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More fun and games with MC and the women in his life!

A security issue at Lastname Park, Kari's haircut turns out to be less severe than feared, someone's lurking under MC's desk waiting to give him a BJ, and intrepid reporter Avril O'Neal wants to talk to MC and Lois.

I've been working to implement the changes I've been discussing and added a few extra shots to make those work. You might also notice minor changes even if you were to replay certain scenes the same way as before - they are just to ensure things flow smoothly either way.

I also discovered an error in the setup for the dinner with John. If you had Lois be John's dinner date and she's not on a hard slave or whore path she would tell Kari that MC just wanted her to flirt. However, there was an error where in the reverse situation Kari would state she intended to sleep with him regardless of which path she was on. That should now work as corrected.

There are other areas where I'm working on rebalancing things, some less obvious than others.

As I've said many times, this is my first game. I've made my share of mistakes and I've also misjudged how things would come across. There are also definitely times when things I intend to be humourous don't go over. That happens to me in real life, too - even after twenty-odd years living in the US, there are times when my American friends just look at me in bewilderment when I know the same things would have had my mates in the UK cracking up.

Anyway, everything is subject to change. I'm not going to apologize for wanting to try things out - it's all a learning experience, but I will say again that it's not my intention to piss people off. It's a game, it's supposed to be fun. If you're not having fun with it, let me know!

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DannyB

For me the women in the basement situation has not been explained for me very well. It reminds me of human trafficking which is something that completely disgusts me. I will see how the next update is and if things don't get better for my taste, then I will have to pull my support. Thank you for the update.

togs

It hasn't really been explained at all. Without wanting to say too much ahead of time, and to cut a long story short, it's a cult.

Hooter

For me, I have been enjoying this game a lot and I like the direction that it's going in, keep up the good work, can't wait for the next update!.......

Hal

For your first game you are really killing it! Keep doing your good work. I don't think you can satisfy each of us completely. But I like what you are doing.

Galio Cia

Release date ? 🌚

Samsungnote007

Well obviously the game is a banger (especially for your first effort!), so don't worry too much about pissing anyone else off. Make YOUR game and we'll follow along - especially if we've made it this far, OK? If you try to be all things to all people, you'll end up unhappy. That's already happened to another of my favorite devs - he's made an outstanding game, but the stress of trying to please everyone that leaves a comment has left him burned out and his private life is suffering for it. So please...please...take your time, make your game that satisfies your creative nature and makes you happy. We'll always be here waiting for updates, it really doesn't matter when they come or what size they are. Just keep us updated, even if it's a message that you need some time off. The last thing any of us want is for you to suffer any mental or physical health issues on behalf of the game. Cheers Togs and thanks again for a great ride (so far) with your game!

Samsungnote007

And DannyB - No beef w/you dude, but it's a game. If you don't like it, you take your support and please go find a game that you do like. There are plenty of other good ones out there. However, I love that the game is set in my hometown and love all the references to places I've been. I also love that the cult of women downstairs is there of their own volition - doesn't seem forced at all - especially if you remember that Jenny's sister joined the cult and there was absolutely no issue with the two of them getting to see one another and spend some time together. The absolute horrors of human trafficking are real and should never be glorified in any way, I agree. But this game doesn't really go there. These feel more like women who have found a home (a weird home, for sure) together and are supported by MC's company.

togs

I'm hoping to have it ready by the middle of next week - I'd like to include additional gratuitous sex scenes.

The Amorous Antechinus

Totally agree with Samsungnote 007. Just do your thing. It's been outstanding up to present and I love where it seems to be going. Don't fall into the trap of trying to satisfy we the unwashed! If we have such brilliant ideas then we should be doing our own VN.

Kevin Anstee

First game, holy smokes! If this is the standard of your first game, then I am really looking forward to future projects.