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In the script Sette tells the lizards off but I ultimately thought Sara's "Rude" was all the response we needed.

We'll go into the khert next to see what Duane is doing. I'm nervous about the upcoming scene. It's purposefully very disjointed because Duane's thoughts are disjointed and angry, and I'm not sure how well it's going to read. It also has a few pages completely free of dialogue and those tend to irritate people, I've noticed. Fingers crossed :)

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Mark

Ssael... was a Black Tongue? Now that's an interesting turn

Jeremy Ball

I know it's probably been asked and answered before, but why do the two-toes wear those little saddle things? I keep picturing a spider monkey riding Ruffles. Wearing a tiny cowboy hat and shooting a tiny pistol in the air.

Rion Boom Crabhands Keon

Aha, so "Children of Ssael" is maybe not just a figure of speech??!!1! Wake up, Kasslyne!

CelebrenIthil

It's a sign they are the same person, wake up sheeple! P.S. I love how Duane will never see the thing.

Isabel Andrews

Well we do have a mysterious main character with a lion tail... Ssael and Ilganyag's kid, maybe?

Ames

Ooo I love this!! Symbolism gives me life 8D Why do the Inaks refer to a "red pariah"?! I think they refer to Lady Ilganyag's staying in the Khert and that's what's represented on their flag! Maybe the lion represents the Khert here as Ssael "conquered" it? Maybe the Inak believe llganyag sacrificed themself for them? Are they even affected by the Khert? So far, there's been no hint to that!