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Karl Toma, quit it! You'll make everyone love you too much!

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First Church of April

I can't tell, does she mean 'one's' tongue, or HIS tongue specifically?

Rainwalker

Good job making me go from indifferent about Karl to “murder murder die murder” in the span of a single page

Nicholas Feinberg

Beginning to think this 'Karl Toma' guy may not be very nice!

Madison

I hate him I hate him I hate him Oh Chea, oh this poor baby girl. She is surrounded by such vile people. It's such a mundane evil, which makes it hurt all the more.

acloudwithfeet

I can't tell if I'm supposed to agree with what this guy is saying or not, does he even want to eat the twin. I get that he supports Bell but is the queen even good. Do I even root for a side here? Your characters are so multilayered I feel like I'm taking a psyche course.

The Clag

I guess I am misunderstanding some things about glamours, I would have assumed Karl's hand would stop where Emne's belly starts but instead his hand passes through and shows what the glamour is hiding. So this glamour actually changes her shape and volume, not just changing someones perception of her?

The Clag

So hypothetically, with enough influence and clout in Crescian society you could, for example, hide the existence of a pregnancy for the entire term? That has some incredible and horrible implications.

Noxae

Are Chea's hair thingies reactive to her mood? She looks so cute, hope nothing bad happens to her...

Timwez

Man, this makes me feel even sorrier for the sacrificed twin; imagine having the last hours of your life be a boring sermon (...assuming Karl isn't just talking out of his ass here)

Judith Bradford

Karl, you nitwit, she has had to bleed, like every other monarch with a womb! Every month she is not pregnant, from puberty to middle age :)Some men seem almost determined to be ignorant about female biology, and display the silliest misconceptions about how it all works,...

Sharpeslass

I loathed Karl from his first appearance. I'm surprised there are people who COULD hate him MORE.

CelebrenIthil

"They sacrifice IT." The dehumanization is not lost on my here Ms. Cope. Casual villainy alright...