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Anything about the execution of this that I could've improved?

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The East Vs. The West

They should really be on opposite ends of the ring but trust me nothing could've been done

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Anonymous

pepehands no cute s/m east and west 😢

weareronin

Can you do north vs south?

BaggiBoi

The timing could be a little better imo, maybe have the west hold off on beating himself up until after the ref walks offscreen so the viewer’s only focusing on one thing. Framing’s a little awkward too, zooming out a little bit would probably help? just my thoughts

Hey, It's Erin!

Perhaps if The West was declared the victor at the end anyway

Hey, It's Erin!

It's just the Arctic and Antarctic scientific research teams aggressively taking notes at eachother

Pouya Sattari

Secretly the East was dying of internal bleeding from all the self-beating it did earlier in the locker room.

coridactyl

Sound feels a little flat, not sure if that’s intentional, but could be, ah… punched up a bit.

Anonymous

Remember that your right isn’t stage right, switch sides next time