Ari has no guarantee he’ll keep his promises and *knows* it. It’s completely unfair, sadistic, up to his whims… …and completely in line with the power imbalance baked into this society. Sanctioned Archmages as powerful as Gio, especially knowing someone is keeping a secret from the High Ascendant, CAN JUST DO THIS TO PEOPLE FOR FUN. It’s absolutely horrible and it’s a state of the world that Vittoria has been grinding her teeth about for ages.

normalperson123

he is somewhere on the estate. he apparently doesn't know Gio arrived early, as was explained last chapter

normalperson123

Ari is effectively a criminal. She definitely cannot go to the council without risk

normalperson123

It sounds like the problem is that refusing to play could be worse. Gio could call for an investigation into Ari or even just hurt someone like Mouse and possibly get away with it, as Ari mentioned. Her best bet is to stay on his good side

Wolfzie

That’s not right it doesn’t explicitly say that

John Smith

I think the man's just suicidally bored. A little part of him wished that someone (maybe Ari) would just snap and just kill him, or at least prove to be a worthy adversary to him. It's a little like the Joker and Batman dynamic. Just look at how he acted in the demon realm, Gio is the very definition of power without purpose.

AA

He’s much more experienced and probably much stronger than her. He also knows a lot of her secrets and could quite easily destroy her life. I don’t think antagonizing him is a good idea. At least if she plays along, he might eventually leave her alone…

Kaladin

At what point can she start to show off more powers? I believe many of the prodiges have the hidden whatever term spells. Not sure why she couldn't have a few or hundreds if it shows up as only one entry at this point. She's known to be a genius...

John Smith

I think that's what exactly he wants lol. The man's bored outta his mind and just wants some excitement in his life. Whether he lives or dies is probably both a win in his books as long as Ari surprises him. Only way for Ari to stick it to someone like Gio is to either kill herself or prove to be genuinely mediocre, which we know both are impossible.

AA

I don’t think we know. He left to deal with something “work-related” but I don’t think it was ever mentioned what exactly it was. It’s possible Gio did something to make sure he wouldn’t be present.

BlastYoBoots

Whoops, I think it ate my comment somehow--? Lemme rephrase... If Ari refused to play, Gio could hurt her friends until she did. If Ari fought back at full strength or broke all his spells, she'd reveal too much and couldn't keep him from escaping with the info. And Gio could always snitch on her to the High Ascendant if she doesn't sufficiently entertain him. "Entertain Gio until he decides he's satisfied enough to leave me alone" is really the only option, and Gio and Arielle both know it... she had to agree, even though they both know he's not obligated to be true to his word. The only way out is if Gio *chooses* to leave her alone, and the only way to that is to entertain him enough. It's utterly unfair, and a consequence of the same oppressive societal system that Vittoria is opposed to.

Antony Claughton

There aren’t any good choices. She was afraid breaking the domain would kill him. If it did, she’s also stuffed.

BlastYoBoots

Even if she could, and she's not sure she could (it really is unlikely, especially not without earning the [Hidden Ability] marker), it would give Gio even more of what he wants than playing along with him would, unfortunately. I mean I really, REALLY wish we could see her try, I agree it'd be SO satisfying, but we shouldn't right now because it's not best for her safety. At the very least, her fight with this double is going to surprise Gio plenty, we'll have to settle for that for now.

BlastYoBoots

@Kaladin I'm guessing she might get more freedom to "earn" the Hidden Ability marker after her performance in the Interschool Tournament.

AceHW

How old is she supposed to be? He could be kidnapping her or something, wrapped in an illusion and a "game"

Mitchell Calhoun

I don’t think she’s actually as powerful right now as some commenters appear to think. She has abilities others don’t, but she’s still learning how to use them effectively. I don’t think she could beat Gio currently even if she went all out, he is simply too skilled/powerful.

Mitchell Calhoun

I don’t think she’s actually as powerful right now as some commenters appear to think. She has abilities others don’t, but she’s still learning how to use them effectively. I don’t think she could beat Gio currently even if she went all out, he is simply too skilled/powerful.

BlastYoBoots

Gio's ultimate trump card is he's almost certain reporting Ari to the High Ascendant would ruin her and excuse anything he could be accused of doing to Arielle, up to and including kidnapping etc. And unfortunately, he's probably right. Between that and his personal power, he can do whatever he wants here, and it's unfair by the very design of the High Ascendant's society.

AceHW

More like she was practically born a crime, except she developed into it. She was able to copy an archmage tier spell before she ever went to the academy. Besides her other problem of being too powerful, she wouldn't have gotten that book and those essenses Elric gave her without him, though maybe she could've eventually found some way to use essenses on her own.

InLucidReverie

Writer straight up kneecapping anyone with push notifications. I am chapters behind, but this sure happened to me too.

Josh

That's like saying "someone pointed a gun at me, and if I made the gun explode in their hand they might die". Yes, and?

HereForHFY

I curse Gio to always have slightly damp socks and for his finger to always poke through the toilet paper at the worst time for what he is doing to Ari.

Orca

Typos Gio's smile once more completely left his place. Gio's smile once more completely left his face. “I didn’t lie.” “You were trying to be deceptive. I can sense it. As your penalty, you get even less time for the next round. Good luck." (add blank line) Her heart raced,and she Her heart raced, and she this nightmarish realm (maybe) this nightmare realm

John Smith

Then the corrupt police come and kill you, bad end. Before making the other guy's gun explode it's imperative to know that he's actually going to use it. Gio's priorities are shown to NOT align with the other high mages, and definitely not with the ascendant. If he wanted to kill Ari, there's a million ways (from his point of view) that he could've went about it, but he hasn't. From that perspective, his current actual danger level is like an annoying squatter who happens to be world famous. By killing him you'd be attracting the attention of these even more sinister forces. It doesn't feel good, but the best choice here would just to play along for a time until Ari knows what Gio actually wants.

John Smith

The only way out for Ari is, as Vittoria said, to get powerful enough to either be untouchable, or dethrone the high ascendant. Ari's very existence is a threat to what is essentially a dimensional dictator, the council is merely their governing tool. There is no chance of peaceful coexistence based on what we've seen of the ascendant so far, with someone of Ari's potential. Whether or not Gio would get punished is besides the point. As soon as Ari is outted she'd be forced to fight the high ascendant, which she clearly isn't ready for yet.

ZapperGhandi

I'm really enjoying this story. Arielle and the cast are great characters and the setting is intriguing. That said something is starting to gnaw at me. This chapter reminded me of an aspect that all horror movies has to deal with. "Why don't they just call for help?" The movies typically deal with this by placing the setting in a time before cellphones were wide spread. Or they are in a remote place that is out of signal range. Or they dropped their phones. Etc. Because having that easy access to communication and possibility of help typically breaks the tension and the feeling of isolation that the movie needs to evoke. For this story that cellphone is Elric and Vittoria. They have demonstrated that they see Arielle as someone with world altering potential. Someone to keep hidden and safe and to train. As characters they have their own lives and obligations and things keep happening that pull their attention elsewhere. That's good, that makes for exciting scenes like the one in this chapter. But the frequency and the reasons why they happen to be away from Arielle as things happen is starting to feel less earned/in character. All in all this story is a joy to read! thank you

Josh

I'm not arguing with that. I'm just observing that the reasoning should be "if the spell backlash kills Gio, that might be hard for me to explain".

AceHW

replying to Mitchell, we don't know if Gio Li has ever faced anyone who could pull orbs out of spells to disrupt them, so we don't know if it's anything he'd have a defense against. If it was a well-known spell or ability we could probably reasonably assume that he'd have at least tried to come up with a counter at some point, but if nobody knows that what she can do is possible then who knows, he might be unpleasantly surprised.

AceHW

If she had the slightest ability to be dishonest or even to tell the truth in a way that supports her narrative (spin the story even just a tiny bit), she could easily make him out to be a total creep if the bare facts alone didn't suffice.

Sharien

let him eat the backlash for this mess - and let him try and explain why he was using an archmage level domain spell on a child fuck i want to see this guy dead in a ditch....

AceHW

I wonder if there might be any way to let Arielle become an archmage if enough archmages support her. Like imagine if Elric and Vittoria and Gio Li and others all voiced support for her becoming an archmage, could they somehow force something through or force the other archmages to at least consider (and not dismiss out of hand) Arielle's opportunity to become an archmage? Vittoria at least is also on some council, right? is that a council of archmages or what?

AceHW

I could imagine Gio Li then fighting on Arielle's side against the status quo.

Aqualoon

I'm on team break the entire spell and damn the consequences.

onedayokay

Yeah the council is made up of masters and archmages from prominent families. That's interesting point actually, but the problem will be getting it through the high ascendant and explaining Arielle's powers.