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Would be cool if someone wrote another story based in the Hypnosis universe. Think of all the possibilities! Like at the end of the Cruise Ending, what if the MC caught on to what was happening and broke away from Laura? If only... Presenting!The Cruise Ship Ending Continued Thanks once again to Fantasy1290 for the awesome fanfiction.I believe this story is my favorite one yet!Author’s Note: This story is kind of a what-if scenario where the cruise ship ending (yes, the one with massive Haley at the end) continued. In my head, I’ve always imagined the MC choosing at the end to find a way to get away from Laura and be with Haley instead. So I figured I’d just write another Hypnosis fanfiction story for that. It starts off the day before he goes to see Haley, making a few minor changes to the actual hypnosis content, but mostly following it up to a point.To catch up on the other stories, click on the Fanfic tag below. Pro tip:The protagonist's default name is Chad. If you want to personalize it, copy the text into your favorite word processor and select find/replace.Enjoy!

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Kaywye

I love the story. While the very end scenes went a little too extreme for me, the plot was beautiful and sexy af. I like that Laura remained a bitch to the end, I keeps me from pitying her even a little. Fantasy1290, awesome job. Thanks for writing it.

fantasy1290

As usual, I would really appreciate some reviews on this one. I had a lot of fun making it so hopefully at least some of you enjoyed it too.

fantasy1290

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Yeah I will agree the end definitely went extreme, but I've always wanted to write a story where we get to that kind of extreme and not just simply end it right there without delving into what you could actually do with such extremes.

Jaybird66

I Personally really enjoyed that. I liked that the side effects of their mental abilities increased as they grew. Also, I might be in the minority here but I loved that ending. I agree with Haley's mentality all the way.

sean givens

there is also over doing it....