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I'm making this public so everyone can join in on the discussion. Yeah, this is a massive wall of text, but it's important. I highly recommend reading through it. No skimming, no skipping. You'll want to take this all in.

Hey, everyone!

I'm back, but let's put Sicae's discussion on hold for now. Today, we're diving into MBML's Chapter 2—this is a big one. I originally wanted to wait until Sicae's update was wrapped up, but since this chapter has already stirred up some buzz (and a bit of criticism), I figured I'd tackle it head-on. Getting this out now gives me plenty of time to brace for impact when things inevitably go sideways.

Nii, it's the Before and After thing again!

Yeah, you're not tripping. But why?

Because we're making a massive three-year time skip—right at the start of Chapter 2. That means Chapter 2, Episode 1 kicks off after a time jump. I know we left Chapter 1 with a solid plan, but hear me out. No matter what, a time skip was bound to happen at some point. So why not do it now?

But before we go any further, I know you've got one big question: Why do a time skip in the first place?

Because of this:Well… this is where I have no choice but to drop some major spoilers—so consider this Drip Marketing™. (Gacha players, I see you.)😅

Remember all the hype when I first teased this? Well, it's official now: Leah is coming back to the main story! Will she be sticking around, though? That's something you'll have to wait and see. I'm taking a different approach compared to Emma's Solo Ending (calling the real ones who get the reference to this episode). But one thing's certain—she will add another layer of elements into the main story.

Now, back to business. Why the three-year skip? Simple: it's the only way this episode makes sense. We did the same in ESE, and the logic applies here too. If we don't jump ahead, Leah's presence just wouldn't add up—timeline-wise, age-wise, even personality-wise. She's not just some side character. She plays a much bigger role in the main story than you might think. In fact, she's crucial to a far, far future storyline, but I won't spill any more than that.

And of course, a time skip means character growth. Three years is a long time. They're older, (hopefully) wiser, and naturally, some things about them will change. Some of you might not agree with this decision, but I promise—it's necessary to keep things realistic and coherent. All I ask is that you trust me to pull this off.

Why do we need to do it now instead of later?This is more about technical storytelling than just the "why" behind the time skip itself. If we push the jump further down the line, I'd be doing you guys dirty—starting a whole new arc in Chapter 2, Episode 1, only to suddenly hit the brakes and drop a three-year skip in Episode 2. That would leave a ton of character development hanging, making the story feel messy and disjointed—like setting up a big moment, only to pretend it never happened.

Now, don't get me wrong. Skipping ahead early still means we'll be sacrificing some character growth. But here's the difference: we’ll only be skipping minor developments, the kind that can be easily covered through small bits of exposition. This way, we're not completely abandoning anything—we're just streamlining the transition and starting pseudo-fresh with everyone.

That said, to make everything flow smoothly, we need to tweak how Episode 4 of Chapter 1 ended. Nothing major—just removing the part where Shu talks about Kei's birthday. That little detail is what's tying Chapter 1 to a specific point in time, and by cutting it, we can leave things on a clean slate and seamlessly introduce our plans at the start of Chapter 2.

But don't worry—the plan itself hasn't changed. We're still going to see Kei's birthday celebration, just three years later. The core of the story remains the same—this just ensures it unfolds in a way that actually makes sense.

So, what did I do to the girls?

Since Leah's comeback ties directly into Emma's 3rd and final arc, let's check her out first.Honestly? I barely touched her. No, seriously. All I did was shift her center bangs to the side, push her hair closer to her cheeks, remove that messy blush, expand her iris mask, and slightly darken her lips. Oh, and I added a little extra flair with some uneven side bangs. That's it. No crazy character maker wizardry—no endless hours tweaking sliders like a mad scientist. Turns out, her bangs were just gatekeeping her beauty all along.

Now, this minx right here…I've spent days working on Freya. And yeah, I get it—this is a huge change. But I'll be real with you: this one's personal. There are some characters I've made that, for whatever reason, just don't sit right with me anymore. And Freya is one of them.

All through Chapter 1, I kept holding myself back from fixing her. I tried small tweaks—hair swaps, minor improvements—but nothing was cutting it. She was just… impossible to work with. If you go back and check Chapter 1, you'll notice almost all her renders are low-angle shots. Normally, those angles are used to make a character look powerful or imposing, but with Freya? That wasn't the goal. It was literally the only angle where she looked halfway decent to me.

So yeah, this redesign was long overdue.

Now, let's talk about what actually changed.

Her biggest flaw was her eyes. They were structured to point outward—away from her nose—which gave her this awkward, bulging effect. Combine that with her sharp jawline and deep-set cheeks, and it was an absolute nightmare trying to find a flattering shot. Every time I tried, it felt like fighting an uphill battle.

So, I did a ton of tweaking (some real character-design fuckery) to fix all these issues. And the result is what you’re looking at right now. Am I happy with how she turned out? HELL YES. She looks way prettier now—even better than her sister. (Sorry, Aine. I don't wanna play with you anymore. 😅)

That being said, there's still one more major change to Freya that I can't reveal just yet—but you’ll see it once we hit Chapter 2.

I know she's got a lot of fans out there, and if this redesign isn't your cup of tea, I genuinely apologize. But this was something I had to do.

After Freya, it's only fair to move on to her sister.Compared to the last two, Aine's changes are pretty minimal. Just a few tweaks here and there—plus the new hair, of course.

I tightened up her temple width, gave her sharper eyes, and widened her iris mask. That’s it. No crazy overhauls, no drastic redesigns. Does she look at least three years older? I'd say so. But honestly, we didn't need to do much—Aine has always been one of the more mature-looking characters anyway.

If you've seen her latest wallpaper, then yep—that's her now.

*nervous laugh* Forgive me, oh Lord, for I have sinned.Sky... oh dear...

She was already adorable before, but this new hairstyle? Absolute angel. As for the rest of her tweaks—nothing major, just like Aine. Sharper eyes, slightly lower eyebrows. That's it. Simple, but effective.

Does she look three years older?

Hell no. 🤣

But you know what? That's her charm. And I wouldn't dare take that away from her.

"Because tuh-noit will be the noit that I will fall fer yeww... over againnn, don't make me change muh mooiiindd!" 🎤[Shoutout to Maple for pointing out what she was missing, and to Kainan for the final result!]

Klara's improvements are a mix of Emma and Freya's case. Don't get me wrong—there was nothing horribly wrong with her original look. But when I really sat down and stared at her, I could tell she was missing something. She lacked... depth.

I spent countless hours trying to figure out what it was, and in the end? It all came down to makeup. That's it. No drastic facial restructuring, no major tweaks—just makeup. Oh, and a hair color change, but that's about it.

I originally considered leaning into a more emo/gothic vibe to make her design better reflect her character. But too much makeup completely changed her. At that point, she didn't feel like Klara anymore. So I had to dial it back. It doesn't need to be over the top—as long as both you and I can see the vision, that's more than enough.

Given the recent events in the story, I'd also say her transformation makes the most sense out of all the characters. The chains that once held her back are broken now. And in Chapter 2, Episode 1, we'll finally get to see who Klara is without them.

(Yes, I have a strong fondness for goth girls.) 😄

"DON'T WASTE YOUR TIME ON ME, YOU'RE OLREADY THE VOICE INSOIDE MOI YEDD!!!!!!!" 🎤🎤🎤

Now, the rest of the girls didn't need any tweaks. No redesigns, no major touch-ups—they're already perfect as they are.

That said, I did give them something fresh—a new, more prominent hairstyle. Just a little change to keep things interesting, but nothing that messes with their original charm.

BUT! I'm in the middle of a serious dilemma with Gwen.

Both hairstyle options are solid, so I'm stuck—I literally can't choose. Help me out in the comments! Do we stick with her old look, or do we switch things up with a fresh style? Do we make a poll for it?

Either way, she already looks older than everyone else, no matter which one she rocks. So honestly? I'm cool with whatever you guys decide.

My thoughts about all these?

Well… I know I can't make everyone happy or get unanimous approval on these changes. That's just how it is.

But hey, I hope you guys are on board.

These will be their final looks—locked in until the game is completed. No more tweaks, no more second-guessing. This is it.

A couple more things…

First off, we're about to completely overhaul MBML's UI from the ground up. Yeah, I know—I said the current design was final, but I've got an expert on board now, and there's no way I'm passing up this opportunity to make it even better. 😆

I'm not sure yet if this will break your save files, so consider this a heads-up—just in case.

Lastly, I'm pretty sure most of you know Caribdis (and if you don't—WHY??). He's the dev behind Eternum and also a friend of mine. You might have heard about his situation with a certain music platform, and unfortunately, it affects me too.

He and I source our music from the same place, and since they're getting out of hand, I have no choice but to stop using them as well.

The good news? I found another platform that allows their music to be used in NSFW projects, and I've already secured permission. The bad news? I'm not 100% confident in their quality just yet.

I'll find out soon enough, but if you notice a dip in music quality, well… now you know why.

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And that's a wrap! 🎬

You made it to the end! 🎉 Seriously, thank you for taking the time to read through everything. I appreciate it more than you know.

Now, don't leave me hanging—drop your thoughts in the comments! 😅 I wanna hear what you think.

As always, take care and have an awesome day! 🚀

-NiiChan

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RoyleKiller21

For me personally, i like Gwen’s hair as it is, i feel like it suits her personality better than the short hair does

Dumbo

Please keep gwens longer hair man the way her hair looked in her house was so insane i kinda fell in love bruh 😭

Ivanov95

The short hair gives her a "bossy" vibe, which Gwen really isn't imho. So her normal hair is better.

pie

both hair styles for gwen are great but if i had to choose i think i personally like the short hair a tiny bit more

AlanDJB

short hair gwen looks younger than long hair gwen so i would keep her hair longer (also added bonus hair pull during sex) side note with short hair she looks way to much like my RL sister and i DONT want that image in my head...

srenic

i liked sky's older hair but this fits her too anyway so who cares. about gwen tho, the shorter hair doesnt fit her appearance or her character imo. everything else is fine if u ask me but thats just my opinion

NiiChan

I see a lot of people betting on her old hair. Just so you guys know, the short hair is only a thing I found that fits her somehow, so might as well just throw it in there. Not really expecting it to win. We can always find a tied up version if she needs it.

Fanex

Keep Gwen's current style man she looks like a completely different character with the short one

白榆

Emma is not good-looking at all. Can you please not change her? I am very disappointed 😞

xBeandon

Will anything happen between MC and Naomi during the time skip? Also will it be 3 years and still no return of Lily?

Random Homie

Omy, I'm gonna miss old Freya, she was my favorite little devil. None of the retouched models look bad, I think with Freya I just really liked her short hairstyle along with her petite build (gave her a tom boyish look that goes well with her attitude) but o well, Ill get used to her more mature look. Notes on other girls: Sky looks absolutely stunning with her new do, Klara looks like she's about to leave the 3rd dimension and enter the 4th (for some reason her new makeup really gives me a stronger impression of realism), I'll miss Moon's glasses (it would be cool if they could make a cameo appearance on her face for a scene or even a slide or 2, purely for nostalgia sake), and I like the short hair do on Gwen. Godspeed on chapter 2, and many more! Homie, out!

Nameless Knight

Well if you ask me the new charecter design is good like really good only think is if i did the sky i am probably not use that hair model but it isnt bad just diffrent and in the Gwens case well with her short hair shes gives like Jess vibes i think our Mc's boss in burger joint (ı sure need to play one more time i start to forgot names)

Darkzara

Both of Gwen's hairstyle is good. But she has always been a long hair kinda girl to me. So I vote for long hair.

Oli

I love Gwen so much and I like her more with longer hair. Suits her better. But do whatever you have to do, she'll always be nubmer 1 in my heart! Also Freya looks hawt! Wanna see more renders with her new face and hair!

青丘斛湖

It's quite shocking to see this news. I took these pictures and asked many people.On the whole, in our opinion, the changes of sky,moon and klara are very good. But others, especially Amy and Emma, please don't change it like this. In our eyes, the original shape is very consistent with the character. As for Gwen's changes, I think both of them are very beautiful.

青丘斛湖

Okay, in fact, i likeGwen′s long hair more

Indigo

Hi nii, can you spoil a little bit about which of the songs will be removed ? Cause the songs is truly the soul of your works and the main attraction to me. Gwen and Emma’s songs is truly touched my heart!!!

Kane0ne

Both hair are really nice but i prefer the Longhair Gwen

Ranfis

I will be ok whit the changes you will made.

NiiChan

Nothing will be removed. I'll just stop getting tracks from the platform.

Indigo

Oh, what a relief!!!

Brooooose

Long hair for Gwen... definitely!

Perverted Tea House

Ok, with changes: Emma is even hotter. Freya is way hotter. Sky much better. Aine looks like she's 35. Klara 300% better. Longhair Gwen is ok, the other looks 35. I wanted to add, about the Freys changes: "technical" changes are not optional. If a dev feels like they must be done, they must be done. Period. Tbh you did a great job hiding the problem because i didn't notice it until today 🤣

Joe Redd

Solid changes, aside from Gwen everybody looks better after updating their looks (and damn, Sky indeed looks like and angel :D). As for Gwen - as mentioned above, old look is imo much better choice, so long hair all the way. Also regarding time skip - personally I see it as a good thing, it lets the story to have more depth and makes it more realistic. Some AVNs wrap up the whole world-changing plot within a week in-game time, which often is kinda strange when you think about it. So great job with redesigns Nii and good luck with next episode!

Wojciech Kaczmarek

Oh God, please do not use this abomination on the second Gwen picture (tle short corporate annoying bitch hairstyle)! Rest is fine :)

Norman Light

Emma's look is perfect ngl, I've always felt something was off with the way her bangs were before. But now that it's been dealt with she looks absolutely gorgeous. In gwen's case tho, her long hair suits her the best..Also, is the redhead be returning anytime soon after the time skip..?

NiiChan

XD NAh, I don't think the short one has any chance.

Lost

they are all nices and lovey looking with the new look alot better looking keep up the great work with MBML and those same look with the other game be nice too see xd

Messè

I really dig the changes and the philosophy behind the decisions making. I can't wait to see them implemented as more updates get released. I think I really see the glow-up with Sky, especially.

Gregorrush

time skip is ok and Gwen with long hair is better for me

SillyGoose

Looking good! Just one question regarding ghe music. Did you also have to change existing music like Caribdis was forced to do? I know he had to quickly change like 60 songs. Did you also have to change some music or are you doing it to prevent any future problems or do you keep the music as long as they don't approach you?

Tridib Ghosh

All the changes of the girls are fantastic...but it is only a request if possible can you please change the hairstyle of the mc and colour it dark black..

TDS

Most are good changes visually. As for the when and where to do the timeskip: Writer's prerogative. Gwen's hairstyle? Will be a subjective choice. I prefer girls with long hair. :)

Jorge C.

Honestly Nii, I'm glad. I really enjoyed the results of the redesigns in Sicae, and I'm glad the MBML girls get to have the same treatment. To me, they're all improvements here, and the logic of the timejump is solid. They do look older. I hope you're bold with it, and go somewhere completely unexpected. As for Gwen, I would personally go for the option with longer hair. I feel like short, silver hair is more Jess' style.

king2cody22

The old look for Gwen is peak definitely prefer it. (I just love that long hair on her.)

Banzai87

Long hair for Gwen

NiiChan

I'll be keeping them, so long as they don't knock on my door.

Frostbit

Good cause it's a fucking travesty.

Frostbit

For the love of god I hope you can pull this off. A 3 year time skip has more of a chance to cause a complete capsize rather than things to just go sideways. Either way a lot of people are going to hate it and feel robbed of any character development missed.

Marco Newgate

I love most of the redesigns. You nailed the looking older aspect for each of them. However, I like Gwen's older look than the new one. I have no real opinion on Aine's new look.(I hate Aine with a passion.) Regarding other things. The time skip I'm nerv-cited about. I'm can't wait for to see the updated world, but like you said only minor changes to characters happened off screen. I don't buy that 3 years past and nothing "major" happened to them. I wouldn't prefer a one off line to be the catch up for me, but rather quick flash back So, you're bringing the little one from Emma's solo ending to main timeline. Does that mean Emma's solo ending was only 3 years into the future as well? Aside from this update which i still have some other theories story wise now. I do have one other question. Would Aine be required for any form of a Harem ending? If not awesome!!!! If she's required well....fuck I really hope not..

Timbit

I have no issues with any of the changes ... its your story, you do it the way you want. As for Gwen ... prefer the original/older version better.

Mrityu

Honestly all look good but I do prefer Gwen's original look. Idk why but her new look just doesn't sit right with me. Btw good luck with the time skip. It won't be easy to pull off.

Zanxin

I extremely fall in love with the new version of Freya,grown up is great!and I love Aine as well,looking forward to your work!!

Hhh

I think emma's new look is very good, she looks younger and gwen should keep her long hair and Aine's looks more mature than the old version. As for the other changes, you did a great job thank you.

Gethsah

Please please keep the original hair style for Gwen. I like all the rest except for Freya's new hair style, I thought the old one was more unique to her. I am ok with it and everything except shortening Gwen's hair. I am curious about the skip, will MC and Klara not have stared a relationship in all that time? Maybe I am forgetting something. A fresh playthrough may be a good idea.

RMZ

I'm sorry to say, but you're very wrong about only missing on minor developments if you skip 3 years now. All the relationships with all the girls and the harem itself just started, so we're essentially just now entering the honeymoon phase where everyone is lovey-dovey and can't take their hands off each other. 3 years down the line, that's gone, completely, replaced with routines. We will be left feeling like we missed out massively, I guarantee it. No amount of "small exposition" can replace seeing those developments. How will you handle their intimacy? You have to keep in mind we will be missing out on 3 years of development of that as well. Are they all going to be the same? Are we suddenly confronted with kinks that developed 2 years ago? If so, it will be disruptive to their feel, if not, it will be highly unrealistic. Also, what about relationships between the girls that could've developed? Are we ignoring that entirely to please the NTR crybabies or do we get to choose who fell for who after the skip? I have NEVER seen it work for any AVN. Even the small time skip in Eternum where Orion went home to the UK was disruptive for no benefit, and that was just a week. If you need Leah to be older to make sense in the story, make her older in the solo ending. A retcon would be far less damaging than a time skip. With this and the drastic changes to Sicae, it really feels like it might be better to finish their stories quicker and start fresh with a third game to make your new vision of it happen. Edit: Oh and I forgot: What about character development in general? Think back to who you were 3 years ago. Doesn't seem like a long time right? Well 3 years ago you thought you wanted to create an AVN about a dude with orgasm inducing cooking skills. If you want to show realistic characters after a 3 year skip, they'd have to almost feel foreign or fake to us.

Z

I think everything looks great! Kinda preferred the old hair on Freya, but that is just a personal preference

DutchmanJan

That's a lot of stuff, but I love the changes. Emma still as beautiful as ever ;) All of them have really nice changes, even if they are small, like hair stuff. But Sky.... just, wow. You're right, she's even cuter now! And Freya does look a bit more mature this way, which makes sense with a 3-year skip. But it's really making her look sharper and more stylish, fitting better imo. Though I disagree with the statement about her sister: Aine is still beautiful and I'd pick her over her little sis still :p (Nobody above Emma for me though XD) When it comes to Gwen: my personal preference would go to her old, longer hair style. Nothing wrong with the short style, but the longer just fits her more in my opinion. Keep up the good work, Nii!

ExWNoS

Nii, quite a great changes on all Li overall!!! but i think Freya should be better with curly hair coz i feel like straight one might be a drastic change on her and regarding songs ,does Evelyn Ray one are included??

冰室

The graphics look great! All of these are reasonable changes. Of course, the old graphics are also great. So I hope that while the changes are reasonable, there will be some old graphics mixed in occasionally? (Of course, make sure it doesn't cause confusion) This will make the characters more vivid and like they have their own life. Finally, thank you for your efforts so that we can play such a great game.

KTN_Strokes

Most of the redesigns are great I love them but I think emmas old look is better. Now the time skip... Its very risky If you are confident in pulling it off I trust you but It is scary 3 years is a long time especially taking into account where ch1 p4 left off maybe a long flash back can help but thinking nothing major will change is very very optimistic but I will trust in your vision. Keep up the good work love both MBML and Sicae GL❤️

Wolf Channel

good evening, I like Gwen with loose hair and lengths, and the question of preservation will not work for those who have a harem branch, or is it not worth worrying about

duvignard .

hi I'm not a big fan of time jumps but hey when it's well done why not but i agree with RMZ a skip just after the start of the harem. in terms of looks I still prefer Freya and Gwen with their old look I find that short hair doesn't suit Gwen at all and for Freya if she has to keep almost the same length of hair I prefer the curly hair of the old cut and I think she loses too much on the side of the youngest of the group and for the big unrevealed change of Freya I hope limits one baby with the mc following their crazy first time "at the last second the pullout" and I hope she doesn't have a breast augmentation because she has grown, here are my impressions congratulations if you read to the end

Deano Van Dijk

the only thing i have to say is FUCK YOU FOR CALLING ME OUT AS A GACHA PLAYER, anyway keep up the good work. I think i enjoy old hair gwen more and everything else looks great!

NiiChan

Hey, I get where you're coming from, and I appreciate the honesty. You're not wrong to be concerned—skipping three years is a big deal, and if done poorly, it would feel like a massive loss. I get it. But here’s the thing—I'm not just going to slap on a text box saying, "Three years passed. Anyway, here’s what happened." That would suck. The goal isn’t to replace development with exposition—it’s to unravel it naturally over time, through interactions, choices, and moments that feel earned rather than dumped. Let’s break down your concerns, yeah? "We’d be missing out on the honeymoon phase." That’s fair, and I won’t pretend it’s not a shift. But the way I’m handling it, you’re not just waking up in a completely different reality where everything is settled and routine. You’ll still get to reconnect, relive moments, and see the impact of the past years—but in a way that feels organic, not bloated with filler scenes just to tick a box. "Intimacy and kinks will feel off." I’m not throwing in sudden, unexplained developments like, "Surprise, Freya’s into electroplay now, deal with it." Any changes will be introduced naturally, giving players the chance to react and engage rather than just being told, "This is how things are now." You’ll get moments where characters bring up things from the past, where new dynamics get tested, and where you, as the player, can respond and adapt rather than being railroaded. "What about relationships between the girls?" I hear you, and I’m not ignoring this. The dynamic between the characters won’t be static—you’ll discover how their relationships evolved, changed, or deepened in a way that makes sense. If certain characters grew closer (or didn’t), there will be ways to explore that and even have a say in it. I’m not just forcing predetermined outcomes. "No time skip has ever worked in an AVN." I’d argue it’s not about if a time skip works, but how it’s handled. If it’s done lazily? Yeah, it sucks. If it’s done right? It gives depth, growth, and lets us tell a better story without drowning in day-to-day fluff that slows things down. This isn’t me skipping because I’m rushing things—it’s because this is where the story picks up. And hey, if it ends up sucking, I’ll take that L. But I’m making damn sure it won’t. I appreciate the passion, and I get why this is a big deal to you. Trust me, I’m not gonna half-ass it. If you’re still skeptical, fair enough—but I think once you see how it’s implemented, you’ll get why I’m doing it this way. But if it fails, it fails. I'm only a human, not a robot. Oh right, I have an EDIT too: Let’s be clear on this—the girls aren’t forming relationships with each other during the timeskip. That’s not something I’m including, and it’s not something that’s going to be “revealed” out of nowhere. I get why you’re asking—some games use timeskips as an excuse to throw in sudden developments that players had no control over, but that’s not what I’m doing here. The focus remains on the relationships between the MC and the girls—not the girls sucking each other's viginas. This isn’t about “pleasing NTR crybabies” or anything like that. It’s about staying consistent with the dynamic I’ve built. The story is centered around your connections with them, and that isn’t going to change just because time has passed. So no, you’re not going to suddenly find out two of the girls are fingering each other behind your back. That’s just not how I’m handling this. The harem stays your harem. Period.

Leo

Well i like the changes and about the Gwen hair i think she looks better in the long, but doing short would bé better since its 3 years.

Kirbyy a Dayag

Good work absolutely love it the new design for character (Huhuh i want old freya that new freya is just not my type lmao) But its still good 😹 Shes already perfect freya short hair is definitely fit for her

8008sddd

I prefer Gwen with long hair.

NiiChan

"With this and the drastic changes to Sicae, it really feels like it might be better to finish their stories quicker and start fresh with a third game to make your new vision of it happen." If anything, what I don't get is you telling me to fuck up both game's development.

Paul Wilson

I like Gwen the way she is, I wouldn't change her. All the other changes look amazing!

Kachou

If it after the time skip so it only make sense that they got a new hair style, otherwise it will be weird that they didn't change anything after a few year. And beside, the new hair style is good though, no complaint about it. Also, it good to know that they meeting Leah was a canon event, the little girl deserve a happy life with a family that she deserve to have. Im looking forward to see what you gonna cook, good luck with both life and this lovely game *Note: Not that i dislike it but i still think the short hair fit both Freya appearance and personality more than the new one. (Forgive me for the bad english)

🔥Phoenix🔥

Nooooooooo plz do NOT cut Gwen's hair! Keep it long! (I'm loving everyone else's new looks though! And I actually like the new look for Freya. Great work!) P.s. it's just personal but I really don't like the look of short hair and Gwen is possibly my favorite character. Having her hair short would ruin it for me 😆

taoyi long

嘿,我喜欢长发的Gwen!

月亮之上

尊敬的作者先生或女士我觉得月和格温没有改的必要,本来就做得很好看,再改就本人而言不好看了。

Mjoorn

Love the changes, Freya is my fav but the face had been bugging me also, new face looks amazing ~<3. Kinda miss ponytail gwen but new hair is nice.

Vinccool96

Emma’s Solo Ending? You mean The Canon Ending?

Sharps

All the character changes look great! I agree with everyone though, Gwen needs to keep her long hair. It just fits the personality. I'm sure you'll pull off the time skip! Cant wait to play it.

NiiChan

I think it's clear at this point. We'll be keeping Gwen's old/long hair style. :D

RMZ

Thanks for taking the time to respond! I certainly hope you're right, I do want you to be right. I just can't imagine it working, but maybe I'm wrong, we'll see. And about the girls going at it: I'm actually for it. A harem in itself is silly and completely unrealistic, we don't need to argue about that, but it gets a good bit more realistic if everyone is having fun with everyone, commune style. But I know you'd get some massive backlash on that (because of said crybabies), so I get it.

woozie

long hair Gwen!! everyone looks amazing ❤️‍🔥

NiiChan

Well.. let's just say that if I fail, I learn through it. I know this is a pretty optimistic plan, and a herculean task, but if it goes full circle back at me, I'm ready to receive the consequences. But the day after that, I'm a better creator. That's just how I do things. And nah, I like some deeper kinks myself, but I'm not into giving my girls away. So that will never happen.

tonymack21

Both Gwen's look good but I like the og longer the best I think. Everything else looks great. Especially Freya and Klara

AlexCrimson

To me : Gwen is just perfect with anything. So i wish you luck in future of the game.

EmptyVoid

Gwen with long hair is the only way I can imagine her

tran dat

Moon is the best

Cam Gaming

I honestly like these redesigns and my favorite one is Aine she was my favorite since the beginning and I won't change my mind and with Gwen I think you should keep her original look.

Marcus Gomez

Gwen with long hair really captures her essence more than

RMZ

Other guys, sure, but other girls that you're also involved with? I really don't see why people have trouble with it, but hey.

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ValiantWinter

they are all looking absolutely fantastic Nii.. really looking forward to seeing it all in action when the update releases.. on the Gwen debate.. I think she does look incredible with either option.. but if I absolutely had to choose on long or short.. I think that long might be the better option.. probably more than anything.. because it keeps things as they were.. with all these other things that are changing with this time jump.. having some things staying the same will help with the familiarity with the characters I think.. though thats just my 2 cents worth on it.. either option is going to slap anyways.. cannot wait to get back to spending time with all of these amazing ladies again once Sicae has its next update again though.. keep up the excellent work mate

Dmon

I always love insight into the minds of how creators work and think when working on their projects. I'm confident that these changes will be great in game as they are now as well, and it seems you are too! Also, Gwen with the longer hair just feels 'right' I guess? Though I'd be lying if I said that short hair look isn't one of my favorite looks with hair I've seen in a while.

temp614699b1

Gwen short hair option looks like a 'Karen' lady haircut, don't like it at all!!

Caffeinated

All of the changes look fantastic Nii, genuinely. As for Gwen, I have a personal bias in that I like short hair, so I would lean that way. But I think either one of them would look good. Freya looks incredible with the changes, well done!

William McCoy

I like the new looks. Definitely helps the story move along. If the update somehow breaks older saves, I'm fine with that since I like to do new saves anyway.

The5thKing

As Aine and Freya are supposed to be sisters, I'm glad the new look for Freya actually has more similarity to Aine than just purple eyes and black hair. She looks great now. As do all the others you did some redesigning for. As for Gwen, I'd vote to keep the long hair.

Magoo Doug

I loved the updates. Except for Gwen. She needs to keep her longer hair from before. The shorter hair makes her look like she aged way too much to me.

IG6721

Love Freya's new appearance. It looks like she has 'grown up' and I really like it. As far as Gwen those flowing locks are the best. She is an angel.

Ankit aakarsh

Wowww, i really like how you chose the looks that really suits their vibes perfectly ofcourse other than naomi who i think her previous look suited her vibe more perfectly as her personality is that of an easygoing/outgoing and decisive women which her previous look showed perfectly but the current look feels more mature,smart, understanding and caring women which is quite like aine's personality. but offcourse at the end i trust your judgment and this feeling might be just because i am comparing her way too much... As for gwen both her looks give completely different vibes as the long hair gives loving and caring vibes and the short hair gives mature, smart and decisive vibes quite like a ceo. Well both looks quite good so it all depends which vibe for gwen are you looking for in ep2 and at the end i think you should decide because only you know what her destiny and future is going to be. finally i really like your creativity and story, i really appreciate it. so always be confident and follow your heart... never hesitate to change whatever you think is right or will going to improve the story because whatever descision you are going to make will always be right.

Toph

I like Gwen's older hairstyle a lot more, that hairstyle on Gwen makes her style look a *lot* older than her actual age. I also would prefer Moon's new hair color should be *slightly* closer to her original black, it feels a bit too brunette on my display and I think others with strong HDR might agree lol But for all the others it's a perfect glow-up

tk

Please oh PLEASE don't give Gwen the short hair look. She looks so much better with her long flowing hair

alone.a

I think Gwen's old hairstyle is better

Dionatan Dioestar

The old Gwen hairstyle fit better even with a timeskip the younger ones looks a bit out of place but it's more like a personal opinion than a feedback, for me do the time skip now can be good and it's jus few years nothing too long or short so will be good to see when we play

先生 魏

Gwen's short hair looks ugly, but I still think it looks better before. Gwen gives me a feeling of being a gentle big sister. If you shave her short hair, it doesn't fit her personality.

SomeHelio

Hello NiiChan, I just want to ask a question regarding what the timeskip would somewhat entail. Is it a timeskip where in which the skip would place the story into the future where a committed relationship between currently uncommited love interests to the MC would be made to exist (effectively, skipping this part of character development) (say for example, Klara would be put into a committed relationship post time-skip, and her arc would more or less be lost). Or would it hopefully just be a skip to develop the general world and general relationships between characters and MC? Just wondering as the prior is not too appealing and has in the past, left a poor taste when done in other AVNs (which again, effectively skips the falling in love stage of character development). By the way, I personally like all the physical appearance changes made to a fair few of the characters, they're great!

Rei Yasuda

Please no short hair. It makes her look like a Karen, which is like the opposite of her personality. One of the things I dislike in media is when a character cuts their hair. There are very few instances where I don't dislike it. And what about Lily? Is she just gone from the story or is she coming back?

NiiChan

The latter. I'm not gonna shove anything down the player's throat. If there is, it's minimal.

Ledderlappen

Gwen should keep the long hair in my opinion

SomeHelio

Amazing, always prioritising player choice, please keep up the outstanding work. A deservedly beloved VN, you're one of a kind.

brokee z

But I prefer their original hairstyles Can you make an option for players? I think it's a good idea.Thank you!

kay1123

OK~OK. Frankly speaking, what I care about most is the plot content, so the changes of hairstyle and other are acceptable.

Arvas Dreven

Gwen's hair should remain long. I've always had a thing for girls with long hair and I consider her flowing locks to be ESSENTIAL to her character. Just my opinion. While nowhere near as important to me as Gwen's locks, Emma's new hairstyle is giving off major "Do you know who my husband is???!!!" with an unhealthy dose of "Let me speak to your manager!!!" It could work and I'm not going to fuss about it, but you asked for our opinion. Just please, don't cut my Goddesses' hair! I'm begging you!

NiiChan

Fair. I'll make them bald. XD

元帅 舔盆

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熊 熊

Gwen should keep the long hair in my opinion

Unfinished Senten

I also think that Gwen should keep the long hair

Mel

Just came to say I like how all the girls are looking, the tweaks you made to Freya look good but I prefer her old hairstyle honestly, it’s perfect for her. Not a huge fan of the longer straight hair.

Electron

I hate to be negative by Freyas new hair is a massive downgrade.

Styx2118

I am a fan of long hair in general so that has my vote! with context of a time skip i think all the changes make sense and like them! i look forward to the updates to both games!

sapper1975

I really liked old Freya model, but obviously it's your call, and she does look more like Aine now. I think Freya's older messy hair suited her better, b/c it fits her personality as the chaotic younger sister of Aine? But I have absolute confidence in what you're up to no matter what, so good luck!

墨墨

Please, don't change, dear Freya.😭😭😭

tk

That's some monkey's paws situation right here....

Mordalo

For those of us who are lame and totally late to the discovery of the genre as a whole, where would one like myself find and download CH1EP5? All of the media libraries linked in the original release post from 3 years ago are dead and itch.io even only has ch4. I suppose I could just be patient and wait for CH2 to come out and hope that download also includes ch1 but I was hoping maybe you'd still have it published somewhere? I'm leery about just downloading from anywhere cuz people suck and bad things happen when you try to download NSFW binaries from random sites. I look forward to experiencing your storytelling!

NiiChan

Please kindly check the About page. It contains the latest links. And yes, the very latest release is Chaper 1 Episode 4. Simply download that, it contains all of the previous episodes including the 7 episodes of prologue.

Mordalo

You're awesome, thanks!

Wolf bair

Please take your hands off Gwen...

RMZ

I completely missed your question about why I was calling for an early end to the other games. What I meant was that it's very obvious that your vision and goal for both has changed a big deal, to a point where it creates pretty harsh cuts in the story where suddenly everything is different. I know it's not feasible, but imho, it would've been better to "accept" that you were still growing as a writer when you started them, and finish your original visions for them. Then start fresh, just so it would all feel more cohesive.

NiiChan

If it's all just about kicking off the third game, then once MBML is wrapped up, I'll figure out what comes next. But right now, I've finally found solid ground with the current projects, and I’m not about to rush things. No doubt, Sicae has been through its fair share of twists and turns, but MBML has always stayed on course—from ESE to Chapter 1. The tonal shift was all for Moon’s arc. Once Chapter 2 rolls in, it's back to the usual slice-of-life vibe. The time skip isn’t just about Leah—it’s where the next chapter of the story naturally begins. This has been in the works for a long, long time, even before Chapter 1. Seeing them grown up was always part of the plan. If I back out now, I’d be betraying the vision I’ve had for MBML since... God knows when. Yeah, time skips are tricky. People have seen them crash and burn, or maybe they’re just not used to such a huge leap. But I’d rather take the plunge and see for myself if I can pull it off. Whether people stick around to support me or not, that’s their call. Either way, one thing’s for sure—I’m gonna learn a hell of a lot from this. That's just how I do things. And I will do risky stuff over, and over, and over again for the sake of learning. Without hesitation. EDIT: If people are only here to check on my success, and not how I *grow*, then... God, I sure hope that's not the case.

ikun

As a Genshin Impact player, I absolutely love your work! Please release Chapter 2 as soon as possible — the money will come pouring in like a freight train! 🚂💰

越就

Thanks for your hard work, creator.

越就

Gwen's hair doesn't have to be altered. It's already beautiful

z

Don't change Gwen's hair.😫

Ravenous

I've never been a fan of redesigns or changes to characters deep into a story. It always feels jarring and off putting to me. I get used to and love their looks and then suddenly they seem like a totally different person. So I do have some opinions here. Emma- liked her look before, new is fine I guess but doesn't really add anything to her already pretty look IMO. Sky- her old look was cuter, new one doesn't give me the sweet little sis vibes anymore. Aine- I prefer her older hair style, new one makes her look like some boring school teacher. Klara- new look is fine though the darker colours do make her seem harsher than her old sweeter look. Though maybe that's what you're going for. Moon- love her look, though I hope her hair stays midnight black, she looks so sexy with black, seems a bit grey with the highlights here though maybe that's my monitor or something. Now for the big two for me, my fave girls. Freya- I absolutely despise that new hair on her, I love her unique wavy messy look and cute blushing cheeks. That harsh straight hair doesn't suit her personality at all and just totally ruins her vibe IMO. Now she's just a tiny Aine and that's so dull. Gwen- Gwen should always, and I mean forever always, have long hair. I miss her ponytail look but am ok with her sexy hair down look. She 100% doesn't need and should never go with short hair. Doesn't suit her at all. Anyways, this is all just my opinion and you know what they say about those. I'm not even going to comment on the time skip thing in story telling. if you feel it's needed then so be it. In the end it's your game and you should do what you want with it. You won't be able to please every one of us so it's impossible to try. Just put out what you feel is your best work and hope the largest portion of us appreciate and enjoy it. I hope for the best. /Thumbs Up!

Konrad Witek

I also vote for long haired Gwen :)

brokee z

Please, please don't change Gwen's hairstyle😭😭

谢谢

there's no need to change Freya and Sky😔

CV_6

Come on!

66哥

I prefer Freya.

Cee2Gin

the changes are impressive but please leave out moon and more story for moon and aine. that's all for me

Delan Chemusora

I like the new looks for everyone except Gwen

PleasantP413

changes are looking great, but i prefer gwen's long hair.

cxc666

I prefer Freya before the change.

Houseofcards87

LONG HAIR GWEN IS BEST GWEN! :-) Totally get the need for time skips, hell its practically a given in many long running anime, you've done amazing bringing out full emotions through your writing, I look forward to the future! You got my support!

Scythelord

I generally don't like major changes to characters because it makes them feel like different people, but I'm actually ok with the changes you've made, including Freya as I wasn't the biggest fan of hers beforehand. The only one I was only slightly hesitant on is Klara and that was because she goes from a natural red head to an obviously dyed red. But after looking at her for a while the changes made sense somewhat, especially with who she is. As for Gwen, long hair all day every day. I believe that was actually my personal issue with Freya actually. I prefer women have longer hair. Short hair is never my thing.

Allanon

Thanks for the detailed explanation, it is absolut understandeble. Timeskipps are sometimes necessary. I think all the Charakter changes looks great, except for Gwen. Please don't change Gwens beautiful long hair. Your story is amazing and I can't wait for Chapter 2. Keep up the amazing work!

zeus

Old gwen is good. We need some glasses goddeses in the game also.

Deathgod72

Keep Gwen's hair long the short style just doesn't feel right.

Arnav Jain

old gwen is the best. With these short hair she seems like Hera's relative or you can say Jess but with white hair

Mister Mackerel

I can't wait to see how everyone has changed. With Gwen I prefer her original style or the long hair she did at her mom's party. The short hair looks Karenish.

明倫 江

Yeah me too , I like the original style of Gwen

Mike2051

I like Gwen's older hair quite honestly. Same goes for Freya, could she maybe switch between the new and old hairstyle from time to time? But what I miss the MOST is Aine with her long loose hair.

Hazuki

Gwen go without a doubt long hair. And the other aside from emy. I love their original hair. It's already perfect anyway

Hazuki

New emy rock btw xD

Gwen_Worshipper

Nah, Gwen looks stunning with long hairs, don't changer her hair pretty please

lzJackson

Hello nii, I hope you still remember your Twitter account (of course it was made in the name of Freya, keep updating her!) I won't give any good advice about Gwen's hair (because I'm a standard white hair lover [害羞]〃∀〃 As long as she doesn't change her hair color, I love her most ^3^[亲亲]) Hahaha sorry about the music thing, Caribdis' Eternum and Niichan's mbml are my favorite visual novels, hopefully getting better![玫瑰][玫瑰] Finally, wish Niichan all the best![爱心][爱心]

Benjamin Saunders

Gwen looks way better with long hair in my opinion please do not change her

MrMeowgi

If gwens hair must be changed, i think keeping the length longer is better than shorter. Style is up for debate but for me, the length has to stay long

Sultan Khan

Gwen needs looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong hair

Koltovince

This might be very late, but I think long haired Gwen is the way to go. Mainly because its the hairstyle Kei complemented Gwen in, and they have history with that hair style. Although the other Gwen still looks amazing, it kind of makes her look a bit too old.

NiiChan

She's one of the older ones that didn't have to change much. And yeah, we're keeping the long hair.

Joe vanrey Bacuyag

Wait what about lily is she coming back to the story please don't ditch her permanently she a good character and she never have a sex scene in chapter 1 NiiChan.

TAxel

Moon looks amazing

Annie simper

Yk, what you did actually cooked with long hair. Gwen, the long hair keeps her attractive, and I'm sure that I'm late, but it seems longer haired. Gwen actually won (Don't work too much you will get tired and take care :3)

Hero 2025

will i look forward to the time skipped I always thought about what happened to Leah's is she going to die if we don't go to solo endings I m happy she survived and the new changes are good except for short hair Gwen but we will see how it will look

Dashman

Thought you and carb knew each others work (both games feel like they can be stories in a shared space and love both of them... thre both unique but leave you on edge of seat). Love the redesigns.

大魏君王

when can we play the second part.i can't wait(*^ω^*)

Thenor Stéphane

Go! For real just go ready for it can't wait for it like all time

个逼 某

In fact, it is enough to make the male protagonist's modeling more handsome.

Sharv

Everything looks fantastic! I prefer the old hairstyle for Gwen, but you're rocking it either way.

kai

Gwen's previous hairstyle was a bit better

Ilaffy_25

Hey, all of these changes are really cool! i started playing the game a couple of weeks ago and it's awesome! I'd love you to keep the long hairstyle on Gwen. I'm really looking forward to see what else you have in store for us so keep going with the good work!

Avaricious

I'm on board with the new looks, as such, I think Gwen should get the new hair too. I think it would be strange if she didn't tbh. I'm also not worried about the save files either as I tend to replay for every new update on these kinds of games anyway. So all is good! Thanks for keeping us in the loop and I can't wait to see how it turns out! Have a good one bud!

Crossdieplier

The new hairstyles are good, though I like the old hairstyle of Gwen but we do trust you, do what you think is best for the story

Rivan Raby

Bro, I'm really waiting for the update for chapter 2 this time, hopefully it can be done quickly :)

Noble

I like Gwen with long hair. A new hairstyle is great but keep the long hair. It major an option maybe? I don’t know if that’s too much work.

DigDugDog

I like Gwen just the way she is, perfection needs no tweaks

i am the truth

i just saw the post but if my vote counts definitely keeps gwen's long hair

PlushyBucket

Definitely agree with most the posts I read about keeping Gwen’s hair long whether it’s the old style from chapter 1 or a new look I would just keep the long hair it in my opinion just fitting her better over all