PDF Test 2 (Patreon)

Here's a newer version, is this any better?  I've made some changes-

The fonts are larger in places, and I've replaced the lighter gray text with a darker gray.  Added some color, and given the background a simple design.  I've also made the rating on the cover mockup (in the PDF) larger.

Is the text here too small still?  I guess I should consider this could be viewed on phones.  If it's still too small, I could try splitting the contents of the credits page into two pages.  The font sizes can still be increase now, but I worry it would look too cramped, and better off as two pages of text at a larger size in that situation.

In the pdf, I could also make some of the links actual web links.  But I don't even know if pdf viewing programs would see that as a security risk.