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Okay, I'm trying to speed up the story here.  The last page ended with Mastermind waking up and there's two bursts of speed behind her, so I wanted this to segway from that a little.  The twins where trying to deal with Mean Evie after she confronted them and Pulse.  The cloak guy and the blue guy work to put her in a trap.

Then we have Mira, who is there fighting Mean Evie in Evilyn's mind.

Then back to outside, but at least some small amount of time has passed, and then again as they are losing ground.  I'm a little worried I made too big of a leap with the last two panels.  This originally was going to be more panels of fighting.

I dunno.  Sometime a page is "here, I think this is pretty good", and other times it's "here's a page, I'm a little worried it might not be as easy to follow as I expected".

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