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The path from guilt to disdain is an easy one to walk. It's much, much more tolerable to start thinking up reasons why someone may have deserved what was done to them, and get the universe back into alignment that way. After all: Duane was no perfect being. As far as Lemuel's concerned, everything he'd ever wanted was always handed to him on a silver-- no, a gold platter.

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Stillpoint

I find myself relating shockingly closely to Lemuel here, and I don't like that.

L Anon

I'm so glad you added this extra chapter, because if these scenes are part of the addition, I think they were sorely needed. But holy *shit* this is a rough read emotionally, and those flies have my creepy meter off the charts.

Fitzy

Whatever helps you sleep at night, man.

Rifter

Lemuel has to know Miki is alive and probably in hospital at this point right? I guess that part of his plan is already in motion.

Cassie

"I will solve it" returns!!!! The line that has haunted my every waking moment for ten years!!!!!!! There are no real revelations here, but I can't put into words how insanely satisfying this scene is after so many years of pondering and wondering how Lemuel handled the days following that night, as well as his general headspace during that time.

Rob N

It just occured to me that Cutter's silver monster is actually a twisted version of Ssaelit prophecy: the dead coming back to remake the world as they see fit? Of course, not the _worthy_ dead, just some random angry memories, but hey... So, careful what you wish for, Lem!

Mek

I still don't get what Lemon wanted to do other than fuck up his brother for no reason.

Reed Copperstrand

The flies... D-: Though I don't particulary like Lemuel, I am certain that he isn't just trying to screw Duane over (there would have been much, much more straightforward ways to do this). There is another motive that made him part of this, we just haven't been told yet. Maybe we will finally know soon...

Noxae

I'm so enjoying this scene!