Print edits~ (Patreon)

Someone expressed interest in seeing some of the before and afters for the pages I'm editing for the next books. These are two of the more dramatically changed pages. This sequence - especially the second page - has always been just damn near opaque. You could not tell what Duane did! I think it reads better now.

You get a little more height on the printed page, which is handy for adding some breathing room. I'm finding it's also very helpful to just erase some of the background in some panels, so the figure pops better. Also, playing up the pymary colours helps a ton.

Ch10 is really satisfying to go back and edit. There are low points like the above, but there are also some pages in it I'm really proud of. Stockyard's death, Sette and the pain babies, and the latter Duane v Silver fight scenes are pretty strong, I think. Reading through it, I can literally see myself improving page by page. Practise really does work! lolOn 107 now of 850 pages to convert. Go Ash go 8)