Chapter 4 WIP: short cuts (Patreon)

Every scene is in now. Voices, music, the moving parts. I'm playing the chapter front to back with the script open next to me and fixing what I catch. That's where it stands.

So this week, instead of one thing, a few short cuts from different scenes. No context, no captions. Just clips.

They're silent here. In the game each of these runs as a full scene, with the breathing and the rest of the sound and the text underneath, and that's the part I'm actually curious about: how it lands when you play it, not when you watch a loop of it.

The longer cut of one of these is in the patron channel on Discord.

No date on it. But I'm done making things for this chapter and only fixing things now, and that's a different kind of week.

Enjoy the descent.