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Durlyne is Duane's hometown, and we only saw a sliver of it in the last book, and always from his very narrow perspective. But Durlyne is one of the largest cities in the world, extending to the horizon and to the sky and far below both, in a cluttered mess of sewers, alleyways, ruins, and half-collapsed ogre tunnels.

There's a lot of things you can read into the backgrounds of Durlyne scenes, but probably the most important is just to see what most of the surrounding figures look like. If everyone has the same colouration, you're probably in one of the Aldish ghers. A ghers is a closed caste community of pooled resources. Members are called ghersit, and they are something like the Aldish middle class, with voting rights, and ghers-provided education and policing. The Adeliers lived in one. Outsiders are usually allowed into the ghers to spend money, but they have to beat it by nightfall, when the gates close.

To those who live outside the various ghers, Aldish life is harsh and short.

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2026-09-07 11:00 the orange swirls on the bottom left panel are interesting, is it that they're sensing something from Tree or not sensing anything from Jaer ? (or both ? O.o)
2026-02-09 05:26

Jeremy Ball

You know what's worse than being a child murderer? Being a whiny baby child murderer.

Ben Dennard

Are ominous towers stretching to the heavens just the standard for large, Kasslynian cities?

Ashley

Not sensing anything from Jaer, we might presume. He seems to be a Soud, and Soud are not included in the Dammakhert, as we learned in the prologue. Instant distrust at this blank come among them.

Ashley

That's the Temple of Song, very important, you can see it from all over :D

SET

That's what I was trying to sort; i guess they are really reacting to the lack of a presence they would expect from the other castes

Ak-demiker

I hope those vliegeng are city-trained.

Reed Copperstrand

Wow, that appartment building(?) across the canal is huuuge! That really drives home that Durlyne is a real metropolis. Also, Bronze Ghers with two Jets smugly walzing through, I presume?

Ashley

Yeah, probably down here to visit one of the cheaper clothiers or rug shops. It's nice to get their money but no one's going to invite them out for a drink :)

Mister Scarecrow

In that regard, is it correct to understand a ghers as a kind of inverse ghetto? Or like a ghetto union or commune? An ethnically homogeneous group pooling their resources, policing themselves and providing social services to members and engaging in commerce with outside groups but still technically formed by the prejudices and social/economic pressures placed on that ethnic group. Like a Soud ghers would be much more like a historical ghetto than say a Jet ghers but obviously it's not quite 1:1, as a Jet ghers might perhaps be more interested in pooling and maintaining Jet-created prosperity in Jet hands, more like a gated community rather than for protection?

Benjamin

So, I'm curious. It seems like only some of the Bronze are picking up on our duo. Is that related to the varying lifespans/khert connection of the Bronze caste? Or are some of these people just not paying attention?

Spider

Boy, that's one way to ruin your day!

Flyfly

Interesting. Looks like they are breathing out DammaSmell

PotentPinion

The return of goblins to the comic! Even if only as a decorative lantern

Ashley

Precisely. They SEE him, but don't sense him. It's like if you saw someone walking along moving their mouth, but no voice was coming out of them. Uncanny.

Ashley

That's a great line of thinking, I just would never want to appropriate the word ghetto. It'll be important to remember that ghers are also divided by class, in addition to caste. Duane grew up in a very rough working class ghers that only admitted blue collar labourers and primitive craftsmen, and as a boy was apprenticed to carry on after his father in that regard. When his prospects brightened, he married to the much higher class ghers of financiers, clergy, officers, and fine craftsmen. Now that lower class ghers wasn't doing much to bolster its members' success but Duane's adult ghers was very protective, exclusionary, and high pressure in a different way. And the two ghers - even though they are both Soud - were not on the best of terms. One is considered peasants, the other is considered toffs.

Ashley

I didn't think I needed to make the point on EVERY figure :) Better to save a giant shocked crowd scene for a higher impact moment.

Ashley

It's some kind of food stall, I just can't decide what they sell :D

Josh

Ashley, I remember reading something you wrote or said in an interview to the general tune of "Why does everything think Unsounded is pseudo-medieval? I guess that's what I get for beginning the story in the wilderness." Gotta say, when I only had the first few chapters for reference, I wouldn"t have expected the world to contain this rad funky dystopian steampunk-adjacent Blade Runner-lookin' megalopolis.

Josh

Conflicted about Jaer and Tree here; almost any other circumstance, I'd admire how Jaer still finished their job despite personal disgust. Once I said to friends arguing about a hypothetical crime one was daydreaming about, "No matter how much you disagree, you should always help with the getaway." Except for how it was literally child murder and they could've escaped without doing it. And yet.. smidge of respect anyway, with the part of my mind that just loves solidarity and camaraderie between criminals. (Though I believe our own real criminal demi-monde despises people who hurt kids as the lowest of the low.)

Mister Scarecrow

Fully agree on the appropriation point. While it is helpful for me as a point of comparison, I also would prefer to focus on the areas where the concept of the ghers is a unique element of your world-building. With that in mind, I think the idea that they are also divided by class feels absurdly, perfectly Aldish with the way you've built them into the story thus far. The subdivisions of divisions of categories of a pymarically-imposed biological caste system. I suppose my next question would be, with that in mind, how similar are lower and upper class ghers for the higher castes compared to the lower castes? I assume a "lower class" Copper ghers is still an order of magnitude more prosperous on the whole than a lower class Soud ghers, for example?

PotentPinion

My guess: Peas, mash, and liquor for people who can't afford meat pies, the green goblin is part of their identity for essentially serving green slop

Rob N

Sure, they could have escaped, but a hitman who leaves witnesses behind won't be a hitman for long...

Rob N

It's (racial segregation/apartheid/whatchamightcallit)², or ...³, or even more...

Josh

True, but well, I was just talking about wrestling with whether I could respect/admire Jaer or not, not whether he had viable alternatives.

Ashley

Oh, that sounds great!

Ashley

We did see Durlyne back in chapter 7, too, with Duane's murder, but I never pulled the camera this far back. And neither did Duane, he lived where he lived. Overall though, place is huge!

Ashley

That's a safe assumption. Poor Coppers always have more resources than poor Soud. But Poor Coppers also have restraints placed against them by powerful Coppers, who have a special interest in both the public image of their caste, and their secrets. We'll see!

Jeremy Ball

"Do you 'clean' anyone?" "No women, no kids, that's the rules."

Khyrberos

That's a good analogy, and coupled with the whole "kasslynian souls can hear innately" thing, I'm a tiny bit surprised that the "dammakhert sense" isn't depicted/identified/? as a pseudo-Hearing (rather than a pseudo-Smelling)