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So I was hoping to push the boundaries somewhat, but this clearly isn't going over well, so I'm going to scratch my head a bit and think about this some more.My first thought is to add some sort of "internal discussion" where the MC is mulling over his plans for the evening. Then he can maybe have the option to take Lois out for dinner instead. I don't know for sure, just thinking out loud.Feel free to let me know your thoughts, by replying to this, or messaging me - whatever seems appropriate.

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Wild Bill

Yes! Previously the slut/sub routes have been predicated on what we do with Lois *in private*. Taking her out in public like that is something that we should get a choice on, or taking her to the nice restaurant if we don't want to publicly humiliate her. *Maybe* have her wear that vibrator from her "training" event hidden inside her panties if you want it to be a bit spicier for the kinkier routes.

Wild Bill

Also, I'll share for your consideration how *I* would have advanced Lois's sub route instead of that insane acid trip. They'd go to the private kink club, the girl who greets them wouldn't be naked, she'd be professional. She'd lead them swiftly and discreetly to a private room. Once in the private room, Lois would strip off (traditionally we'd make a point of having her fold her clothes nearly here). He ties her to an Andrew's Cross, then plays with her a bit. Some tease and denial maybe, a Wartenberg wheel, maybe turning her around and cropping her behind. Put her in stocks maybe for having sex with her before she dresses again and they go home.

togs

I'm not opposed to that, although I'll have too look up exactly what a Wartenberg wheel is! Getting late here. I'll follow up on this tomorrow. Maybe we can initiate a wider discussion over on discord or something.

Eveti Ijonen

In the scene where Greenfield warns you to increase your dominance to balance her position in the company, i get several "rollback" errors and the game freezes a bit.

Wild Bill

The specifics of what they do aren't really important, I'm rambling a bit there (though the Wartenberg wheels are pretty cool). The main point is it being just the two of them in private, like it has been before. If she enjoys the play he really ought to build his own playroom for better privacy, the club is just a decent way to try her out on the more advanced devices before committing to setting aside space for that. Going there regularly though, even if they are trying to be discreet, is risking being caught every time. If they want to keep the kinky side of their relationship just between them and maybe a few of the other girls they trust, it's not a great idea.

Tom W

Here is my only issue - if you do not take a path to run these scenes the rest of the day is pretty blah. Perhaps add a scene with the 4 sisters at home when he returns from dinner of them discussing where they would All like to stay - perhaps taking them To the penthouse and have a scene with them testing out the pool ect, or discussing if they want to all live here. Since mallory has moved out or if she hasnt moved out have scene with her moving into a furnished apartment in the complex and then a visit with the girls to the penthouse

Tom W

And this is not an attack on the game at all the 4th party was amazing . This just was so much less than expected

togs

I don't take it as an attack at all, but it's the first day of the week in the office - think about what's actually set up on Monday (depending on previous options). Lois is going to be away (for either surgery or family matters) That, in turn, is accelerating the expansion of the staffing You've met Omega (if you hadn't before) You talked to Gamma about meeting Jennie You've spoken to Jed about office expansion and also about moving up work on building 9. That's where you'll move the four sisters in if you're going that route. There's only ever so much I can manage in terms of accommodating different options - but there will be plenty of time make plans with the sisters. I don't have a huge amount of experience with other people's VNs - it was Akabur's stuff that brought me to them. I've played the one with the three sisters - where you end up moving to an island? That was where all the joking about incest began and led to the lactation storyline (as a gag to begin with). But one of my frustrations with the few games I played was the girls in the same clothes day after day and the fact they appeared to be glued to their breasts. Now I have clearly made other problems for myself, but I'm confident we'll work those out in time.

togs

Message me and maybe I'll need to have you send me a save file. I've never heard any other reports of issues with that particular part of the game.

Tom W

Its all good. Again the only issue i had was in a non sex dungeon game the evening seems a bit off .

Tom W

Thanks for the update. And still think you are doing a great job .

Wild Bill

Yes, definitely doing great! Everyone fucks up sometimes and while I still can't see why you thought this was a good idea for a forced scene, if you fix that everything's good.

Wild Bill

Also one thing I forgot to mention that they should do after fucking her (and anything else kinky) but before she gets dressed again is he should just hold her for a bit while she recovers. This shit is intense and he should be taking care of her afterwards.