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Three new pages today! I wanted these all to be read together so you could properly appreciate Duane's rush to get Will to safety. I had to really pare down the reunion which was three pages in the script, but it felt ridiculous when poor Will is slowly dying in Duane's arms :U

But that leaves a fair amount to inference. We can only imagine how the older Soud soldier there wisely redirected the kids' rage underground, how they hunted out Claggart and company in their search for Roger, and how that rescue went.

Next update we'll jump ahead twelve hours or so for the last scene of the chapter. There are just a few unaddressed matters remaining~

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akrasia

Wankers in masks.. I KNEW it!

Duke BG

I'm not sure what Roger is doing with the cloth around his neck in the end.

Jeremy Ball

Hooray for Magnus' war face.

Duke BG

Btw, after seeing the skin "loss" highlighted, I immediately thought that it's the plat kids doing. Throwback to an earlier page in this chapter!

CelebrenIthil

tHE LADS ! ! ! <3 <3 <3 On page 122, one of them no sooner got to Duane that he's digging around in his packs? Needed to bum a snacky-snack from the spellmaster that bad, or...?

Sharpeslass

Oh, Magnus!! Precocious little puppy! So much love for these kids, and for Duane's tears of relief and joy. And, I'll say it again: poor Roger. What a raw deal he's gotten in all of this. His life can't have been easy from the start. I'm assuming Alderode doesn't have much tolerance for homosexuality. Would that be an incorrect assumption? Most societies with a lot of misogyny also have heaping helpings of homophobia--two sides of the same coin.