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Anprim Anthem Draft 1

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Anonymous

Anprim doesn’t like the industrial revolution? I’m shocked

Anonymous

Please, donate some body hair for this lad.

Anonymous

I kind of wish Anprim was tinted green in this, but I think that’s just because I’m so used to Centricide Anprim.

Anonymous

Waiting for the techno rap battle with Transhumanism.

Anonymous

Idk if you’re taking feedback on the song but I think that adding more harmonies and voices in the last chorus would help the song build.

Miguel Perez

Wawaweewah, this is so great!! I do feel the tiger attack is difficult to see. It gets cut off too quick.

Anonymous

That's p fuckin rad lol

Anonymous

Just needs subtitles I think!

Jean-Francois Perreault

You should not listen to this comment but you asked so .... Strong ERB vibes on this one (love it) glitched transition at 0:17 ? on purpose ? looks visually confusing 0:17-0:27 hard to understand as a non native english speaker, this bit seems to be the core message please close caption lyrics love the random anprims getting eaten by tigers 0:38 - 0:51 love this oogabooga is probably problematic, that would be good for user engagement libertarian disappears too fast to understand what's up industrial revolution not very good at all (too many words) ? No, industrial revolution BAD, you are subverting expectation of what we expect him to say but it's not better, it's just unexpected for the sake of being unexpected, if you change his catchphrase (or want to kill this line before it becomes a catchphrase) then he should say something more clever... at least something more than the same thing re-worded not melodious enough until 1:30, then just right, maybe add a few more notes in there to feel like more than background music for anprim's ... spoken word poetry ? 1:20 - 1:30 (and another place) use variation on that camera shake, it's jarring that it repeats the same pattern with only a translation on top. "everything big mistake" not a good enough payoff for how many times you say "big mistake", also after calling everything big mistake, you call language big mistake, which is a lot funnier. I don't think anprim would call "everything" a big mistake, that's more of an anarchonihilist take don't you think ? yeah "language big mistake" that should be the payoff ! transhumanist should die or be dismissed by something that makes anprim looks good (maybe he gets virus, or mind controlled by his musky brain chip, or his battery catches fire) but before he goes transhumanist should say one thing, maybe even just one word and it has to be a zinger against anprim

Fiona

Who's "Tribe member Ted"? I mean, I already know. But people new to your channel will have no idea. Maybe add a picture of Ted Kaczynski to the background.

Anonymous

for something based on the unabomber's manifesto, it's not that edgy. maybe libertarian opens a mail bomb.

Anonymous

You forgot to mention the mating tent

Hunter

mention Ted Kazynski somewhere. Hes a massive meme and needs to be mentioned.

Anonymous

Not sending mail bombs is big mistake