Chapter 5 WIP: a new face (Patreon)

Chapter 5 is planned from start to finish now, every choice included. I'm writing it out scene by scene, and after that come the voices and pictures, same as every chapter.

Getting here took a few tries. The main story was set from the start, but my first plan for this chapter stuck too close to it and came out dry. So I gave the people more room. Almost everyone in this chapter wants something from someone, and not all of them play fair to get it. I like this version a lot more.

Chapter 5 also has a new face. He's still a work in progress (he doesn't blink yet), and I'm not saying anything else about him for now.

Fair Copy is coming along too. Two bits that are done:

From the very first scene. There's a version with sound at the end of the post.

And a moment from chapter four, seen from where Mara was standing.

When Avel set her band straight in front of the whole hall, what did you make of it?

Enjoy the descent.