Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout

Downloads

Content

Here's the early draft for the next batch of chapters! Let me know if you have any feedback.

Thank you to everyone for reading the story!

--Ivy

Comments

Ferrum1

I was just wondering about this tale the other day, never realizing that I'd completely missed this installment! Overall, two thumbs up as usual. It's becoming problematic for me to keep all the characters separated, but that happens to me any time there's more than 5 or 6 characters. All the jumping around certainly doesn't help! I'm really curious to see what happens next and can only hope that 10-100 drop soon.

Orcus

I can kinda see that, but only because we're getting the story early as it's being written. Being able to read the story in one sitting or over the course of a few reading sessions would completely resolve that issue for me.

Orcus

Loved it, keep up the great work! Just at a faster pace. ;p

ivyveritas

I wish I could! :) I've been trying to increase my writing speed, but it's tough. I'll keep trying.

Ferrum1

True. I always get a better sense and flow when I can read a story from start to finish. The long "commercial breaks" between chapters when a story is being written really interrupts the immersion for me.

Orcus

You're doing great, I'm just impatient. It's just a sign of my enjoyment of your series.